Lovely! I really like Juanpa! Well, all of Hilts buddies are cool as hell and I'd love to hang with them. Fun times! All the guy gossiping was great and I loved the bonding over shots between Audre and Mags!
Christian is so damn adorable! Really, can I have him? I thought the note was sweet and funny and real! Not that fake ass kisses and hugs b.s. Great job GreatO! I'm so, so glad you're back and this story is love! :)
Author's Response: Thanks chica! I'm so stoked you are enjoying this story and I do enjoy Hilts' friends they are a riot, isn't it funny how guys can be just as gossipy as females even though they try to pretend otherwise. And it was a great opportunity to show a less buttoned up side to Audre. Thanks for reading, the stars the great review! Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/04/09 05:42 am
Girl you are back and in full effect!
I love your conversations. I get so drawn in to them. They flow naturally, while revealing the characters. I am so happy to see Audre enjoying herself and letting loose and doing and saying things that are not like her. I love Chris' friends too...I loved the huffy conversation.
Audre sure had Chris' attention with that kiss and she is definitely going to regret that conversation in the morning.
"Thank you. Are you a freak?"
"Do you spank?"
The one that guys fantasize about. Don't get me wrong, I know I'm attractive, and smart, funny, and loveable."
"Don't forget modest."
These lines were absolutely hilarious!
Great update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Conversations are my favorites but I get really nervous because I want them to be funny but not too over the top! I'm glad you liked that, Audre gets a bit loose when the alcohol is flowing hahaha. thanks again for reading and for the awesome reviews, they're always fun to read. Reviewer: Harlen Winters Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/09 07:28 pm