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Title: Chapter 3-Not today

wow i like rosie glad she told dax  the truth. i don't see why he was suprise to get divorce papers if you treat your wife like crap for a year don't think she going to jump in your arms and say take me lol. I wish i was brown so you could be my mother awwwwwwwww how cute was that. thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

Please continue.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: LilHelper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/04/10 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

What happened? What did she do? I looove it. More please!!!

Author's Response: Working to bring you more :-)

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/02/10 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

A good update.  I like that Dax is trying to fix being a jerk for about a year.  But what cause made him so angry that he felt the need to almost punish Zhay?  Did she have an affair?  Did she get pregnant and have a miscarriage....what?

Nyeesha



Author's Response: Dax can be a bit bratty; the guy is just used to having his own way....more of the story soonest.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 07:15 pm

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

Wow. This was a sad. Looks as if there is more sadness to come.

"But the worst, the worst was going ahead with the....” 

This makes me think that a child is involved in this. A dead child, perhaps, and a funeral that he went ahead and had without Zhay being able to attend? Maybe, some kind of accident that he blames Zhay for? This is horrible. I'll wait to see the reveal but I'm already getting my tissue ready, just in case. I feel sorry for Zhay. Dax's reaction to whatever it is that happened was extreme. It was as if he had lost his mind. The lost of a child would do that.

This is one fine story. I might become addicted. Hell, who am I kidding, I'm already addicted. :0)



Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying their story so far. Dax's reaction has been extreme, that's because he loves so hard. Stay tumed, there is more on the way.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 10:09 am

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

I am loving this story and can't wait to get more bacground infomration on Dax and Zhay!  I am really curious to see what happened to cause him to be so nasty towards her and to flaunt an affair in her face!!

I LOVE Rosie!  She is a doll!!

Hope you update soon!



Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more, stay tuned.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 08:24 am

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

This was an interesting update. He seemed as if he was really nasty to Zhay which wasn't good but it made me wonder, did she cross the line with something??? or have an affair??? Is that why his family is treating her so badly??? What did he do that he didn't want Rosie to talk about??? Need some more back history.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. The Daxton's are a unique bunch, but as is the case with some families have difficuly in relating to each other. Keep reading, I'm working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

This was a great update.. Wow Dax was a all time Dummy.  He really hurt his wife.  Eventhough from the conversation with Rosie something else happen that made him really angry.  His behavior reminds me of the original Todd who plays the character Paul on ATWT. 

 

I am patiently awaiting next update.  



Author's Response: I appreciate the support. Yes, Dax has been a complete ass this year; but he loves his wife and wants to make everything right again. Working on the next chapter. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

Dax is the one who messed up in the marriage, yet he screwed around with her professional life, why? I'm not understanding his need to make her look bad when he was the one at fault. His family blames her, do they not know that he is the one that was having an affair and had her committed and all those other awful things he did. Is there more to the story, did she too have a major role in the breakup of the marraige? Loved the update!



Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Dax is hurt by the circumstances that lead them here. And Zhay, is too, but Dax is so used to being in control and now he's not. More to come, so stick around.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/02/10 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 3-Not today

Dax treated Zhay like shit in the bottom of a shoe for a year and he's surprised by the divorce papers!  Is he on crack?  Then he cheated on her with a shank ho and wants her to give him another chance.  Again, I ask is he high?  What is this tragedy that set him off to acting stupid?  Update soon please, I love this story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. The source of Dax's angst will be revealed soon. Stay tuned.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/02/10 11:20 pm

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