Penname: curiouslyamused [Contact]

Real name: Christie Michel

Member Since: 15/01/09

Membership status: Member

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Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Abigail was excited to be a part of the Gentleman's Advocate,a mentoring program that aided in "fixing" the delinquent boys of Ravendale Catholic,an all-boys boarding school in Connecticut. Only problem is she didn't realize the boy she was assigned to would be one of the worst and one she couldn't overlook. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16414
Read Count: 8238
Published: 16/01/11
Updated: 03/11/11


Title: Chapter 1: Lesson in Introductions

Is that Kim Jae Wook? Yay! Have you seen this?: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NuCrw8Lu_oE&feature=player_embedded

Anyway, onto constructive criticism: I really enjoyed this first chapter, despite the few spelling errors. You were able to create an atmosphere of elitism and privelege very quickly, and you established the tone of the two main characters' relationship very well. There's an imbalance in their relationship, in that he's younger than her, is a cheeky bastard, and has the ability to make her feel uncomfortable, but it's evened out because your protagonistis a smart, serious girl, who (so far) doesn't take any bullshit. I like her. And I really like him. Can't wait for the next few chapters, and wish you luck with finishing them!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I knew about Walrus I just never got around to watching a MV. Now I'm glad I did. It's inspiring really.

Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed
Date: 07/04/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

What happens when you get a second chance at your biggest unrequited crush? Plum Washington is about to find out.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2921
Read Count: 20902
Published: 16/05/11
Updated: 16/05/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Who needs a man to make you feel bad about your body when you live in a world with size zero models and monthly magazine to beat on your self esteem?"

I love stories that eschew the typical idealized super goodlooking version of a romantic heroine. Thanks for the great read; looking foward to part 2!

 

Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed
Date: 19/05/11