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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79610
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 65.2

I hate Ricky! I like Clark though. Smart guy.



Author's Response:

Clark is my dude of the hour. He sees things coming the other guys don't see. Right now it is get out while you can time on the P-Ranch.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 27/01/11
Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 69.2

I hope once Ceasar finds out, he forgives, and speedily! They are so good together.

Author's Response:

I agree. These 2 really are good together.

Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 06/02/11
Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 92.3

LOL! MY! MY! MY! Look at miss Leesha! Glad you made that short and sweet. I didn't want Leesha loony for too long. Now its time to deal with Ceasar and his issues.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I didn't want her loony for long either.

Thanks for commenting!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 07/04/11
Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 68.5

Wow....Rae....that chick is truly something else. What exactly, I dont know!

Ricky....what can I say....

Victoria....money got a hold of her, geez! Whatever it takes huh.



Author's Response:

I don't quite know what Rae is either. lol. I know what she's not though. She is NOT Caesar's wife anymore. lol.

Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 05/02/11
Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 71.2

Yeah, not a good move. Not a fan of tricks like that. Subrina is smarter than that, and this is an emotional reaction more than anything.

Author's Response:

This really is an emotional reaction. Subrina's a strong woman, but even she is not immune to making foolish decisions in the name of love.

Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 17/02/11
Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 68.2

Hmmm....does the crazy chick have AIDS?

Author's Response:

Keep reading, you'll see....

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 03/02/11
Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 68.3

She's pathetic. Really? Did she actually think that would work? She shows up after all this time and what? Thirteen years!! She might get further if she just told him what was going on. He isn't heartless, she is.

Author's Response:

You're soooo right! Rae IS pathetic and don't forget desperate.

Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 04/02/11
Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 70.2

Awww...now that's what I like to see! Long overdue Salethia, and well done Subrina. And I hope Salethia checks the twins with the quickness when they start in on Subrina as well. That's a little monster of her own creation.

Author's Response:

You're so right, the twins ARE monsters of Salethia's own creation. They never would've treated big sis like that if she hadn't allowed it.

Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!



Author's Response:

You're so right, the twins ARE monsters of Salethia's own creation. They never would've treated big sis like that if she hadn't allowed it.

Thanks for commenting, Flikchick!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 13/02/11
Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 58.2

Dont know where the heck I've been by not reading this story, but I just read the entire thing! Yes, it was that good! This story is off the hook! I've been captured from start to finish, and yes, you do need to publish it!! Absolutely loving it. Evetything about the characters I'm sure has already been said, so no need to say anything else right now, except, I cant wait for more.

 



Author's Response:

Wow! I don't know how or why you overlooked this story, but I'm sure glad you joined us eventually. We're 3/4 done, so you came on board at the right time.

Thanks for commenting!

P.S. And if you feel the urge to tell me what made you skip over this story initially (ie. lack of banner, cast pics etc...), please email me at suprinafrazier@yahoo.com. I like to know how I can improve my work and draw more readers in.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 16/01/11
Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 59.1

I hate that pinhead, Ricky! And nobody likes an ass-kisser Jon! He did his job, he recruited. He didn't know who Binky was. Let little Ricky stew in his own crap!

Bareback love...hmmmm?



Author's Response:

Yep, bareback luv all the way. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 16/01/11
Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 59.2

This dude needs to seek help! He's a child rape victim that never got treatment.  He's a bad a Vickie is, in my opinion. And I wouldn't advise him to act to rash about Binky. Just leave her alone boy.

BTW...I'm soooo glad Leesha didn't die!

And Karianne needs to get a hold of herself. Subrina is NOT a lesbian, so there's no chance with her at all. The fact that she looks like she's willing tp jeopardize a major career-making case like this because she cant control herself astounds me! Only because again, Subrina is NOT a lesbian!! Where does she think thats going to go anyway? Geez!



Author's Response:

Sadly, Ricky don't know how to just leave folks alone. Unhappy folks tend to want to spread their misery to others.

It was my pleasure to bring Leesha back in this revision. She never came back during the 1st draft.

No worries. Karianne has a wakeup up call coming to her.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 16/01/11
Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 60.2

Wow...lol...Karianne is some kind of stupid. Because really, what does she think would happen if she succeeded with getting the case shut down? Is Subrina supposed to suddenly be gay then?! Loving Burt, and his plan is right on.

Author's Response:

Karianne is stuck on stupid for real.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 17/01/11
Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 61.1

That went about as I expected. Avalon had to know this was coming, since she got the ball rolling.

I had Burt in mind for Avalon..hehe..so yay!



Author's Response:

I agree, SO YAY about Burt and Avalon! tee-hee

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 18/01/11
Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 61.2

Awww...this is what I hoped would happen with them. They really like one another and it shows.

Yay for taking Karianne down! And for promoting Burt! I really cant imagine what she would want.

Nice!



Author's Response:

Yes, they really do like each other. I'm glad that I was able to communicate that effectively.

Thanks for commenting!

 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 18/01/11
Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 63.1

Excuse my french, but I really hate bitches like Rae! And I dont usually appreciate women being called that, but sometimes, you gotta call a spade, a spade! That's exactly what she is. She's a whore for money, and like the idiot said, she'd do almost anything for it. Ughhh!

Author's Response:

For the record, I can't stand Rae either!

Thanks for being so honest in your comments!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 21/01/11
Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 63.2

Crap! This is going to be hard when Caesar finds out.

Author's Response:

Yes, VERY hard. I feel sorry for him already.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 23/01/11
Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 64.2

Freaky little two...hehe.

I hate Blaine.



Author's Response:

lol. I don't like Blaine either.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 24/01/11
Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 67.1

Funny. As. Hell!! Thats alll I gotta say.

Excellent.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that post so much. tee-hee.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 31/01/11
Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 67.2

Hmmm....ok then. Ricky...ughh! Blaine....ughh!!

Please let Ceasar put that skank Rae in her place. He shouldn't have pay her jack!



Author's Response:

Rae is gonna get put in her place all right. Read on and see...

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 01/02/11
Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 68.1

Good for Burt.

Author's Response:

I agree!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 02/02/11
Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 72.2

Why would Victoria and Avalon want to reconcile with a mother that completely abandoned them to that sick monster?

Wow...what a revelation!



Author's Response:

Keep reading. That question and many more will be answered.

Thanks for reading with us!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 19/02/11
Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 73.1

I'm just waiting for this meeting now.

Author's Response:

We all are. lol. A secret will be revealed therein. Stay tuned....

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 20/02/11
Title: Chapter 165: Chapter 73.4

This is BIG!! All kinds of crazy is going to come from this.

Author's Response:

You're so right, Flikchick! Stay tuned, there is so much more drama to come.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 21/02/11
Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 75.2

No surprise with Rae, but with Ceasar's birth father and all that? Hmmm. Didn't they all kick him to the curb not so long ago? Now, suddenly, they can give him the time of day?

Author's Response:

Yes, they did all kick C to the curb. Things change when folks suddenly NEED you for something.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 28/02/11
Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 78.3

Oh please! Binky acts like she cant tell at least Ricky. He'd help her out.

More drama....



Author's Response:

Binky actually COULD tell Ricky, but she ain't. That sista too scared to mess up the sweet deal she got going on. And yes, there is definitely more drama ahead.

Thanks for reading along with us!

 

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed
Date: 06/03/11