YAY! (doing a happy dance), you're back! I've missed this story so much, awesome writing skills, love the flashback scenes. Can't wait to read more - soon, pretty please!

I am on my knees begging you to please continue the three stories you stated writing on the site. The concept of each story is very unique. I am sure you may/must be busy with everyday life, but if you have free time please, please continue the stories.

I love this story. I am telling you it is good. You should consider publishing this. I await the next chapter..that I hope will come soon..no pressure. I'm just eager ;-).

I hope your muse is kicking because I will not be happy if you start feeding me and then starve me again. I read this story back in I think April and didn't review and wish I had because then I could say I will hunt you down if you do that to me again. Waiting for more of this fabulous story gave me a chance to start writing enough to actually post my own and that was good for me but I really missed this.  Please keep up the good work and don't be such a stranger. Update soon please. Thank you 

GREAT JOB ON THIS STORY. I AM SURE YOU WRITE IN YOUR SPARE TIME. PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR STORIES THAT YOU POST HERE ON THIS SITE.  YOU HAVE ME TRYING TO FIGURE OUT HOW THEY ARE GOING TO END.

Author's Response:

:-0 thanks for reading. I am happy that you are enjoying this story. Keep leaving feedback, it helps.

Wow, that update was long in coming, but worth the wait.  Please post again soon.  Hoping for more early Zhay and Dax.

A

have you ever thought of turning this into a book?  I would purchase it.  I ask that because your form and style of writing is very good. Thanks for the wonderful update.  I can not wait to see what happens now that Dax is starting to wake from his coma.  Please update soon if you can.  Sorry for sounding so greedy, but I am.  I love this story.

Thank for the update, I have truly missed this story.  Me thinks that Dax may have about his father's love child.  I hope that Dax wakes up soon.  I hope that he and Zhay can work it hard..He really hurt her in grief.

I am so stoked to see this story is back!!!

Wow...these folks have gone through sooo much pain!  I knew Rosie and Barron had an affair, but never thought that they actually had a child together!!  How heart breaking!  :(  

I love the friendship between Mason and Dax!!  Everyone should have a friend like that!  

I hope you get a chance to update soon now that Dax is waking up!! 

She must have shut him out after she lost the babies and her daughter.  He cheated on becasue she pushed him away, which was wrong.  This story is full of so much pain, please tell me that there is some joy coming soon.

I just caught up with this story and its very emotional and tragic, I feel for bith Zhay and Ethan, they were both grieving and didn't know how to deal with such a tragic loss.

I'm not blaming Zhay, but she needs to see that as a doctor, that the best way she can be a good doctor to her paicents(sp) is to take care of herself, and she didn't do that, also, this is why I hate people who drive and use cell phones, I would have let it ring or not parked the car to answer it.

I hope that Zhay and Ethan can work their way back to eachother.

Wow, wow, wow.  What can I say, I could have never imagined this would be Dax and Zhay's backstory.  How do you survive, loss such as this?  I liked this story from the first, but now I can hardly wait to go on what I hope is their journey of forgiveness and eventually survival over profound loss.  Thank you for taking us along.  I am so excited to see what you have in store for us.

A

Wow...this chapter punched me in the gut!!!  So I had already figured out long ago something tragic had happened to tear them apart...but never in my wildest imaginings would I have figured something this tragic could happen to two people and they still survive...I couldn't imagine losing all of my children in one day...and carrying the guilt that one foolish decision played a part in their demise...why didn't she listen to her husband and her body...she's a doctor for Pete's sake...she knew the risk she was running...yet she ignored it...going off trying to play 'hero' for another child...and in the end...costing the lives of her CHILDREN...I know it was a tragic accident...but really...I couldn't see how Ethan could have forgiven her for something like that...no, she never meant for any of it to happen...but it happened nonetheless...and I know my opinion might not be popular or PC...but it's human...I'd probably be in a padded cell somewhere eating playdough if something that tragic happened to me...my heart just breaks for Ethan...and he really is more of a special man than I'd ever given him credit for...that he found it within himself to not only forgive...but continue to love her with all of his being...

Don't get me wrong...my heart does bleed for Zhay, too...I wouldn't wish anything like that to happen to my worst enemy...and I truly believe she is a good person...but what she did was very foolish...

I loved the suspense and build up to the big reveal...you did that very cleverly and so well...and this is an extremely well-written story...thanks so much for sharing...I look forward to the next update...great job!!!!