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Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

omg the bulding fell on everyone zay going to need more love in support now when she find out her husband was there. thanks for the update. did zay cheat on him?

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 10:15 pm

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

I am glad that you updated.  I really enjoyed the chapter it is starting to answer some questions from the start of the story.  Update again soon.

Author's Response: I will; chapter 7 is up and I am working on the next 2 - enjoy and thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/04/10 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

All I have to say is if you don't update soon I will hunt you down wherever you may be and make you do it myself. Its just getting good! And um...what did Zhay do that hurt Dax? I missed it. You keep mentioning it but I have no idea what 'it' is and...I need to know.

K thanks!



Author's Response: I have kept mentioning the"thing" that drove them apart. It is still to diffiult for both of them to discuss. I think that's why they need to be in therapy together. Tell me that you think about the next chapter. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

love the writing...love the story....please hurry with the updates...I am on the edge of my seat....on pins and needles......biting my nails.....pacing the floor....and overall feigning for more.....I think you get the picture

Author's Response: Thank for reading and the feedback. Enjoy the next chapter.

Reviewer: chelle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

Wow, what exploded?  How many more were trapped by that explosion?  Please tell me that Nolan gets his ass handed to him for this accident?  Someone obviously didn't do something or didn't make sure that all ducks were quacking.  I love this story and thank you for the update.  Please don't make us wait too long for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Chapter 7 is up and I am working on the next 2. Enjoy!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 07:35 am

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

Awesome update. How in the heck did he forget about his friend?

Author's Response: I know right....the guy that came out to save your ass. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 07:25 am

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

Wow...this is awesome!!  I am loving the update!  I can't wait for the next one!! :)

Author's Response: Next chapter is up!!! Enjoy and tell me what you think.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 6-Thanks for coming out, man....

Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you chap 7 on the way.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 05:37 am

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