Penname: Caribbean Fire [Contact]

Real name: Lisa

Member Since: 26/10/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Good day everyone,


I have not posted a new story in a very long time but I have been writing.


To the many people on this site who have given me so much support, I regret that I am removing my stories due to them being posted to othe sites without my permission. Trust will remain posted here on the Chamber (for now), only because I am currently in the process of re-write that story. Sprial and the spin off from Trust have been removed.


The stealing of my work hurts and while I have seen glimpses of my work in other stories, I have turned a blind eye to it only out of trying to maintain peace. I am disappointed when anyone resorts to stealing another person's work because they do not believe in their own creativity.


To all who read my stories and especially to those who took the time to comment and sent me feedback, I will always be appreciative and grateful for your warmth and support. I hope things change in the future where I can feel more comfortable with posting my work once again.


Thank you.


Caribbean Fire


 



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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Lance comes back to NYC to teach at one of the most elite private schools in the country, and in the middle of his second semester, in walks this new student with more brains than Einstein, a fast tongue - and his green eyes. You can never avoid the past. Ever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16935
Read Count: 6214
Published: 18/02/09
Updated: 26/06/09


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Ghost Of You

I just finished reading all of this and have to say that I really like it.  I want to see how Lance is going to deal with Lea and how Lea is going to handle finding out why her mother lied to her all those years. Isla is not going to want to share but them coming together and is going to to be a drama especially now that Lance may  just have to grow up a bit.  Good story, hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89836
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

I just began reading this story and I like it.  I like that he is able to admit to himself that he's attracted to her.  He's in a tough spot and he's angry with himself.  I really want to see where this goes and what will bring about the change.  I think he wants her around besides his better judgement.  Off to read the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, Bell has quite a dilemma on his hands with this attraction that he knows will spell trouble. As an older man, he really thinks that he should be beyond this. But when has love ever been a respector of age? 

Yes, Bell is drawn to her and on more that just a physical level which I think he will have to admit too soon. 

The journey is the thing, isn't it?  How they get from obliviousness on Collista's part to self-realization, and on Bell's, acknowledgment that this thing--this atraction--has it's roots in something far deeper than transitory lust.

Thanks for reviewing.  

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/03/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

I love Iris!! She is so to the point and a honest friend to Col.  I like how Col saw him naked and didn't run out of there like some school girl or tried to seduce him like a slut.  Very well done and very mature on both their parts.  Things are heating up.  Loved it.

Author's Response:

I love that you love Iris.  I really like her too. She's a great counterpoint to Colista I think.  We'll see more evidence of that later on in the story.

Collista, for all her youth, does seem to have a level of maturity beyond her years.  I think it will hold her in good stead.  Also, she does seem to have a moral base.  Not a bad thing in this day and age, huh?

Yes, both Bell an Collista have shown themselves to be likeable people.  Futhermore, ones who seem to have more in common than is apparent on the surface. 

Thanks for reivewing. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/03/09

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

Damm Coll that's my girl.  Go get your man.  If this is what you want and you and he are mature enough to handle it then go after him.  Love,  love Iris.  My type of friend.  Update soon.

Author's Response:

Lol! Well, hot damn!  I'm gonna side with you.  You've made my case for me concerning the appropriateness of Bell and Collista being together.  'Nuff said.

Iris is a hoot.  It's funny.  I named her after the Goo Goo Dolls song 'Iris'.  Okay, I'll admit it.  Love the song, but I just liked the name.  No deep philosophical meaning there. lol  Collista needed someone to be firmly in her corner besides possibly Aidan. You'll see why as the story unfolds. 

Thanks for reviewing.

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Oh Lord...Bell has a past, Coll has an inhertance.  That's going to be something to find out about.  I know Col is young but she needs to take it easy.  She has trust fund she can rely on and Bell has his job but if his reputation get ruined it not only going to be because he's a professor sleeping with a student, its going to be because he's sleeping with one wealthy student, and that is going to be a whole other ball game.  She needs to pull back a little at least switch out of his class and keep it on the down low until she's graduated.  I want to know what happened with him in the past.  Great update. 

