love the writing...love the story....please hurry with the updates...I am on the edge of my seat....on pins and needles......biting my nails.....pacing the floor....and overall feigning for more.....I think you get the picture
Author's Response: Thank for reading and the feedback. Enjoy the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 10:00 pm
Love the update can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thank you for reading an more is on the way.
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 02:37 pm
Wow, what exploded? How many more were trapped by that explosion? Please tell me that Nolan gets his ass handed to him for this accident? Someone obviously didn't do something or didn't make sure that all ducks were quacking. I love this story and thank you for the update. Please don't make us wait too long for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Chapter 7 is up and I am working on the next 2. Enjoy!
Date: 21/04/10 07:35 am
Awesome update. How in the heck did he forget about his friend?
Author's Response: I know right....the guy that came out to save your ass. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 07:25 am
Wow...this is awesome!! I am loving the update! I can't wait for the next one!! :)
Author's Response: Next chapter is up!!! Enjoy and tell me what you think.
Date: 21/04/10 06:06 am
Loved the update.
Author's Response: Thank you chap 7 on the way.
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 05:37 am
THE STORY IS A GOOD STORY. YOU STILL NOT SAYING WHAT ETHAN DID FOR ZHAY TO WANT TO DIVORCE HIM. TIME FOR ANOTHER UPDATE. I LOVE THIS STORY.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am working on the updates and hope to post soon.
[Report This]Date: 19/04/10 07:43 am
What happened? What did she do? I looove it. More please!!!
Author's Response: Working to bring you more :-)
[Report This]Date: 28/02/10 11:02 pm
To say I'm a little bit intrigued is putting it mildly...I'm still trying to figure out exactly what caused the riff between Zhay and Dax...obviously they still love each other so much...yet they've, specifically Dax, have spent a year hurting each other and not communicating...what could have been so bad that it caused such turmoil between them...I love Zhay's mom...she's such a free spirit...but she loves her babies so much...
Hmmm...interesting tidbit...Barron and Rosie...wonder what was up with that...
Can't wait to read more...you're doing a terrific job with the cloak and dagger stuff...but I love it...keep up the good work...
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 28/02/10 07:19 am
Hmmmm....Rosie and the Barron. Very interesting. Love wasn't enough because Rosie is Black?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 07:40 pm
Well, what I think is that I need to know what she did tha she feels she needs Dax's forgiveness?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 07:26 pm
OOOOHHH SNAP!! Dax's dad was having an affair with Rosie????
I loved the backstory for the last two chapters...still wanting to know what happened to tear them apart though... LOL
You are doing a PHENOMENAL job with this story!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 07:17 pm
A good update. I like that Dax is trying to fix being a jerk for about a year. But what cause made him so angry that he felt the need to almost punish Zhay? Did she have an affair? Did she get pregnant and have a miscarriage....what?
Nyeesha
Author's Response: Dax can be a bit bratty; the guy is just used to having his own way....more of the story soonest. Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 07:15 pm
Ohhhh....I LOVE this pictures!!
Nyeesha
Author's Response: thanks! Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 06:59 pm
I LIKE this....it is a very good beginning. Looking forward to seeing more.
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 06:58 pm
Loved the update. Did Ethan have a nervous breakdown or something???? Shocker to read about the possible suicide. Is he mentally unstable ???? Glad Zhay was willing to meet with him but he needs to work hard to get back into her good graces.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 06:01 am
I knew there was something between Rosie and Barron. The plot thickens. Thanks for multiple updates. I could get use to that :-)
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 04:54 am
What did Ethan do for him and Zhay to split for a year. I like the story. You are doing a good job. please update soon and get to good stuff where Ethan and Zhay start heal.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 04:18 am
Rosie and Barron have a history, very interesting. It seems that they both had a hand in the marriage ending, but what. Nice update!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 04:12 am
Wonderful update ... I can't wait to read more . It's soooo good.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working on updates. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 02:07 am
Whoa Whoa........first of all what happened to Zhay and Dax to cause so much pain.
WTF? Rosie and Barron...came out of nowhere! Looove it.
Please keep the updates coming, there are some major twists and turns that I am really loving!
Author's Response: Thanks Lady. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Zhay and Dax's pain will be revealed in the next few chapters. Rosie & Barron :-) just wait and see..... Reviewer: brown_mocha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 02:02 am
wow! i'm on the edge of my seat! can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I am working on the next few chapters.
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 01:33 am
Wow alot of secrets coming out of the closet. I see how Rosie is so important to Dax he wa to Barron to. I am starting to think that Zhay even had an Abortion, miscarriage and he did not know or had an affair with her Dr. Friend that is in Haiti. But what ever it is I am still waiting to find out.
Dax and the 12 pills a little scarry but also I feel that they love each other so much and do Fierce that something is worth saving. Can't wait for the update.
Author's Response: Oh yes, bit by bit, hints here and there; the secrets are coming out. Thanks for reading. Rosie is very important to both of them. I promise to end the suspense really soon. Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:40 am
Dax really hurt Zhay really badly no wonder she did not want to go to dinner with him. What could she had done that made him so angry. Off to read the next chapter. BTW great chapter and story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Dax did hurt her but in love there is always some degree of pain. Not excusing his behaviour but we'll learn why he has been behaving so badly. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:26 am