Love the story. When will u update
Author's Response: Thanks e! Next chapter is up and hopefully updates following at a more frequent rate, thanks for reading!
Date: 10/10/08 07:26 pm
Great update, loving the date and the back and forth between them. They each have the other's number which I like, and I also think it's throwing Audre a bit off balance. Which is exactly what she needs maybe.:)
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah Audre is definitely off balance but Christian's there to catch her so it's all good. I like writing a story where the cards are pretty much all out on the table that's a great foundation for a relationship I think. Thanks for the review and for reading and for the oh so lovely stars they do a girl's heart good! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/09/08 06:30 am
Well that got off to a rocky start. I love your description of the resturaunt. Those are the kinds of places I love to find. And bull testicles--yeah, I always ask the waitress what the heck stuff is before I order. Circle strange menus with care.
Like that they're getting all that stuff out in the open so soon. Most romantic couples take ten chapters to get where Christian and Audre already are so it's refreshing. Looking forward to the continuation.
Oh and I wish I had majored in art history instead of poli sci. I love politics but I could have majored in knitting and went to law school.
Author's Response: YEah I love those kind of places as well, the off the beaten path places have the best food I think! Yeah bull testies may work for some but I'm not so adventurous and neither is Audre hahaha. I really wanted this story to be not so much about the chase but how Audre grows by herself and through her relationship with Christian so there isn't going to be a whole lot of angst and mixed signals going on. Christian is not one to shy away from getting what he wants. No kidding about the knitting thing turns out your undergrad major has nothing to do with law school and usually doesn't begin to prepare you for it! I happened to have sucked at Art History but in my head I would've loved to major in it as well so kind of living out my fantasy through Audre hahaha. Thanks for the review and reading and the stars they are so awesome! Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/09/08 11:14 pm
Christian is a fun loving dude! He doesn't seem to take anything seriously and I think that's exactly what Audre needs. The maybe date was cute and I can't wait to see their relationship evolve. Great update!
Author's Response: Yeah Christian's pretty fun though he has his. . .shall we say intense moments hahaha. Yeah I definitely wanted to right a good old fashioned love story so I'm having a lot of fun setting the tone between them and not just having them jump right into bed. Thanks for the review and the stars and for reading!
[Report This]Date: 19/09/08 07:15 pm
Too damn short! LOL
Great imagery. I could see the restaurant and almost smell the food. Going to eat now. I hope when I get back you'll have delivered part 2. :)
Author's Response: I know that was kind of a tease wasn't it lol. Yeah it was inspired by a restaurant I went to and my mouth was kind of watering when I wrote it! The finale of the date is coming up but not today hahahaha. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/08 02:05 am
Please update soon
Author's Response: I working on it! Thanks for reading and the stars.
[Report This]Date: 19/09/08 02:03 am
In case you dont read TST first, I will post my comment here too:
SO G, what you're saying is, because you are teasing us relentlessly with the no sexin' right now, its going to be SUPER HAWT FREAKY good!? Because there is really no other reason why you would torture use like this. HA HA
Author's Response: Yeah so here's the deal, without spilling the beans too much I'll just say that I wanted Audre's story to be one of kind of a discovery of all sorts. She's going to hold out a little bit (not a lot just a little) but when the cork gets popped, it really gets popped in a super hawt freaky deaky way hahahaha. Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/09/08 10:58 pm