Author's Response:

What great observations!  Not sure that Col cares about those though or if she's even thought about those aspects.  And yes, she is very young yet has a certain maturity to her because of her family dynamic.   Yet if she were prudent, she'd follow your advice to the letter.  If she were prudent.  LOL

Yeah, something is up with Bell concerning his past. 

Thanks for reviewing. :-)

 

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/03/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

While I'm happy they got together, I'm even happier that Col realized however late that her actions were not in the best judgment.  I feel sorry for Adrian as he did try but he's so attracted to her. I wonder how this is going to go as I see trouble for them. Col's expressiveness that she wears so openly on her sleeves is probably going to be what gives them away.  I really hope this semester will be over soon for the both of them.  Good update.

Author's Response:

I so glad you liked the chapter.  I thought it was important that Collista show that she wasn't entirely self-absorbed.  Aidan is stubborn too, but in the end, his feelings got the better of him. 

Oh, there's definitely trouble ahead. It's going to be long semester. 

Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/04/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 404]
Summary:

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To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60674
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 2: Choosing three

Frist of all I love the cast.  Good beginning...I'll be watching to see where this goes especially since I have a soft spot for lycan stories.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
Date: 02/09/09

Title: Chapter 3: Something Unexpected

I like Sabestain...he's a trouble maker and a good one at that.  He has an easy spirit and is quick to laugh. I hope Sabine doesn't get too ahead of herself it may make the other two come after her especially when she's not protected or unawares. 

Good chapter. Hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
Date: 02/09/09

Title: Chapter 4: appreciation

Good chapter but I think Ulrich is not thinking about what the other women will do. He himself said that the women were jealous, he can't be there to procted her all the time and even though he doesn't want her to be hurt, that doesn't mean they won't try something and make it seem like an accident.  And what is he panning on doing?  Marrying one woman but taking another as a mate?  That would be interesting to see if he thinks he can get away with something like that. LOL!!



Author's Response: yea i guess he figures that the women won't do anything because they're in the castle and any attack on a fellow resident would be sudden death...wait. I don't think i posted that lol oops i'll try and fit that in somewhere if i can but it would be interesting to see Ulrich Marry Sabine and then take another as a mate, There would definitely be a fight!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
Date: 03/09/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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 The Evil Dead

My name is Ash.

 

And I’m about to stuff my baby’s stocking.

A Gift for Minx .



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Tales of the Boomstick
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2010
Read Count: 3629
Published: 25/12/09
Updated: 25/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Another Bad Santa

Happy Holiday to you also.  Love this, it was very funny. Poor AJ...not getting to see Santa for Christmas and Ash's way of explaining Santa is just funny.  I really want to use that reasoning some time (If you dont' mind).

I enjoyed this. 



Author's Response: Thanks CF! I'm glad you like it. And feel free to use away!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/12/09

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 177]
Summary: DA Banner

 

Twenty-three year old Leigh Grayson has had only one thing on her mind for the last five years: Justice. But to get justice she will have to fight one man’s sick obsession.

Will Detective Damien Crook be able to convince her to accept his help and most of all his love?

I want to say a huge thank you to Renee Banks for all her support and editing skills. Renee, you have no idea how much it means to me!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33650
Read Count: 31656
Published: 09/05/10
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Good chapter and I liked how Leigh put her foot down to say that Damien and Brian had to be there.  I think the person who's going to save her is going to be Daryl...he's cute too. but Micheal's gonna be his take down...afterall he's the hot FBI agent...

Nice work...I can't wait to see what happens at dinner.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much my friend!! I am currently working on ch11. Let's see where that leads us!

take care!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/07/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

She should have told Damien he threathened Lucy, that way he could have someone watch her and they may be able to set him up that way.  I think it's the family that will do him in...Michael is too cocky and that's going to be his down fall.  Great up date again KK....:)

Author's Response: Hey my friend! thank you for your kind words and your encouragement!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
Date: 23/05/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Nice chapter.  I'm glady they met again but Damian is going to have to work for her trust and that's a good thing.  He will realized a lot easier that she has very valid reasons not to like Michael and that he's really no good.  I'm happy she didn't flirt or fawn all over him also. 

