She was so stupid, if only she'd taken that medical crisis seriously maybe they would still together and happy. Her decision cost three lives, she put her ego before her family and for that she was wrong. That was so sad!!! My heart goes out to Ethan. I love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Doctors are not very good patients and Zhay proved it. But she lost more than she could have bargained for and Ethan..well he has gained our simpathies. Now he has his faults too but we can't imagine what he must have felt watching his children struggle to live, knowing that he couldn't do anything to save them.
Date: 26/06/10 04:28 am
wow what a update..
Now we know some of what happened between Dax and Zhay relationship to cause a rift.. That was so sad them loosing they kids in one day. That was a very painful experience that what send her over the edge and the guilt.. it can set a person crazy
Author's Response: yes...their grief had done more than test theur relationship. But has it pushed it beyond repair? stay tuned to find out. thank you for reading and commenting. Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 11:15 pm
They lost so much , now I see why he felt the way he did. She promised him she would stay home and take care of herself. Her colleague knew she was having trouble with her pregnancy as well yet he continued to push her to come in, but it was still up to her to say no and she didn't. I would be crazy to this day if all of that happened to me, how do you recover from so much heart ache? wonderful update.
Author's Response: thank you for reading. they have lost so much. but i think that they are stronger than they think. will they find their way back to each other? I hope so :-). Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 10:36 pm
Hmm, I sort of agreed with Dax that she should have stayed put. How tragic to lose all the children because of her decision. I guess she realised that at the end of the day, family comes first always. I'm sure someone else went to she the child with meningitis given her situation. She should have known to slow down given her previous troubles. So sad!!! No wonder they have both been depressed. Great background info!!! Can't wait to see what happens from here. Will he remember her or the tragedies of his life??? Can they really make it the second time around????
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am working to bring you more of their story.
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 09:22 pm
so glad to have an update....love the story
Author's Response: thank you for reading and commenting. i am working on new chaps now :-).
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 09:22 pm
I've just read your story, it is tragic but very good. I'm looking forward to reading what comes next. Great job. I'm also thinking that loosing 3 children in 1 hour is just the most terrible thing. I liked the way you kept up the suspense on what actually has been keeping them apart. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy that I was able to peak your interest. Please come back for more ;-). Reviewer: Dee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 07:02 pm
So much drama going on in this story. Zhay, you ran over your daughter in your haste to leave, and went into premature labor as a result of the accident. I would probably be in the psych ward afterwards. This story just shows sometimes we need to sit back, listen to our bodies, and do for ourselves first. The world and our jobs can certainly move without us. This is a good story. It will surely test their vows and love to overcome this. I love drama. So keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Working on new chaps today.
Date: 25/06/10 06:23 pm
Love your story! I need more updates! Please let them have a happy ending!
Author's Response: :-) THANK YOU!!! I am working on next chaps,
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 04:39 pm
WOW...these two have REALLY gone through some trials. I cannot even imagine losing all three of your kids in one single day!
I hope Dax pulls through and that he and Zhay can fix things!!
Beautiful story and well worth the wait!
Author's Response: Aww....thank you. as a newbie at this it helps to get feedback. thank you so much for reading and commenting. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/10 03:58 pm
Glad your back. The update was AWESOME.
Now, we know what led to the seperation. WOW, to lose 3 babies at one time is hard and I would probably be blaming myself just as Zhay blamed herself for going out that day instead of staying home and preparing for their weekend getaway.
Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading; I am working on the next chapter now :-) Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/06/10 02:54 pm
AWESOME update!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I am glad that you like it. Working on the next chapter now.
Date: 25/06/10 10:14 am
I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad that you are enjoying it. I am working on the updates.
Date: 16/06/10 01:22 am
Please update sooon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am working on the updates.
[Report This]Date: 24/05/10 09:10 am
This is really good. I love how this is unwinding. I also love how you are incorporating little hints about the long lost and apparently not forgotten relationship of Barry and Rose. I can not wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting. Stay tuned for more :-)
[Report This]Date: 29/04/10 04:30 am
Amazing update! I love the way you allowed us to experience everyone's emotions. From Chloe and Zhay's joy in getting her ready for her date with Dax, to the tense, anxious moments everyone was feeling waiting for word that Dax was pulled from the building alive!
I can't wait to find out why his family dislikes her so much though...
Awesome JOB!!
Author's Response: Thank you, hoping to get the updates up soonest. Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/04/10 06:51 am
Loved the update but why did they split up??? Why was his family so hostile toward her in the start of this story???? What was Mason's take on the situation as he regarded her as a sister??
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. The reason for the split will be told in the next two chapters. Mason appreciates Zhay's honest and caring nature and he got on Dax's ass for his treatment of Zhay. We'll see that in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: 27/04/10 04:45 am
I love how they met, that was really sweet and he bought her a horse. Damn I need to meet a man like that. When are we going to find out what happened them up? I am loving this story an thank you for the update. Please don't make us wait too long for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Stay tuned for the next chapter.
Date: 26/04/10 11:35 pm
I know youre going somewhere thanks for the back story it is definitely needed. Great update
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Working on the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26/04/10 11:10 pm
Barron was more cncerned about Rosie finding out that his wife. He..um needs her to send out a press release, right. I don't know what happened but they still love each other and they surely didn't need another set back. I hope everything works out for them in the end. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: :-) Rosie and Barron. There is still a lotta love there. Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/04/10 09:45 pm
love it love it...but want and need more ...please give us a couple of chapters soon
Author's Response: Thank you and I am work on the next 2 chapters right now. Reviewer: chelle Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/04/10 09:19 pm
Please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Date: 23/04/10 05:15 pm
Okay so there are a lot of issues swimming around in this story. 1- Dax and Zhay, what happened? 2- Rosie and Barron, is the child really his? 3- Zhay and Adam, don't tell me there ain't something more going on there. 4- Barron and wife, so how did that come about? 5- the beloved mother that is never home, that could give anyone issues.
It's an interesting concept, this story and I'm eager to see what you make of it. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
Oh and if would be nice to see more flashbacks of when they got together, you know, how and some of the happy times.
;p
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!! Enjoy chapter 7 and please tell me what you think. You ladies kick butt with the story telling. Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/04/10 06:51 pm
I am glad that you updated. I really enjoyed the chapter it is starting to answer some questions from the start of the story. Update again soon.
Author's Response: I will; chapter 7 is up and I am working on the next 2 - enjoy and thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 22/04/10 03:22 am
All I have to say is if you don't update soon I will hunt you down wherever you may be and make you do it myself. Its just getting good! And um...what did Zhay do that hurt Dax? I missed it. You keep mentioning it but I have no idea what 'it' is and...I need to know.
K thanks!
Author's Response: I have kept mentioning the"thing" that drove them apart. It is still to diffiult for both of them to discuss. I think that's why they need to be in therapy together. Tell me that you think about the next chapter. Thanks for reading. Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/04/10 11:27 pm