omg so that what happen she lost the babies and she felt it was her fault and they didn't know how to deal with the grief that so sad to lose a child. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/01/11 10:31 pm
Please, please, please come back to this story. It is so good! I am loving these characters and the storyline.
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 08:01 pm
She must have shut him out after she lost the babies and her daughter. He cheated on becasue she pushed him away, which was wrong. This story is full of so much pain, please tell me that there is some joy coming soon.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/09/10 05:11 am
i just found this story...i love it!!! oh my so much drama. Ethan has to be ok. ok what is the deal with his dad and rosie..mmm interesting. waiting on the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you updates are on the way!
Date: 05/08/10 04:08 am
I just caught up with this story and its very emotional and tragic, I feel for bith Zhay and Ethan, they were both grieving and didn't know how to deal with such a tragic loss.
I'm not blaming Zhay, but she needs to see that as a doctor, that the best way she can be a good doctor to her paicents(sp) is to take care of herself, and she didn't do that, also, this is why I hate people who drive and use cell phones, I would have let it ring or not parked the car to answer it.
I hope that Zhay and Ethan can work their way back to eachother.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I feel the same way about cell phone usage while driving. I mean it's hard enough without being distracted by bad drivers but you throught that in the mix and anything could happen. I am working on the next chapters, stay tuned. Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/07/10 07:36 am
I just caught up with this totally wonderful story! Great read and great drama! Can't wait for more - soon I hope!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying this story. I am working on the next chapters now.
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/06/10 11:45 pm
Wow, wow, wow. What can I say, I could have never imagined this would be Dax and Zhay's backstory. How do you survive, loss such as this? I liked this story from the first, but now I can hardly wait to go on what I hope is their journey of forgiveness and eventually survival over profound loss. Thank you for taking us along. I am so excited to see what you have in store for us.
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Author's Response: I am excited that so many are enjoying this story. It was such a hard chapter to write. But my characters just kept pushing me to get it done. They are nagging me right now to keep working on the next few chapters. Thank you for reading. Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/06/10 08:04 am
Zhay made a terrible mistake that resulted in the death of her children. I feel really bad for Dax. I wonder has Zhay changed. Would she be so arrogant the next time? Hopefully, she's learned something from this experience. Not sure that I want them together until it's clear that she has.
You are truly writing an emotional story. My heart really went out to Dax.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Yes this really is an emmotional read and you know starting out Dax was the real arrogant character but we see that Zhay can be just as head strong; but at the wrong time. We will see if they both have change over the course of the story. Stay tuned for more. Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/06/10 07:06 am
Wow...this chapter punched me in the gut!!! So I had already figured out long ago something tragic had happened to tear them apart...but never in my wildest imaginings would I have figured something this tragic could happen to two people and they still survive...I couldn't imagine losing all of my children in one day...and carrying the guilt that one foolish decision played a part in their demise...why didn't she listen to her husband and her body...she's a doctor for Pete's sake...she knew the risk she was running...yet she ignored it...going off trying to play 'hero' for another child...and in the end...costing the lives of her CHILDREN...I know it was a tragic accident...but really...I couldn't see how Ethan could have forgiven her for something like that...no, she never meant for any of it to happen...but it happened nonetheless...and I know my opinion might not be popular or PC...but it's human...I'd probably be in a padded cell somewhere eating playdough if something that tragic happened to me...my heart just breaks for Ethan...and he really is more of a special man than I'd ever given him credit for...that he found it within himself to not only forgive...but continue to love her with all of his being...
Don't get me wrong...my heart does bleed for Zhay, too...I wouldn't wish anything like that to happen to my worst enemy...and I truly believe she is a good person...but what she did was very foolish...
I loved the suspense and build up to the big reveal...you did that very cleverly and so well...and this is an extremely well-written story...thanks so much for sharing...I look forward to the next update...great job!!!!
Author's Response: Ethan loves his woman and he hates himself for still being angry with her for not listening to him. He can't help it, it's simply human nature. As for Zhay, well I've been told that doctors make the worst patients because they are so quick to rule everything out when it comes to thier own health. I am glad that you liked the big reveal :-). Thank you for reading and commenting; I am working on the next few chapters. Reviewer: attheritz Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/06/10 06:45 am
She was so stupid, if only she'd taken that medical crisis seriously maybe they would still together and happy. Her decision cost three lives, she put her ego before her family and for that she was wrong. That was so sad!!! My heart goes out to Ethan. I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Doctors are not very good patients and Zhay proved it. But she lost more than she could have bargained for and Ethan..well he has gained our simpathies. Now he has his faults too but we can't imagine what he must have felt watching his children struggle to live, knowing that he couldn't do anything to save them.
Date: 26/06/10 04:28 am
wow what a update..
Now we know some of what happened between Dax and Zhay relationship to cause a rift.. That was so sad them loosing they kids in one day. That was a very painful experience that what send her over the edge and the guilt.. it can set a person crazy
Author's Response: yes...their grief had done more than test theur relationship. But has it pushed it beyond repair? stay tuned to find out. thank you for reading and commenting. Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 11:15 pm
They lost so much , now I see why he felt the way he did. She promised him she would stay home and take care of herself. Her colleague knew she was having trouble with her pregnancy as well yet he continued to push her to come in, but it was still up to her to say no and she didn't. I would be crazy to this day if all of that happened to me, how do you recover from so much heart ache? wonderful update.
Author's Response: thank you for reading. they have lost so much. but i think that they are stronger than they think. will they find their way back to each other? I hope so :-). Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 10:36 pm
Hmm, I sort of agreed with Dax that she should have stayed put. How tragic to lose all the children because of her decision. I guess she realised that at the end of the day, family comes first always. I'm sure someone else went to she the child with meningitis given her situation. She should have known to slow down given her previous troubles. So sad!!! No wonder they have both been depressed. Great background info!!! Can't wait to see what happens from here. Will he remember her or the tragedies of his life??? Can they really make it the second time around????
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more of their story.
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 09:22 pm
so glad to have an update....love the story
Author's Response: thank you for reading and commenting. i am working on new chaps now :-).
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 09:22 pm
I've just read your story, it is tragic but very good. I'm looking forward to reading what comes next. Great job. I'm also thinking that loosing 3 children in 1 hour is just the most terrible thing. I liked the way you kept up the suspense on what actually has been keeping them apart. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy that I was able to peak your interest. Please come back for more ;-). Reviewer: Dee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 07:02 pm
Love your story! I need more updates! Please let them have a happy ending!
Author's Response: :-) THANK YOU!!! I am working on next chaps,
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 04:39 pm
WOW...these two have REALLY gone through some trials. I cannot even imagine losing all three of your kids in one single day!
I hope Dax pulls through and that he and Zhay can fix things!!
Beautiful story and well worth the wait!
Author's Response: Aww....thank you. as a newbie at this it helps to get feedback. thank you so much for reading and commenting. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/10 03:58 pm
AWESOME update!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I am glad that you like it. Working on the next chapter now.
Date: 25/06/10 10:14 am