what the heck happen btween these two people for her to file for divorce and him to take a over dose? i understand why his dad acting the way he is because he wanted to look out for his son but sometime you have to fight hard to win someback. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/01/11 10:12 pm
THE STORY IS A GOOD STORY. YOU STILL NOT SAYING WHAT ETHAN DID FOR ZHAY TO WANT TO DIVORCE HIM. TIME FOR ANOTHER UPDATE. I LOVE THIS STORY.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am working on the updates and hope to post soon.
[Report This]Date: 19/04/10 07:43 am
To say I'm a little bit intrigued is putting it mildly...I'm still trying to figure out exactly what caused the riff between Zhay and Dax...obviously they still love each other so much...yet they've, specifically Dax, have spent a year hurting each other and not communicating...what could have been so bad that it caused such turmoil between them...I love Zhay's mom...she's such a free spirit...but she loves her babies so much...
Hmmm...interesting tidbit...Barron and Rosie...wonder what was up with that...
Can't wait to read more...you're doing a terrific job with the cloak and dagger stuff...but I love it...keep up the good work...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 28/02/10 07:19 am
Hmmmm....Rosie and the Barron. Very interesting. Love wasn't enough because Rosie is Black?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 07:40 pm
OOOOHHH SNAP!! Dax's dad was having an affair with Rosie????
I loved the backstory for the last two chapters...still wanting to know what happened to tear them apart though... LOL
You are doing a PHENOMENAL job with this story!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 07:17 pm
Loved the update. Did Ethan have a nervous breakdown or something???? Shocker to read about the possible suicide. Is he mentally unstable ???? Glad Zhay was willing to meet with him but he needs to work hard to get back into her good graces.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 06:01 am
I knew there was something between Rosie and Barron. The plot thickens. Thanks for multiple updates. I could get use to that :-)
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 04:54 am
What did Ethan do for him and Zhay to split for a year. I like the story. You are doing a good job. please update soon and get to good stuff where Ethan and Zhay start heal.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 04:18 am
Rosie and Barron have a history, very interesting. It seems that they both had a hand in the marriage ending, but what. Nice update!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 04:12 am
Wonderful update ... I can't wait to read more . It's soooo good.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working on updates. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 02:07 am
Whoa Whoa........first of all what happened to Zhay and Dax to cause so much pain.
WTF? Rosie and Barron...came out of nowhere! Looove it.
Please keep the updates coming, there are some major twists and turns that I am really loving!
Author's Response: Thanks Lady. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Zhay and Dax's pain will be revealed in the next few chapters. Rosie & Barron :-) just wait and see..... Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 02:02 am
wow! i'm on the edge of my seat! can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I am working on the next few chapters.
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 01:33 am
Wow alot of secrets coming out of the closet. I see how Rosie is so important to Dax he wa to Barron to. I am starting to think that Zhay even had an Abortion, miscarriage and he did not know or had an affair with her Dr. Friend that is in Haiti. But what ever it is I am still waiting to find out.
Dax and the 12 pills a little scarry but also I feel that they love each other so much and do Fierce that something is worth saving. Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Oh yes, bit by bit, hints here and there; the secrets are coming out. Thanks for reading. Rosie is very important to both of them. I promise to end the suspense really soon. Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:40 am