I really like this story but, I don't like how Zhay is so easy to have dinner with Dax. From what I've read and all the things that Rosie ran off that he did to her, I feel that she's giving in way to easily. I was fuming at how she would even accept his call.
Then in your updates, she reminisces on how she called him everyday for six weeks and he did not call her once and had been ignoring her for almost a full year, destroying her life. That's ridicoulus and she's going to have dinner with him...please. Then there is his family that treats her funny.
Him having his accident was horrible but she still needs to hold strong to the divorce once he recovers at least for a little while. I mean, he is used to getting his way amnesia or not. I know, I'm getting ahead of myself.
Granted I could be way off, depending on what she actually did to him (aborted their baby, slept with his friend) I don't know. Some hints of what actually happened between them would be appreciated but I understand that you are revealing the story piece by piece. Just keep it coming.Great job!
Author's Response:
Zhay may have caved a littlle too easy; but she loves this man. His family, well I think they have treated her coolly, because of Dax's "accidental" overdose. It's easy to blame others and not themselves. They've never seen him this undone and unhappy. Funny how Barron muses that Dax has never been refused anything? Isn't it a parents job to teach their children about boundries..hmmm. Stay tuned I am working to bring you more.
Reviewer: boo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:24 am
Thank you so much for the double update. I still want to know what caused their relationship to implode? They had to have lost a baby or something for him to treat her with such distain. He cheated on her and he's angry what an ass!!! Looking forward to next update.
Author's Response: I am glad that you are enjoying the story; thank you for reading. The pain that drove them apart will be revealed in short order.
Date: 27/02/10 12:13 am
I started to re-read the first chapter to see if I missed the part about what Zhay did to need Dax's forgiveness, but then I read a few reviews and realized no one knows. You have not revealed it yet. I have to say that I am really interested in finding out what could make a man cheat on, humiliate, verbally abuse and commit his wife without telling her family. I'm almost afraid to know if her crime fit the punishlment.
It sounds like he should take his father's advice and seek professional help. I will be looking for your updates because I am intrigued enought to want to know the background on these two. After everything that he did to her the jury is still out on if she should get back with him. Thanks for an interestisng update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more of their story, so that some of your questions will be answered. Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/02/10 12:10 am
What happened in the relationship to make them hate each other, inquiring minds need to know!! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. It will be revealed in the next few chapters. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 26/02/10 11:46 pm
I loovvvvvvve this story. I can't wait to see what up next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am working to bring you another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23/02/10 02:56 pm
Wow. This was a sad. Looks as if there is more sadness to come.
"But the worst, the worst was going ahead with the....”
This makes me think that a child is involved in this. A dead child, perhaps, and a funeral that he went ahead and had without Zhay being able to attend? Maybe, some kind of accident that he blames Zhay for? This is horrible. I'll wait to see the reveal but I'm already getting my tissue ready, just in case. I feel sorry for Zhay. Dax's reaction to whatever it is that happened was extreme. It was as if he had lost his mind. The lost of a child would do that.
This is one fine story. I might become addicted. Hell, who am I kidding, I'm already addicted. :0)
Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying their story so far. Dax's reaction has been extreme, that's because he loves so hard. Stay tumed, there is more on the way. Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/02/10 10:09 am
I am loving this story and can't wait to get more bacground infomration on Dax and Zhay! I am really curious to see what happened to cause him to be so nasty towards her and to flaunt an affair in her face!!
I LOVE Rosie! She is a doll!!
Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more, stay tuned. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/02/10 08:24 am
This was an interesting update. He seemed as if he was really nasty to Zhay which wasn't good but it made me wonder, did she cross the line with something??? or have an affair??? Is that why his family is treating her so badly??? What did he do that he didn't want Rosie to talk about??? Need some more back history.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. The Daxton's are a unique bunch, but as is the case with some families have difficuly in relating to each other. Keep reading, I'm working on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23/02/10 02:44 am
This was a great update.. Wow Dax was a all time Dummy. He really hurt his wife. Eventhough from the conversation with Rosie something else happen that made him really angry. His behavior reminds me of the original Todd who plays the character Paul on ATWT.
I am patiently awaiting next update.
Author's Response: I appreciate the support. Yes, Dax has been a complete ass this year; but he loves his wife and wants to make everything right again. Working on the next chapter. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/02/10 02:16 am
Love the cast pics.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/02/10 01:02 am
Very good story and hooked i am to wait for more updates. Did she initially cheat on him before he went awol? Is the hurt and anger from an affair she had or some huge misunderstanding on his part? Was she set up with someone to make it look like she cheated?Inquiring minds would like to know. LOL
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. You know...I love all of those ideas that you just threw out there ;-). I'm working on another update for you.
Date: 23/02/10 12:22 am
Dax is the one who messed up in the marriage, yet he screwed around with her professional life, why? I'm not understanding his need to make her look bad when he was the one at fault. His family blames her, do they not know that he is the one that was having an affair and had her committed and all those other awful things he did. Is there more to the story, did she too have a major role in the breakup of the marraige? Loved the update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Dax is hurt by the circumstances that lead them here. And Zhay, is too, but Dax is so used to being in control and now he's not. More to come, so stick around. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/02/10 11:34 pm
Dax treated Zhay like shit in the bottom of a shoe for a year and he's surprised by the divorce papers! Is he on crack? Then he cheated on her with a shank ho and wants her to give him another chance. Again, I ask is he high? What is this tragedy that set him off to acting stupid? Update soon please, I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. The source of Dax's angst will be revealed soon. Stay tuned.
Date: 22/02/10 11:20 pm
I like the cast pics!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 22/02/10 10:46 pm
Thanks for a great start to the story. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your support.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 02:36 pm
I like it. I've got all kinds of questions. Can't wait to see how he reacts when he comes to. His family sounds like a piece of work. Zhay is in for it, it seems. Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am working on the next few chapters, so hopefully they will post soon.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 06:29 am
You have made a wonderful start, and are definitely making me want to read more, so enough with the chit chat, get to writing, I'm ready for the next installment of this story. Good job.
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Author's Response:
Thanks! I am working to bring you the next few chapeters.
Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/10 04:01 am
Me likey......Very interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 03:38 am
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 20/02/10 03:38 am
I like the start of your story. I can't wait to see what had them heading towards a possible divorce.
Author's Response: Thanks!1 I am working on the updates and I hope to post them soon.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 02:45 am
Hey Kelly this was a great start and I am looking forward to see how this advance. Please update soon. The flow of the story is very good and I am very interested in Zhay and Dax story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am working to bring you more of their story.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 01:39 am
I'm a sucker for good premises...and yours hooked me right off the bat...can't wait to find out why they separated...what was this tragedy that tore them apart...did they lose a child...are they unable to conceive...and I can't wait until Dax wakes up and the romance begins again...great start...please continue...
Author's Response: I am so happy that you liked it! I am working on the next few chapters. so I hope to post really soon.
[Report This]Date: 20/02/10 12:33 am
First story? Well that was a great start and I will be checking for the next update.
Author's Response: Yes ,first story ;-). It has been dancing around in my head for a few months now, so I decided to tell the tale. I hope to update soon. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 19/02/10 11:17 pm
Interesting.... I love it already. Great way to lure us readers in. I cannot wait for what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am working to bring you more.
Date: 19/02/10 10:19 pm
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on it right now :-).
Date: 19/02/10 09:05 pm