This was such a great, funny chapter Greato! This made me LMAO:
"Stevie Wonder, he did the same thing they did only with more socially relevant lyrics AND he did it blind."
And I have to agree with Audre about the Beatles... I personally think they were fantastic writers but when it came to making music not so much... Hell, they could barely play their instruments. Some peeps would kill me if they heard me say that but I just don't give a shit! :)
I really enjoyed the entire date. It was fun and informative. We really got to get a better glimpse into them as individuals. The kiss was super cute and I can not wait to see these two some more. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! We are musical twins after all. I had fun writing the date, it was for me how a perfect date would unfold. . .except there would've been some sex in the end hehehe. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/11/08 03:09 am
Aw. This blows.
I got to the tenth chapter and had to refresh 3 times thinking that i missed the next button to continue, only to be dismayed by the fact that it wasn't up yet. See a story like this is exctly why i usually refuse to read incomplete stories.
NE way amazing, i'm hooked and PLEASE More.
Author's Response: I'm sorry about that! I'm working as fast as I can to catch up and get the story wrapped up. Thanks for reading and the great review! Reviewer: Jaded Tranquility Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 07:22 am
"You did not just say that!"
"I did and I stand by it, the Beatles are so overrated it's ridiculous."
"The Beatles are not overrated, they are the greatest band in the history of music."
"What exactly made them great other than the fact that they had good historical timing and mastered the art of fucking up the blues and marketing it to the masses?"
Okay, that cracked me up. Audre's awesome and I loved her back and forth with Christian. And Tres leches *drools*. That's an aweseome date.
Love their connect and how he's slowly chipping away at her defenses. The kiss was hot and the texting was funny as hell.
Great update. Looking forward to more of these two.
Author's Response: Yeah have to say that was a little bit of me talking there hahaha. I love setting the tone between Christian and Audre and having a good old fashion love story where they get to know each other. To me this would be a kind of ideal date so thanks for indulging me on that. And yes Tres Leches is the bomb, on my way to get some right now actually! And Jenelle had to be in the cut because she wants our girl to score as much as we do hahaha. Thanks so much for the great review and the stars and for reading! Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 07:43 pm
Because I don't need to try something to know whether or not I'll like it. I know myself well enough to deduce the probability of whether or not it would be something that I'd enjoy and I can assure you that snowboarding is one of those things that I probably will not enjoy."
Preach it sister. Never have, never will go snowboarding, I choose life. Plus, I'm a bit of a wuss.
and Christian were supposed to split a Tres Leches cake but she was practically inhaling the whole thing by herself, the decadent cake melting in her mouth
Is that not the best cake you've ever tasted? Whoever the hell thought of soaking cake in milk, I want to f*cking kiss him/her.
The principle that says I don't like actors that seem like douchebags
Amen to that, that includes you Russell Crowe.
That kiss was hot and sweet at the same time, I right there with Audre. Wanted more. :) But I can wait, because it seems like Christian's worth it. The date was adorable, exactly what she needed I think.
Great update, I'm so glad to see another chapter in this story. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks TBG! Yeah I choose life too! Looks really cool but think I'm sticking with the Wii version hahaha. And Tres Leches is wonderful, my mouth was watering just writing about it! I have to admit I don't let the douchebag factor deter me necessarily but Christian just seemed like the type of guy that would feel that way hahaha. Christian is definitely worth the wait and Audre is going to find that out! Thanks so much for reading and the review and stars!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/08 09:03 am
*lovemboth does a back flip and a toe touch* Woo hoo, greato is back and she updated one of my favorite stories!
I loved their convo. The non-date was so realistic and it moved at a great pace. So glad Christian kissed her since it wasn't a date and all. LOL
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Woo hoo I'm back! I wanted the date to be kind of realistic I was really aiming for writing a nice sweet boy meets girl kind of story with Christian and Audre and I wanted for them to really get to know each other. You know my boy Christian had to get a sample, that's why I love him! Thanks again for your patience and your great reviews and stars! Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 05:02 am
can u feel it to, oh yeah this is the crest to the fall just make it good looking forward to the next read..
cheers
Author's Response: hahaha thanks! The fireworks are coming I promise I feel like I've built it up now have no choice but to deliver hahaha. Thanks for reading and for the review! Reviewer: liquor_front_poker_back Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/10/08 05:00 am