UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SAFETYGIRL Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/09 10:24 pm
Hi please update. Thanks
Author's Response: Best laid plans Divisionred hahaha. Won't ever be that long between updates again I assure you.
Date: 10/03/09 12:53 pm
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Me too hahaha!
Date: 06/01/09 07:09 pm
Hi Please update ...I am following you all over the internet requesting updates on your stories....LOL Now update. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 06/01/09 02:39 am
I love this story, I just found it earlier this evening and got caught up.
I do have one question who is the guy cast as Christian?
Author's Response:
Thanks Aria, sorry to respond so late. The actor is Desmond Harrington:
Isn't he adorable? Thanks for reading and the review and stars!
Reviewer: aria Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 28/12/08 03:37 am
ohhh... i really like this story. i can't wait until you update for the next chapter. i'm ready for the "physical intimacy".
Author's Response: Me too hahaha.
Date: 27/12/08 07:18 am
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!
[Report This]Date: 16/12/08 04:03 pm
Very good Greato! So many funny parts. This has got to be my fav:
Audre and Jenelle went for complete opposites, if the soundtrack to Audre’s dream man was Jay Z’s “Excuse Me Miss,” Jenelle’s dream man’s would be “So Hood”
Everytime a friend of mine and I are out and we see some ghettoness, we start singing "I'm So Hood." LMAO.
Loved her phone convo with her parents, especially her father. He was real crunk about the wedding! LOL! Christian is super cute! Can't wait to see them at the roller derby, which is AWESOME! I used to watch roller derby with my mom when I was really young! Got me all nostalgic! :)
Author's Response: That's funny! I don't know why I like that stupid song but it reminds me of so many guys I've known. Audre's dad is interesting to write for me, on one hand he's mellow and laid back but on the other when poppa puts his foot down, it's a wrap! Writing the roller derby scene was so much fun, I used to go to them when I was in school and Predator is an almost exact replica of a roller derby friend of mine! Thanks for reading and reviewing and the stars! Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/12/08 06:52 am
I love that she's letting Christian in a little, and that's she's somewhat hot for him. Cause really, who wouldn't be at this point? *smiles*
Really like Audre's relationships with her family and friends too, those sections made me smile while I read this. Very glad you updated, looking foward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I have a mad crush on Christian, he might even spoil me for real relationships hahaha. I really enjoy writing all of those interactions with her famiy and friends, I'm very glad that you enjoy them as well! Thanks for the great review and stars! Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/12/08 06:07 pm
Very nice update. Really like Audre's relationship with the women in her life. Her mother is a trip and Janelle is crazy as hell. I loved her converstation with her father, it made me LOL. Looking forward to her trip home. I'm sure their first eyeful of Chris will be interesting.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks BlackMa! The women in Audre's life are so important in who she is as a person and I love showing positive/strong female relationships. Yes their response to Christian will be intereting and fun to write. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/12/08 08:03 am
Great update, can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Gale!
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/12/08 02:26 am
Okay, Jenelle is killing me! Sleep would be the last thing on my mind too!
How you write Audre's mom and dad is so realistic. It's like I can hear their actual voices; the dialogue is great!
Physical intimacy coming in the next chapter?! Woo hoo!
Thanks for updating, GreatO. I missed this story.
Author's Response:
Jenelle is funny, there's not much of a filter between her thoughts and what she says, I love the fact that she says what people think but are afraid to. I'm glad you like how I write the parents, they are going to be coming up in the next chapter I post and I'm having alot of fun writing them.
Thanks for the great review and stars lovemboth!
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 06/12/08 01:02 am
I am loving Christian more and more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/12/08 04:03 am
LOVE LOVE LOVE Christian...looking forward to the next few chapters!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I LOVE Christian too, I have such a crush on this character it's ridiculous.
[Report This]Date: 05/12/08 02:57 am
Thanks for updating.
Janelle is a riot, and a good friend to Audre.
Adure's dream about Christian was HAWT, she is into him big time, and thats good b/c Greg was a SNORE.... I wonder if she'll run into him and that event.
Author's Response: Yep she's into Christian and yes she does run into Greg at the event. Thanks for reading and leaving a review! Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/12/08 11:26 pm
Hi GreatO, I was so happy to see that you updated. I love these 2 getting to know each other. Christian is just hella sexy...Audre is a better woman than me! I love Jenelle she is too funny. I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks Harlen! Audre is showing a lot of self restraint. . .that doesn't last! I enjoy writing Jenelle she's a fun chick. Reviewer: Harlen Winters Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 10:11 pm
wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 04/12/08 09:52 pm
This was such a great, funny chapter Greato! This made me LMAO:
"Stevie Wonder, he did the same thing they did only with more socially relevant lyrics AND he did it blind."
