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Title: You Give Me Something

Well, I didn't hate it. ^_^

I loved it.

You used a song I love very much as well, so that didn't hurt.

It was portrayed nicely, it felt sincere. I almost don't want him to allow her back. He loves her, I know that, but she's hurting him. As if by not admitting it, by closing herself  off to the idea, even, is not ruining her good thing without the help of the "L" word.

Yes, I'm getting involved in the feelings of fictional characters, lol, so you can tell how I feel about it.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/10 10:16 am

Title: You Give Me Something

Beautiful story and well written - I enjoyed it very much!



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Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 04:58 pm

Title: You Give Me Something

Beautifully written story about being hurt and unable to explain why we fear what we fear, imagined or real.



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Reviewer: Realstone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/02/10 05:37 am

Title: You Give Me Something

Thanks for a great read.

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Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/10 07:14 pm

Title: You Give Me Something

I loved it. It's sad and desperate and beautiful all wrapped up together. I totally understand the girl in the story ... I am her.

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Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 10:31 pm

Title: You Give Me Something

I loved it. So sad. What is she afraid of? Good job!

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Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 07:51 pm

Title: You Give Me Something

So she does love him back!!!

At least there is hope. If he is patient a little longer, maybe she will confront what she is running from, what she is afraid of revealing. If not, she needs to let him go.

This story is good either as a short or as the beginning to an exploration of the characters' relationship.

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing!!



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Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 11:42 am

Title: You Give Me Something

Interesting story but seems as if she was running from something and afraid to take a chance on love.

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Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 06:26 am

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