I love this story!!!!!
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/03/14 08:05 pm
I had been skipping over this story, bc i saw the status was 'taking a break'. Well, I took a chance last night and read this story and now I just have two words for the author...BREAK'S OVER! (seriously, this has been one of the best stories I have read in a while, please update).
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I am working on this story; stay tuned. :-)
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: 27/05/13 10:53 pm
Just read this story after reading f@~# me Irish. Both have been brilliantly written. I do hope you are able to update this one soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading. I am working on updates. :-), hang on and I promise it will be worth it....at least I think it will be ;-). I appreciate your feedback, happy reading.
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/03/13 01:27 am
Soo I'm loving this story and if you could update soon i would be most grateful
Author's Response:
I am working on updates. Stay tuned. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: mags Signed [Report This]Date: 07/02/12 09:10 am
I miss this story so much. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I am working on updates. I appreciate your feedback.
Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/12/11 06:54 pm
wow i feel bad for her to have a husband in the hospital that they don't know if he wake up is very hard on someone. She right time like these family should pull together but you have those people who dont care and make it all about them thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 04:38 pm
this story sounds really interesting, got my attention. thanks for the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading :-).
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 06:27 am
GREAT JOB ON THIS STORY. I AM SURE YOU WRITE IN YOUR SPARE TIME. PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORIES THAT YOU POST HERE ON THIS SITE. YOU HAVE ME TRYING TO FIGURE OUT HOW THEY ARE GOING TO END.
Author's Response:
:-0 thanks for reading. I am happy that you are enjoying this story. Keep leaving feedback, it helps.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 02:54 am
have you ever thought of turning this into a book? I would purchase it. I ask that because your form and style of writing is very good. Thanks for the wonderful update. I can not wait to see what happens now that Dax is starting to wake from his coma. Please update soon if you can. Sorry for sounding so greedy, but I am. I love this story.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 12:14 am
So much drama going on in this story. Zhay, you ran over your daughter in your haste to leave, and went into premature labor as a result of the accident. I would probably be in the psych ward afterwards. This story just shows sometimes we need to sit back, listen to our bodies, and do for ourselves first. The world and our jobs can certainly move without us. This is a good story. It will surely test their vows and love to overcome this. I love drama. So keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Working on new chaps today.
Date: 25/06/10 06:23 pm
Glad your back. The update was AWESOME.
Now, we know what led to the seperation. WOW, to lose 3 babies at one time is hard and I would probably be blaming myself just as Zhay blamed herself for going out that day instead of staying home and preparing for their weekend getaway.
Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading; I am working on the next chapter now :-) Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 02:54 pm
This is really good. I love how this is unwinding. I also love how you are incorporating little hints about the long lost and apparently not forgotten relationship of Barry and Rose. I can not wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Stay tuned for more :-)
[Report This]Date: 29/04/10 04:30 am
Okay so there are a lot of issues swimming around in this story. 1- Dax and Zhay, what happened? 2- Rosie and Barron, is the child really his? 3- Zhay and Adam, don't tell me there ain't something more going on there. 4- Barron and wife, so how did that come about? 5- the beloved mother that is never home, that could give anyone issues.
It's an interesting concept, this story and I'm eager to see what you make of it. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
Oh and if would be nice to see more flashbacks of when they got together, you know, how and some of the happy times.
;p
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!! Enjoy chapter 7 and please tell me what you think. You ladies kick butt with the story telling. Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/04/10 06:51 pm
Love the update can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thank you for reading an more is on the way.
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 02:37 pm
I LIKE this....it is a very good beginning. Looking forward to seeing more.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 06:58 pm
I really like this story but, I don't like how Zhay is so easy to have dinner with Dax. From what I've read and all the things that Rosie ran off that he did to her, I feel that she's giving in way to easily. I was fuming at how she would even accept his call.
Then in your updates, she reminisces on how she called him everyday for six weeks and he did not call her once and had been ignoring her for almost a full year, destroying her life. That's ridicoulus and she's going to have dinner with him...please. Then there is his family that treats her funny.
Him having his accident was horrible but she still needs to hold strong to the divorce once he recovers at least for a little while. I mean, he is used to getting his way amnesia or not. I know, I'm getting ahead of myself.
Granted I could be way off, depending on what she actually did to him (aborted their baby, slept with his friend) I don't know. Some hints of what actually happened between them would be appreciated but I understand that you are revealing the story piece by piece. Just keep it coming.Great job!
Author's Response:
Zhay may have caved a littlle too easy; but she loves this man. His family, well I think they have treated her coolly, because of Dax's "accidental" overdose. It's easy to blame others and not themselves. They've never seen him this undone and unhappy. Funny how Barron muses that Dax has never been refused anything? Isn't it a parents job to teach their children about boundries..hmmm. Stay tuned I am working to bring you more.
Reviewer: boo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:24 am
Thank you so much for the double update. I still want to know what caused their relationship to implode? They had to have lost a baby or something for him to treat her with such distain. He cheated on her and he's angry what an ass!!! Looking forward to next update.
Author's Response: I am glad that you are enjoying the story; thank you for reading. The pain that drove them apart will be revealed in short order.
Date: 27/02/10 12:13 am
I started to re-read the first chapter to see if I missed the part about what Zhay did to need Dax's forgiveness, but then I read a few reviews and realized no one knows. You have not revealed it yet. I have to say that I am really interested in finding out what could make a man cheat on, humiliate, verbally abuse and commit his wife without telling her family. I'm almost afraid to know if her crime fit the punishlment.
It sounds like he should take his father's advice and seek professional help. I will be looking for your updates because I am intrigued enought to want to know the background on these two. After everything that he did to her the jury is still out on if she should get back with him. Thanks for an interestisng update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more of their story, so that some of your questions will be answered. Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:10 am
I loovvvvvvve this story. I can't wait to see what up next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am working to bring you another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23/02/10 02:56 pm
Very good story and hooked i am to wait for more updates. Did she initially cheat on him before he went awol? Is the hurt and anger from an affair she had or some huge misunderstanding on his part? Was she set up with someone to make it look like she cheated?Inquiring minds would like to know. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. You know...I love all of those ideas that you just threw out there ;-). I'm working on another update for you.
Date: 23/02/10 12:22 am
Thanks for a great start to the story. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your support.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 02:36 pm
I like it. I've got all kinds of questions. Can't wait to see how he reacts when he comes to. His family sounds like a piece of work. Zhay is in for it, it seems. Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am working on the next few chapters, so hopefully they will post soon.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 06:29 am
You have made a wonderful start, and are definitely making me want to read more, so enough with the chit chat, get to writing, I'm ready for the next installment of this story. Good job.
A
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am working to bring you the next few chapeters.
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 04:01 am