And I have to agree with Audre about the Beatles... I personally think they were fantastic writers but when it came to making music not so much... Hell, they could barely play their instruments. Some peeps would kill me if they heard me say that but I just don't give a shit! :)
I really enjoyed the entire date. It was fun and informative. We really got to get a better glimpse into them as individuals. The kiss was super cute and I can not wait to see these two some more. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! We are musical twins after all. I had fun writing the date, it was for me how a perfect date would unfold. . .except there would've been some sex in the end hehehe. Thanks for the review and the stars! Reviewer: idjunkie Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 03/11/08 03:09 am
Aw. This blows.
I got to the tenth chapter and had to refresh 3 times thinking that i missed the next button to continue, only to be dismayed by the fact that it wasn't up yet. See a story like this is exctly why i usually refuse to read incomplete stories.
NE way amazing, i'm hooked and PLEASE More.
Author's Response: I'm sorry about that! I'm working as fast as I can to catch up and get the story wrapped up. Thanks for reading and the great review! Reviewer: Jaded Tranquility Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/10/08 07:22 am
"You did not just say that!"
"I did and I stand by it, the Beatles are so overrated it's ridiculous."
"The Beatles are not overrated, they are the greatest band in the history of music."
"What exactly made them great other than the fact that they had good historical timing and mastered the art of fucking up the blues and marketing it to the masses?"
Okay, that cracked me up. Audre's awesome and I loved her back and forth with Christian. And Tres leches *drools*. That's an aweseome date.
Love their connect and how he's slowly chipping away at her defenses. The kiss was hot and the texting was funny as hell.
Great update. Looking forward to more of these two.
Author's Response: Yeah have to say that was a little bit of me talking there hahaha. I love setting the tone between Christian and Audre and having a good old fashion love story where they get to know each other. To me this would be a kind of ideal date so thanks for indulging me on that. And yes Tres Leches is the bomb, on my way to get some right now actually! And Jenelle had to be in the cut because she wants our girl to score as much as we do hahaha. Thanks so much for the great review and the stars and for reading! Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 07:43 pm
Because I don't need to try something to know whether or not I'll like it. I know myself well enough to deduce the probability of whether or not it would be something that I'd enjoy and I can assure you that snowboarding is one of those things that I probably will not enjoy."
Preach it sister. Never have, never will go snowboarding, I choose life. Plus, I'm a bit of a wuss.
and Christian were supposed to split a Tres Leches cake but she was practically inhaling the whole thing by herself, the decadent cake melting in her mouth
Is that not the best cake you've ever tasted? Whoever the hell thought of soaking cake in milk, I want to f*cking kiss him/her.
The principle that says I don't like actors that seem like douchebags
Amen to that, that includes you Russell Crowe.
That kiss was hot and sweet at the same time, I right there with Audre. Wanted more. :) But I can wait, because it seems like Christian's worth it. The date was adorable, exactly what she needed I think.
Great update, I'm so glad to see another chapter in this story. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks TBG! Yeah I choose life too! Looks really cool but think I'm sticking with the Wii version hahaha. And Tres Leches is wonderful, my mouth was watering just writing about it! I have to admit I don't let the douchebag factor deter me necessarily but Christian just seemed like the type of guy that would feel that way hahaha. Christian is definitely worth the wait and Audre is going to find that out! Thanks so much for reading and the review and stars!
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/08 09:03 am
*lovemboth does a back flip and a toe touch* Woo hoo, greato is back and she updated one of my favorite stories!
I loved their convo. The non-date was so realistic and it moved at a great pace. So glad Christian kissed her since it wasn't a date and all. LOL
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Woo hoo I'm back! I wanted the date to be kind of realistic I was really aiming for writing a nice sweet boy meets girl kind of story with Christian and Audre and I wanted for them to really get to know each other. You know my boy Christian had to get a sample, that's why I love him! Thanks again for your patience and your great reviews and stars! Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 05:02 am
can u feel it to, oh yeah this is the crest to the fall just make it good looking forward to the next read..
cheers
Author's Response: hahaha thanks! The fireworks are coming I promise I feel like I've built it up now have no choice but to deliver hahaha. Thanks for reading and for the review! Reviewer: liquor_front_poker_back Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/10/08 05:00 am
YEAH!!!!! we got an update. SOOOOOOOO glad you're back.
Audre honey (shaking my head) just succumb to the hotness that is Christian and JUMP HIM!
Christian (rasing hand frantically in the air) I'd be happy to be your 'official tattoo inspector' :D
Author's Response: Yea feels good to be back hahaha. I actually have the story firmly plotted out now so I'm really excited about writing it. Audre won't be resisting for too much longer she's only human after all hahaha. Sorry Christian already has a tattoo inspector right now, maybe if there's a sequel you can get some of that though hahahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing and the stars and for sticking with me through my extended hiatus. Reviewer: jcdeppfan87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 01:15 am
Love the story. When will u update
Author's Response: Thanks e! Next chapter is up and hopefully updates following at a more frequent rate, thanks for reading!
Date: 10/10/08 07:26 pm