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Title: Chapter 9

More, more... yay!  Alan's dad is a big dumb jerk.  I couldn't imagine what it must've been like back then. The heart wants what the heart wants... Great job sis... looking forward to reading more and SOON!  :) 

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/10 03:49 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Great update. He had to have known what his dad was going to do. Maybe Coach can go and beat his dad's behind.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/05/10 02:21 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update but I'm afraid for Alan. His dad is a dangerous man.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 10:48 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. His dad is going to hurt him, he should really think about not going home tonight.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 8

This is really good Moca... Thanks for updating...

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/10 04:21 pm

Title: Chapter 7

This is really good.  Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/04/10 06:22 pm

Title: Chapter 2

i dont even want to know how it felt to grow up during that time! i feel so bad for our parents!

loving the story! :)

Reviewer: Butterfly Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 19/04/10 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Damn, that won't end well at all.  I just hope that his father doesn't lay a finger on Regina.  Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/04/10 05:38 am

Title: Chapter 7

Oh hell no!!! All hell is definitely gonna break loose now!!! I can see the drama now!!! Loved the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/10 10:58 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update.  I hope someone can stop Alan's dad before he causes any damage.

Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/10 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I hope Alan confides in Coach about his dad beating him. Wonderful update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/04/10 10:46 pm

Title: Cast

awww i just saw this story and i love that movie, ryan gosling is one of my babes but i liked gerry on that one, thought about writng a fic for him but who know's, nice cast ^_^

Reviewer: Variety Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/03/10 08:56 am

Title: Chapter 6

great update. this chapter and their talks makes me flash forward in my mind to them as adults...hmmmm. makes me wonder.

Reviewer: Latise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 12:45 am

Title: Chapter 6

Loved the update. Alan's dad seems to be a jerk/bully. So sad that he's beating up on Alan for things beyond their control. He needs a life lesson.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/10 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 6

Party in the south? That just sounds like a bad idea for a black person.

Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 6

There is going to be trouble at the party. Nice update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/03/10 09:06 pm

Title: Chapter 5

they are adorable!!!!!

Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/10 09:59 am

Title: Chapter 5

I never saw this movie. But oh lord my stomach has dropped from all the suspense you have written.

LOVE IT and I cant wait for more!

Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 09:25 pm

Title: Chapter 5

great so far. never wanted to see the movie ,but i like your story. please update soon.

Reviewer: Latise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful chapter. I love Regina's character she is straight up and to the point. Love the chemistry between Alan and Regina. Great Story, I have really enjoyed what you have so far.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 03:22 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I absolutely loved the movie The Titans, its one of my favourites!  So I'm enjoying this 'continuation' so to speak and look forward to the next instalment.

Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 08:11 am

Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm, interesting. They have finally decided to give it a go. Hope all goes well but they know what they are up against.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 06:26 am

Title: Cast

I like Regina she is a straight to the point kind of girl.  This is going to getr interesting and dangerous.  Those rednecks were and still are crazy.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 06:09 am

Title: Chapter 5

Nice update. Dad is not going to like that.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/10 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 4

Its a nice twist on the movie, and I am enjoying it. I hope you will post soon.

Reviewer: E-B-R-Forever Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/02/10 04:15 am

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