Dayam, what a way to start a story! But I am very intrigued by this.....I will give you one thing.....if this is a romance....this is different. Good, but different! I will give you a 10 for the fact that you did not start out the story with a bunch of sweet, lovey-dovey, dribble.....
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/12/11 08:24 am
Omg Who shot him and why? is the guy her boyfriend husband lover? Good start so far thanks for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/11 08:11 pm
Damn, her love was taken away in a such brutal manner. Who is going to help her get past the grief, the Doctor Eric Plummer, or one of detectives? I am intrigued, please continue.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/10 11:52 pm
Great Start . You've got me hooked . Waiting on the next chapter as we speak.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/10 09:57 pm
Just when it's starting to get good it's ends in a cliffy..
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Renee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/02/10 09:04 pm
That was simple and very well written. Nice job!
Reviewer: Renee Banks Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/10 09:03 pm
Really interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more. Plus, Speechless was the first Gaga song I actually liked.
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 11/02/10 07:05 pm