wow i hope he wake up and fight for his health and the love of his life. yeah there alot hurt there but also alot more love and she need him now more then ever. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/01/11 10:40 pm
I have just discovered this story. And I must say that was VERY GOOD! As a first time writer with 4 month since I last posted, I understand the fight to finally put up something that you deem respectable and fit for reader comsumption. But you have produce something worth waiting for. Thank You. You inspire me to keep going.
These character are so believeable you can't help but feel for them and their lose. You have inparted an excellent fantasy. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/11/10 06:17 am
Wonderful update! i love rosie and barron's interaction. wow they had a child together? i wonder if Dax heard that. i need to know. next chapter please ;-).
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/11/10 06:51 am
YAY! (doing a happy dance), you're back! I've missed this story so much, awesome writing skills, love the flashback scenes. Can't wait to read more - soon, pretty please!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/11/10 12:51 am
Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing this story again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/10/10 06:07 am
I am on my knees begging you to please continue the three stories you stated writing on the site. The concept of each story is very unique. I am sure you may/must be busy with everyday life, but if you have free time please, please continue the stories.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/10/10 12:11 am
I love this story. I am telling you it is good. You should consider publishing this. I await the next chapter..that I hope will come soon..no pressure. I'm just eager ;-).
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/10/10 03:32 am
Welcome Back, thanks for the update, it was very DEEP.
I loved reading the flashbacks as to the emotional state of Dax, when he lost the kids, man he was a MEAN DRUNK, and a bit of a ASSHOLE, he deserved that ASS KICKING that Mason gave him, but it got Dax to see how he was treating Zhay, and that he needed help.
I also liked the flashback with Barron and Dax, it was sweet how Dax felt about Rosie as a child, and he still feels the sameway.
I knew that Barron and Rosie were together yrs ago, but the fact that they had a child that died is so sad, I wonder why they ended thier relationship.
And it seems that Dax is tying to comeback... and the DRAMA begins.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/10/10 02:20 am
I hope your muse is kicking because I will not be happy if you start feeding me and then starve me again. I read this story back in I think April and didn't review and wish I had because then I could say I will hunt you down if you do that to me again. Waiting for more of this fabulous story gave me a chance to start writing enough to actually post my own and that was good for me but I really missed this. Please keep up the good work and don't be such a stranger. Update soon please. Thank you
Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 07:24 pm
Wow, how sad this story has been. Hope a ray of sunshine appears soon. Glad that you're back!!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 07:41 am
First I must say welcome back. This chapter filled in a lot of blanks for so many of the charcaters and I am over joyed Ethan open his eyes. Now the thing is what did he hear and what would happen when he wake up. Would it be present day or would he be stuck in before the tradegy. I vote for present day with love in his heart to give and forgive.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 02:38 am
Wow, that update was long in coming, but worth the wait. Please post again soon. Hoping for more early Zhay and Dax.
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Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 01:33 am
Loved it especially the flashbacks. They had a child together that didn't survive, that's so sad. I'm so glad he opened his eyes, I'm wondering if he heard them talking about their first born. Awesome update. Welcome back.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 28/10/10 12:25 am
Wow, what a great update. I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Bravo! I don't know how you ladies do it. You guys are so talented. All I can say is thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Reviewer: Romance Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 11:33 pm
Thank for the update, I have truly missed this story. Me thinks that Dax may have about his father's love child. I hope that Dax wakes up soon. I hope that he and Zhay can work it hard..He really hurt her in grief.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 08:06 pm
Very pleased that you have updated the story. again. I can not wait to see will happens now that Dax is awake. You seem to have give us, the readers a wonderful foundation for the story. Great job on all the details. Please update again soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 27/10/10 07:07 pm
I am so stoked to see this story is back!!!
Wow...these folks have gone through sooo much pain! I knew Rosie and Barron had an affair, but never thought that they actually had a child together!! How heart breaking! :(
I love the friendship between Mason and Dax!! Everyone should have a friend like that!
I hope you get a chance to update soon now that Dax is waking up!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 27/10/10 06:22 pm