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Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

he awake he awake that great but suck he has no memory but i have feeling she help him get it back. now the unoffical date was to cute lol him paying her date to go away  to funny. so that why him and his mother don't have a close bond because what she said about rosie. It sad she felt that way but she just wasn't use to have a man like his father wanted to love her. thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

kel, you are writing the hell out of this story. You evan had me feel a little sorry for Dax's mother. Now that's some feat. LOL

Dax and Zhay can't catch a break. This is so emotional. I'm looking forward to see if Dax feels a pull towards Zhay while he has amnesia. 

I'v really missed this story.



Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the update! Thanks for reading. Zhay and Dax will find their way to each other.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Yay!! Dax's awake. i need another chapter.

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

This was an emotional chapter, I loved the flashbacks, especially the one of Dax and Zhay's fiirst date, and now I see why Barro and Rosie never got to be together liek they should have... I do feel for Alise.

It so sad that Dax doesn't remember Zhay, but I guess this means that they will have to fall in love all over again.

But there is a part of me that wonders if Dax's amnesia is more that it being b/c of the coma, could it be emotional as well?



Author's Response: Thanks! I think Dax's coma could be a combination of both. But we'll justhave to read and find out.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/10 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

This story line is amazing. I love all of the characters and i love the way you reveal their history. I am hooked. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am working on the next chappy now.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Something to be thankful for an update from KellyKlue and Dax is awake.

Thank you to the Creator (winkwink) for that blessing. Although we should not question HER wisdom becuase SHE makes no mistakes it is so unfair that Zhay and Dax will have to endure more hardship. But they say SHE doesn't give you more than you can handle.

So lead on into the abyss and we will all come out on the other side stronger for having been through the experience.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 04:48 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

WOW! Emotional and intense. I need more right now! Thank You for a great story.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

I am so glad that he woke up, now maybe theycan work on getting back together.    I love this story, you are so awesome.  Thank your for the new chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

YAY! - an update! I've been waiting for this one and it was just great! Loved the flashback stories, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Glad he has regained conscoiusness but feel bad for Zhay. Hmmm, wonder what will happened from here on out.....Will they reconnect or drift apart???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Happy Thanksgiving this was a great update.  Gave so much insight to mom and dad relationship.  Now with Ethan awake and no memory I know that gotta hurt Zhay.  Now I guess it give her time to start and rebuild they relationship but when the truth comes out.  oh boy.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Loved it. The history of how all of them got started in their relationships was awesome. I don't know if I should feel sorry Dax's mom or not. Barron's  Dad was an awful man, especially in his treastment of her. He liked Rosie just didn't like her color, liked the wife's skin color but didn't like her. She didn't even want kids, but when it came as a means to and end for her and the relationship with Barron she was all for it. She didn't seem like she was a good mother, which is probably why Dax is so close to Rosie. Wonderful update. Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Wow, so Dax is finally awake and doesn't remember Zhay.  Well this girl's gonna have to work on making him fall in love with her all over again, why giving him all those "sponge baths"  lol.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 12:32 pm

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