Delectable physical dialog. love that not everything is said in words.

Fleshed out characters. Makes One feel like the fourth wall is broken & they don't see it.

Reveals in real time. I hate it when I find things out for no reason. You don't do that.

No album fillers! Just amazing how everything you write is relevant. can re-read it  and find nuances I'd missed before. That's a mark of a good writer in my opinion.

Honarable mention; is the language itself, the vocabulary and rythm is very enjoyable. I'm a word-nerd so...

Keep 'em coming!