Penname: madameblaque [Contact]

Real name: Stephanie

Member Since: 10/03/12

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Bio:

I enjoy and appreciate good stories--ones that I can get engrossed in for hours. My background is journalism if someone needs an extra pair of eyes for their stories.




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Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419666
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10

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Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

Darla is up to no good.  She's desperate and as for Sergei, I hope he stays away from Sunshine.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 16: We are Building Bridges Part 1

Sergei has a death wish, I see. SMH...

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

This chapter perfectly illustrates to me that Sunny had far mor power over him than he ever did her. I really think that men allow themselves to get weak for a woman they are crazy about, than a woman would with a man.

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Date: 26/03/12
Title: Chapter 24: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

Wow, I'm surpised that Darla actually has some decency. I guess in her own way, she cared about Jacob.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 25: I'll Be Long Gone

That was inevitable, I guess, but sad.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

This has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read. Is it wrong to hope that Sunny forgives him, in spite of everything?? You have the ability to make a reader feel sympathy for the villain and that is a great gift. Still, Nikki is complex, so you can't hate him completely.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 22: You Know There's No Need to Hide Away

So sad, but I see the necessity of where you are taking the story.  I'm so hooked!!

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

Does Sunny really know who he is?? That he's dangerous and manipulative, but she loves him in spite of all that?? She seems so mature, but innocent and naive at the same time. An interesting dynamic.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 43: Shine - Epilogue

Beautiful Story, really superb!!! Thank You and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Date: 26/03/12
Title: Chapter 9: Let the Wind Blow through Your Heart Part 2

For some odd reason, I like the fact that they are falling in love. He lets his guard down with her--the age difference of her being 18?? right?? He's  early 30's?? I'm not sure, but it's an interesting dynamic and the whole situation fascinates me. I love your descriptions of the tattoos-- I have a thing for men with them and always like hearing the stories behind them.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

Nikki is crazy, but I guess because he loves Sunshine, he feels justified in whatever he does to protect her??

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

Nikki is crazy, but I guess because he loves Sunshine, he feels justified in whatever he does to protect her??

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 7: Cling to me.

Sunshine is sacrificing herself for her Father and he  digs himself in deeper. He's selfish and doesn't seem to want to stop being a drunk and a gambler. So sad-- this story is great though.

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Date: 25/03/12
Title: Chapter 39: Or We Might Take it Differently

Two things-- Has Sergei lost his mind?? or Is "Someone"' putting him up to this?? Interesting turn of events..

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Date: 26/03/12