THAT BASTARD!!!! WHY WOULD HE DO THAT WHEN HE KNEW AUDRE WANTED TO MARRY HIM?! That had to hurt!!! I feel like crying myself....that dude was with Audre 4 or 5 years and he's with Cassandra 4 or 5 months and he's ready to get married???? FOUL!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/10 04:04 am
LOL. Yup. I knew I was going to hate Greg. And yup. That was a prime example of a "she really shoulda strangled the jackass" moment.
Damn, that was tacky!! Not only do you not attempt to upstage the bride in what you wear but you do not steal the show by making a proposal in the middle of toasting the newlyweds... in front of your former girlfriend and her friends!!
Great story!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:45 pm
Oh hell naw! No he did not propose to that red dress wearing, you-know-what!
For shame, Greg, for shame!!!
This story is funny as hell, loved the first revenge fantasy!
-Noel
Author's Response:
Greg isn't right, he'll get his those. . .
Glad you liked that, I must admit I've had the same revenge fantasy hahaha. Thank you for reading and commenting and the stars!
Reviewer: N.Mahana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/09 08:22 am
Hi! I'm enjoying this story very much!! I like the humor threaded throughout the chapters. I couldn't believe Greg proposed at the wedding reception! What the....???? LOL!
I think Audre needed to take more than one bottle of champagne. *grin*
I'm off to read the rest of the chapters! :-)
Author's Response: Hi pinkrose so glad you are enjoying it! This is my first crack at true comedy so I was extremely nervous so I'm relieved you like the humor in there. Greg isn't right but Audre deserves better. Though she get a crack at some revenge later on, we'll see! Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Reviewer: pinkrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/08 03:12 am
Cassandra was crying, she has an ugly cry face.
Dude that was funny as hell.
Poor Audre, that had to hurt. Slap in the face really. Drink up girl.
Author's Response:
LOL, I'm glad you liked that. It's funny the random thoughts that will pop into our heads in dark moments! Audre definitely took one on the chin, but she'll get back up like a champ.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 23/07/08 05:54 pm
Okay, was LOL at that revenge fantasy.
“Who are they?”
“Just an ex and his homely girlfriend.” Boris looked them over, laughing.
Loved that line. And excuse me, but what kind of ass proposes during a best man toast at someone else's wedding? If I was Lisa I would yank that ring from his hand and set him and his new fiance on their merry way. Ahem.....but that's just me.
Great chapters.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked that! I thought that was the quitessential revenge fantasy when you break up with someone.
He's a selfish jerk no doubt. Lisa was not happy hahaha.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/07/08 04:21 pm