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Title: Chapter 4- Bubble Dreams
Date: 18/12/11 08:44 am
Wow, ok so he doesn't want to hurt her....that is good right?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/11 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 4- Bubble Dreams
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Date: 31/05/11 08:29 pm
Wow talk about heartbreak he love her truly love her but he knew deep down inside one day it had to end because he wasn't working how you say a normal 9 to 5 job. Good story I realy like it. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/11 08:29 pm
Title: Chapter 4- Bubble Dreams
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Date: 26/02/10 02:20 am
This is really good. You write very well. I'm not really sure if you're doing the dialogue correctly.
I've seen it like:
Commas for said, talking verbs.
Ex: "I can't believe you said that," she said while looked at him.
Periods for action verbs:
Ex: "Alright, fine. Go." He opened the door for her to leave.
You still do use exclamation points (!), question marks (?), and the other forms of punctuation.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/10 02:20 am
Title: Chapter 4- Bubble Dreams
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Date: 22/02/10 12:41 am
Interesting update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/02/10 12:41 am