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Title: 1-The Intro

wow i feel bad for her to have a husband in the hospital that they don't know if he wake up is very hard on someone.  She right time like these family should pull together but you have those people who dont care and make it all about them thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/01/11 04:38 pm

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Just started this story and I'm loving it.  Looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 08:40 pm

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Loved the update. Glad Dax finally realised Zhay was his wife.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Hey there, Welcome Back, this story was missed.. and Happy Blelated New Year.

I forgot that this story is a tear jerker, this was a great chapter, I kinda figured that Dax's amneshia(sp) was more that just physical.... I can't wait to see how they deal with Dax's condition and if Zhay will tell him EVERYTHING.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/01/11 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Zhay is a very strong woman and Dax is damned lucky to have her on his side. I hope that they can find their way back to each other and build an even stronger relationship than the one they had before. I don't envy the person that tells him about his babies and what happened to them. That is going to be one tough job.

I'm glad that Dax was told the pretty doctor he's been checking out is his wife and it will be interesting to see how he interacts with his parents and Rosie. I'm also glad the attraction is still there on his part and he couldn't fight it.

Loved the glimpse of their love and hope that they can get passed this to reach somewhere even sweeter together.

Thanks KK beautiful as usual.



Author's Response: Aww...what a wonderful review. And you are right, Zhay is a strong woman and she is exactly what Dax needs. Thank you for reading and commenting as always!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Glad he knows they're married, but the difficult part is coming up with the explanation of why they weren't together at the time of the accident. This could be quite sad.

Thanks for the update. I've missed this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. The revelation of their seperation could be sad but it caould also bring about their reconciliation; you'll just have to keep reading to find out :-).

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 06:16 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Awesome update. Dax was so funny when he was talking to the other doctor about his wife's body.

Author's Response: Thanks! Wasn't it funny :-). I think that Dax's amnesia will give us an opportunity to learn more about him pre-seperation :-).

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Thank you so much for the update, I have truly missed this story.  I am so happy that Dax finally woke up but am disappointed that he had no memory.  I hope that he doesn't react like an ass when he reembers the day that they all three of their children.  Zhay couldn't take that pain again!!!  So awesome!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And hopefully Dax will not turn into the ass that he has been all year; when he fully understands what they have endured.

Reviewer: pgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Loved the update. I am glad that they are talking.  This is the opening that both of them need.  After all the heartache that happen in their lives and think this is good for them to start over and build something new. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! And I agree, this is the fresh start that they both needed.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

KellyKlue, thank you for that wonderful update.  Love the story.  Love these characters.  You are such a talented writer.  Can't wait to see them start their love affair all over again. 

Author's Response: I shoudl thank you for reading and sticking with this story. It helps to know that others are just as in love with these characters as I am ;-).

Reviewer: Romance Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/11 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

I love this story.  I wish you would update more often.  Keep doing whatever works for you!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I've tried to utilize a shedule but I couldn't stick to it. My muse doesn't like it :-). But I plan to update more often; so be on the look out for more updates.

Reviewer: Fanny Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/01/11 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

kel, you are writing the hell out of this story. You evan had me feel a little sorry for Dax's mother. Now that's some feat. LOL

Dax and Zhay can't catch a break. This is so emotional. I'm looking forward to see if Dax feels a pull towards Zhay while he has amnesia. 

I'v really missed this story.



Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the update! Thanks for reading. Zhay and Dax will find their way to each other.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/10 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Yay!! Dax's awake. i need another chapter.

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/10 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

This was an emotional chapter, I loved the flashbacks, especially the one of Dax and Zhay's fiirst date, and now I see why Barro and Rosie never got to be together liek they should have... I do feel for Alise.

It so sad that Dax doesn't remember Zhay, but I guess this means that they will have to fall in love all over again.

But there is a part of me that wonders if Dax's amnesia is more that it being b/c of the coma, could it be emotional as well?



Author's Response: Thanks! I think Dax's coma could be a combination of both. But we'll justhave to read and find out.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/11/10 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

This story line is amazing. I love all of the characters and i love the way you reveal their history. I am hooked. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am working on the next chappy now.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/10 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Something to be thankful for an update from KellyKlue and Dax is awake.

Thank you to the Creator (winkwink) for that blessing. Although we should not question HER wisdom becuase SHE makes no mistakes it is so unfair that Zhay and Dax will have to endure more hardship. But they say SHE doesn't give you more than you can handle.

So lead on into the abyss and we will all come out on the other side stronger for having been through the experience.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 04:48 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

WOW! Emotional and intense. I need more right now! Thank You for a great story.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

I am so glad that he woke up, now maybe theycan work on getting back together.    I love this story, you are so awesome.  Thank your for the new chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/11/10 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

YAY! - an update! I've been waiting for this one and it was just great! Loved the flashback stories, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Glad he has regained conscoiusness but feel bad for Zhay. Hmmm, wonder what will happened from here on out.....Will they reconnect or drift apart???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Happy Thanksgiving this was a great update.  Gave so much insight to mom and dad relationship.  Now with Ethan awake and no memory I know that gotta hurt Zhay.  Now I guess it give her time to start and rebuild they relationship but when the truth comes out.  oh boy.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Loved it. The history of how all of them got started in their relationships was awesome. I don't know if I should feel sorry Dax's mom or not. Barron's  Dad was an awful man, especially in his treastment of her. He liked Rosie just didn't like her color, liked the wife's skin color but didn't like her. She didn't even want kids, but when it came as a means to and end for her and the relationship with Barron she was all for it. She didn't seem like she was a good mother, which is probably why Dax is so close to Rosie. Wonderful update. Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Wow, so Dax is finally awake and doesn't remember Zhay.  Well this girl's gonna have to work on making him fall in love with her all over again, why giving him all those "sponge baths"  lol.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/10 12:32 pm

Title: Chapter 10 - How do you know when you’re in love?

I have just discovered this story. And I must say that was VERY GOOD! As a first time writer with 4 month since I last posted, I understand the fight to finally put up something that you deem respectable and fit for reader comsumption. But you have produce something worth waiting for. Thank You. You inspire me to keep going.

These character are so believeable you can't help but feel for them and their lose. You have inparted an excellent fantasy. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/11/10 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 10 - How do you know when you’re in love?

Wonderful update! i love rosie and barron's interaction. wow they had a child together? i wonder if Dax heard that. i need to know. next chapter please ;-).

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/10 06:51 am

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