Penname: Bluegardenia [Contact]

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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235468
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update!

So, they've met and are attracted to each other. Great! Can't wait to read what happens next.

St. Sebastian sounds devine. My dream is to retire to a nice, beautiful island, live in a house overlooking the nearby beaches. St. John! 



Author's Response: Can I come too? I like pina coladas and white chocolate. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonderful story. St. Sebastian sounds like paradise... but we know that trouble develops in paradise as much as romance.

Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

hisss Did you here something?

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/10

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 177]
Summary: DA Banner

 

Twenty-three year old Leigh Grayson has had only one thing on her mind for the last five years: Justice. But to get justice she will have to fight one man’s sick obsession.

Will Detective Damien Crook be able to convince her to accept his help and most of all his love?

I want to say a huge thank you to Renee Banks for all her support and editing skills. Renee, you have no idea how much it means to me!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33650
Read Count: 31683
Published: 09/05/10
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Loved this story!!!

Thank you. thank you. 



Author's Response: Hey Blue! Wow! You really loved it? Thank you so much! It was my first writing. I never thought I would do it, but your words surelly give me encouragement to write the next one, Gino's!! Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Great update!!

It's starting to get nail-biting intense.

It's interesting or ironic to see that nutty buddy Michael is so distracted with Leigh that his screw ups have landed him on both the cops' and the crooks' s--t list.

Keep those updates coming.



Author's Response:

Hey Bluegardenia!

Thanks for reading and commenting. Michael is crazy (literally) about Leigh. next chapters will show a few new faces...I am trying to make this story interesting, I hope I won't disappoint.

 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/10

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Great job building the suspense entering the house.

Damn! Just when Darryl was redeeming himself from an ultra-jerk. At least he got a chance to apologize and make his peace with Leigh.

Unfortunately, with the master plan in the potty, Leigh is now on her own with a real nutcase.

I can't wait to read what happens next.

 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/07/10

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Great update!!

WTH!!! Damien screwed up!! As a gentleman... police officer... and her almost boyfriend, he should have escorted Leigh into her building and to her office.

Suspending Michael is like trying to kill a vulture with a fly swatter. He is just having too much fun messing with all of them to quit. What a sick SOB.

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Damien is kind of kicking himself for the slip! Next chapter is being edited! Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/06/10

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Yay! An update!!

A girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. And desperate times call for desperate measures.

The cops or feds couldn't keep Michael under wraps. Leigh shouldn't have to spend another day looking over her shoulder from that stalking psycho Michael. So, I can see an unlikely temporary alliance between Leigh and Gino. Damien will just have to deal with it.

I love the Leigh who is taking control of her own life. That helpless damsel thing got old. She is a strong, smart, resourseful woman. It's about time that she took control and found a way to get rid of Michael for once and for all.

Great chapter!!

Looking forward to reading more.

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Date: 04/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary: Connie thought she wanted revenge on her cheating husband. She got more than she bargained for.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 9975
Published: 07/07/10
Updated: 07/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

Loved it.

I was worried about her original plan; but she made the right choice in the end. And it sent her message home just as strongly.

Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for taking the time to let me know.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/11

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 88]
Summary:

Noelle and Trey are two individuals looking for the same thing, in Washington D.C.'s highly competitive social scene, where power and money are king. Though they are both from different worlds they both want... An Unconditional Love.

    

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I would like to send a big shout out to JUNEBUG66 for all of her help getting this story off the ground. She was a literal Slave Driver. But because of her drive and commitment, I finally got the beginning parts off the ground. So THANK YOU,  Sister girl. For helping a newbie like me :0). Hope to do us proud.

Disclaimer:  All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9393
Read Count: 23548
Published: 14/07/10
Updated: 14/11/11


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

First, welcome and congratulations for taking the plunge.

Second, great cast.

Also, I like the story premise and setting. D.C. is different and difficult to navigate single and socially.

And of course, there is nothing like viewing "prime beefcake" in the buff, no less, unaware and un-introduced.

I can't wait to read how this embarassing moment unfolds.



Author's Response:

Thank You Very Much. I love D.C. and like to visit as often as possible. This story should be fun for both of us. I can't wait to see IT unfold myself. Thanks for taking the time to read.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
Date: 19/07/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Tandra and Kevin had a wonderful wedding.  Too bad the flu makes their honeymoon opposite of that when Tandra is sick.

Barely made it, but I did under 1,000 words....YAY!!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: Tandra and Kevin's one shot adventures
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 944
Read Count: 3297
Published: 22/07/10
Updated: 22/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet story.

You've gotta luv someone to put up with that much puking and whining. lol

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/07/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 247]
Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67192
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 8: Caught Red Handed

Hmm... that was different and hot for their first time.

Tristen and James are really good together. He takes her outburst in stride and she bashes sense into his head when he needs it. They have added new twists to "make-up sex." 

I hope James, with all her scars and bad memories does not leave his declaration of love hanging in thin air. I guess she'll think that he ruined a perfect moment. What a role reversal.

 

On to the next chapter... 