Mad did he get mad when he noticed she didn't look at him twice but not to worry Dam...she remembered you.  Good chapter KK.. :)

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23/05/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Don't worry about the scene being right...they will change as the circumstances change therefore they are always right for what they are written in.  Good job.

Damien messed up.  He should know better and now he has put the case in jeopardy and I want to smack him for it. Now he's gone and added gasoline to Michael's fire.  He'd better be good because he's gonna have to get her out of this. 

 



Author's Response: Thank you! It's funny how ideas change as you go along typing up. I hope it all comes together in the end. Damien is trying to be less intense about her, he needs to focus on the job, Brian is a good friend to him and sort of mentor. Michael will strike soon. Let's see what happens. I am building up slowly...I guess...I hope so! :-)

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 31/05/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

This is moving fast.  I like the reaction of both Lucy and Leigh, they both are strong and while they are afraid, they don't want to be the victims. That's commendable.  Brian and Damien have a lot on thier hands to handle and they need to think quick.  I think Salvatore, is giong to take care of Micheal for them both espeically if he keeps messing up.  Can't wait to see what Micheal does now that Leigh didn't show up for the 'date'. 

Author's Response:

Hey my friend!!

Well, Thank you very much for taking yout time to comment. Next chapter will be up soon, and I hope you like it too. My brain is working hard to make this story enjoyable.

Hope you are well!

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/10

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Yes..he's gonna kill her but for some reason I want to believe that while he's a mob boss, his word means something. Maybe I am just deluding myself and such but that's just how I fell right now.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/11/10

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hey KK....I'm so happy you posted (I'm happy I went on today). I like it.  I think it's a good start. I wish you must enjoying writing and coming up with all the plot twist.  Have too much fun...that was for you, now for the story. 

I like it.  Good start. I think Mike is obessed with her, the classic, want what you can't have.  It's gonna be something when he finds out there is someone else that wants her too...



Author's Response: THank you my friend!! You don't know how much it means o me!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Okay...that was not cool. Glad she snapped out of it thought.  It's aboutg time anyway that someone caught up with Micheal but I still think Sal is gonna get him in the end just not before Leigh beats his ass...LOL!!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/11/10

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Who do I say is coming to the rescue....Sal or Damien?  But someone's gonna rescue Leigh. Micheal is one sick person.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/11/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I am so happy she's finally letting them realize that she does have a backbone. Don't know what the hell's wrong with them why they just can't see that and understand it. Good call Leigh...wanting the meeting with Sal.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/11/10

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Hey KK...this was a great chapter...why do I have the feeling Micheal shot Daryl?  It wouldn't suprise me and smelling Leigh's hair afterward...yes, reeks of a physcho.  Off to read the next chapter.... :)

 

 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/10

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I love this chapter...I'm so happy she asked him outright for the truth but that Damien is getting on my nerves...I want Leigh to kick Micheal's ass...a good old fashion 'I'm not putting up with your crap anymore...beating' but Damien keeps messing up my plans...LOL!!! I like her strength but Damien needs to learn patience.  He's just put her life in danger under the guise of trying to save her. Foolish.

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/10

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Hey hun....Good ending...Wow, Daryl really did clean up and there was nothing they could do about it.  I hope Damien finally learns to calm down...and that shot taugh him a lesson...LOL!!! Nice ending and Michael got his just due.  Sal very smart man not to get his hands dirty.  Bring on Gino.

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! Gino's story is all planned out! I appreciate your support, it means a lot!

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Four years later, Keisha is still shook to the core about her nightmare she experienced with the infamous frat-boy murderer and rapist, Tyler. She’s coping and with the help of her friends, Julie, Greg and Will, she’s on her way to a somewhat normal life…until Tyler escapes prison and is hell-bent on finishing what he started.

 Sequel to Party Monster



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The Chamber Grindhouse 3
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17476
Read Count: 21824
Published: 04/10/10
Updated: 01/11/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting first chapter. Will seems like a good friend and one that will be protective over Keisha which is something she needed even if she doesn't think she needs it right now.  Julie is a good friend and I like the paring of the hot girlfriend with the nerd boyfriend.  Can't wait to read how you develop the story. 

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/10/10

Title: Chapter 1: Cast pics

I like the cast...nice choices...

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed
Date: 04/10/10