Please update soon.
Thank you
Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/06/09 11:49 pm
Hi GreatO, I am so happy for Audre, that she finally knows what it really feels like to be desired and wanted. I am so glad Chris was the man to show her. I think Audre is a changed woman...some good mind blowing sex will do that to you!
I am sure that Audre will stand up for her man with her mother and her sister. I can somewhat understand her mother, but her sister grates my nerves. Wait until they get a hold of Chris. If Chris met them before they had sex Audre would have wavered, but now...Chris aint going nowhere!
Jenelle is such a good friend...love her!
Great Job! I can't wait to see what happens next...update soon.
Reviewer: Harlen Winters Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/06/09 08:58 pm
I enjoy this story thank you.
Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/09 03:43 am
Good lord...THAT WAS HOOOOT!! I am so hooked on this story now, my life depends on the next chapter! Let's hope, for my boyfriends sake, that a chapter comes before I go see him in the next two weeks or he'll have a cranky girl on his hands haha! LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 10:32 am
there are no words.........(sweating profusely & looking for my husband!!)
Reviewer: medicateme Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 08:44 am
oo la la, he put it on her and good. and equally vise versa. hot stuff
Reviewer: g Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 05:30 am
Ugh. Family. Audre's mother and sister seem to suck all the air out of a room and all the life out of Audre. I like her father though. I almost fell off the couch laughing at his comments about the college boyfriend and his "back out shoes." Audre and Christian are HOT.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 03:39 am
About time I wanted to do Christian way mearlier but the anticipation was nice.lol
Reviewer: monique32 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 03:10 am
MORE SO PLEASE
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 02:44 am
I did not realise how much i missed this story until i saw the new update!
Christian and Audre are amazing together and the sex was so hot! I have to confess though, the thing that mostly draws me to this couple is their conversations. (im might be in the minority here LOL) You do the dialogue so well. Their conversations are intelligent and funny!
Dont get me wrong, the sexing was good, better than good actually, i just love their talks more! I learn random stuff during their convos and i thank you for that.
Great chapter, please update soon!
Reviewer: Princesa Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 02:39 am
i have truly missed this story. i was wondering where it (you) were!! THANKS FOR THE UPDATE! can't wait for more...more...more
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 02:02 am
I liked the build-up to their explosive passion. It was sexy and I'm always up building up a relationship/connection between two people.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 01/06/09 12:31 am
This was an awesome update. The scene on the stairs was hot!!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 11:54 pm
Mom and sis are pretty hard on her, it's no wonder she dosn't want to come home. I like her dad, he was sweet. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 11:49 pm
Glad to see this story is back, and this was a good update.. man there is still a lot of tension with Adrianne and Audre, and IMO Audre hit the nail on the head with Adrianne, she is a little jealous that Adure got out from under their mother's thumb and did what she wanted to do.
I did like the interaction with Adure her dad and Mrs Solomon.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 31/05/09 09:55 pm
Damn! That was wonderful...hot...and so intense...so intense I got lost in the zone and had tuned my surrounds out now that is writing for your ass right there....They put it on each other. I loved this update and have missed this story so much. I hope there will be more updates soon.
Thundkat
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 09:38 pm
Audre's revenge fantasies are too funny.
By my calculation, Greg was cheating on Audre. He did not get wih Cassandra AFTER Audre broke up with him. I can't wait for her to find this out.
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:58 pm
LOL. Yup. I knew I was going to hate Greg. And yup. That was a prime example of a "she really shoulda strangled the jackass" moment.
Damn, that was tacky!! Not only do you not attempt to upstage the bride in what you wear but you do not steal the show by making a proposal in the middle of toasting the newlyweds... in front of your former girlfriend and her friends!!
Great story!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:45 pm
LOL. Nice beginning.
I like Audre. Girl is not shy about expressing her inner meow. I liked her reflection on first meeting "the other woman." I love Henry's fine self, but I'm sure I won't love Greg. Men! What can I say? Gotta love em. Gotta hold back from strangling their asses!!
On to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 07:26 pm
loved it , fantastic, amazing, i missed this story sooo much :)
Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/09 06:38 pm
Please update...I just read all 15 chapters and now I'm really sad its over! I love them...and can't wait until Greg finds out who she upgraded for!!
Author's Response: Yeah just posted two more chapters! Thanks for reading and for the review!
Date: 26/05/09 06:04 am
Hi please update the story. Thanks
Author's Response: Updated! Thanks!
Date: 25/05/09 04:28 pm
can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the new updates!
Date: 04/05/09 02:01 am
Um, that was sexy as hell. Loved the naughty in this! Christian is officially the man for getting Audre to have phone sex with him. Seriously, can I have him? No, really, I mean it! GEEZ! Did I mention that I love this story???!???
On a side note: I'm sorry to hear that you've had such a rough time recently and I pray that things are getting better for you, if they aren't already. And I know you're hard on yourself (as a writer). Hell we all are, but from one author to another, you're great at the craft! Just thought I'd let you know! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your prayers and kind words. You know the drill with the writing we're always our own worse critics right? Anyways thanks for reading, your comments they are greatly appreciated. My Crush on Christian grows by the day, he may have ruined me for real men hahaha. Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/04/09 06:40 am