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Title: Chapter 9


Alan's father's race hatred is typical of most but he really violently expresses it.  He is ready to kill Alan to terminate his son's union with a Black girl!  The bulwarks of race hatred are strong! It seems Alan sincerely cares for Regina, I think their initial attraction for each other is seeing the beauty in their racial differences! Since, all persons are initially attracted to another by the positive feeling they feel about the others physical appearance! But, this couple is paying a high and dangerous price for following their hearts and Regina's mom spoke the truth when she said it would not be much different in New York, (just a little less overt). 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/10 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 9

Great update. Wow, Alan sure got the crap beat out of him. I still think both of them need to watch out for Alan's dad. He's a dangerous man.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/05/10 12:48 am

Title: Chapter 9

Poor poor Alan, you the cops ain't going to do shit back in those times down south.

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/05/10 12:07 am

Title: Chapter 9

Alan has proved himself to be more of man than his father can ever hope to be.  Great update.  I love how supportive Reginaparent's are of her relationship with Alan. Reminds me of my parents.

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/05/10 08:30 pm

Title: Chapter 9

More, more... yay!  Alan's dad is a big dumb jerk.  I couldn't imagine what it must've been like back then. The heart wants what the heart wants... Great job sis... looking forward to reading more and SOON!  :) 

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/10 03:49 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great update. He had to have known what his dad was going to do. Maybe Coach can go and beat his dad's behind.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/10 02:21 pm

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