Author's Response:

Originally, I was going to have their first time be soft and sensual, but something made me want to try something different because they will have plenty of times to be sensual. :) LOL, they did take make-up to the next level. As for Tristen confessing his love to her, James might dodge that for a little while, but knowing Tristen, she isn't going to be able to dance around it for long. 

I didn't realize it until you mentioned it, but what Tristen did was quite a role reversal! Normally, it's the woman that says it, but this isn't a normal story, lol! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: Just A Fool

Wow! WOW!

I guess I should stop reading and send you some love for this harrowing but sweet "love" story.

First, I'm still processing the monsters Pearl and Charles. They are actually simple in their complexity. Self-absorbed, evil parasites.Not human. Not maternal. Not even unique or special in their nastiness... except in your words, in their relationship and attempt to ruin the mind, body, and spirit of a once innocent, bright, promising girl... then they are DEVILS.

I feel for James. She did not accept that life as her fate. She deserves that happiness she is finding with Tristen. 

As is true with the life... it is blood in, blood out. James spilled hers in losing her innocence. She is prepared to draw Pearl's and Trigger's to gain her freedom.

I'm enjoying reading how this is unfolding. I think that despite the consequences,  James and Tristen will prevail.

On to the next chapter... 

 



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! :) There is no doubt in my mind that Pearl and Charles are monsters and I don't think there is anything that I can say to redeem their characters at any point of this story. James suffered from Pearl and Charles' hands and now that she is trying to rebuild her life, they suddenly pop back up. Things don't get any better though when Tristen pops up into her life because he forces her to do something she has been told not to do: trust people. 

They are complete opposites, but I think they compliment each other. He is the yin to her yang. Thank you for your review! 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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Advertising tycoon Alandra Meyer wants a child. The only problem is she doesn’t have any prospects, nor does she really want them. She’d rather cut off her left arm than rely on a man to do a damn thing for her. Men equal distractions and distractions just aren’t an option in her world. The only person she can depend to conceive the child she so desperately wants is herself…and possibly her oldest friend, Julio. However, before he agrees to be her humble donor, he has a favor of his own to ask. After a tug-of-war between the two, Alandra obliges her best friend's request. Hoping for the best but expecting the worst, she awaits said request to walk through her door that Monday morning, unbeknownst to either of them that his presence will change both of their lives forever.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 16062
Read Count: 20557
Published: 08/11/10
Updated: 15/12/10


Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning

Great start!!

So, being heavy-handed didn't work. I still think Julio is up to something about the baby issue. Ah, the sudden appearance of the cousin? Is Julio sneaking in a little matchmaking perhaps? lol

Can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/11/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

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Two troubled souls meet on a long stretch of highway and discover the road less traveled will lead them back to love.

A one shot for anyone brave enough to take a chance in life

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2693
Read Count: 2953
Published: 09/11/10
Updated: 09/11/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Road Traveled

I love this story!!

I once met a good looking dentist and his son while standing in line at WalMart for a whole hour. I was content standing there reading the rags and fuming when he initiated conversation. It can happen. There wasn't a second meeting and I don't know if I would have been as bold and brave as Taryn.

Hmm... I'm torn... I can use my imagination and continue and finish the story OR I can hope that you'll cave under fan pressure and continue it yourself.

Pleezzze? (with a Jamie pout) lol



Author's Response: Sounds like the makings of a story Miss Blue ;) Its weird how things like that can give us inspiration. LOL, I don't think I'll cave under fan pressure. I'm leaving this one as is, unless you'd like to write a second chapter and add to it yourself. I wouldn't mind that one bit :) Thanks for reading, doll!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/11/10

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 660]
Summary:

 

 

 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229078
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 15: A Mother's Love

Lawd, Mia's mother is a fresh hot mess.

She loves her boys and her baby girl. She approves of the relationship, by default; but Mia is still going to hell.

That was too, too funny. 

I wonder how the tales of Mama Ruth's trip to San Francisco will be told in Mississippi? 

Thanks for the update! Have a great weekend!! 



Author's Response: LOL Who knows, especially when Mama Ruth tells it. I'm sure she won't tell anyone who Mia is dating. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10

Title: Chapter 11: Loving Mia Part One

Lawd! (fans self) Those three are scorching HAWT!

Kale! That was a sweet emotional decision. I think we will see a very different side of Kale in his lovemaking.

This was yet another wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait for part 2!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: Everybody Loves Mia

Loved it!!

In an odd way, I'm actually glad that Kale and Aidan are a package deal. lol. They are so alike yet uniquely different that I would have a hard time choosing between them.

The downside, unfortunately, as Mia is already experiencing, men can be damn irritating and annoying and two guys equals twice the aggravation.

Kale and Aidea are lovable and quite "eccentric." If a therapist isn't in their futures, can they at least observe the rules about personal space??? Frisco is mild to chilly but Mia has got to be sweatin' all the time from all that male body heat.

Mia can't stall forever, but I'm loving the salrd pitch and seduction.

Love this story!!  Keep those updates coming!!!



Author's Response:

A therapist. LOL I did mention in one chapter that they probably needed to see a therapist for their intense dependency on each other and now Mia's being dragged into the circle. LOL Poor girl I totally agree, one overprotective, controlling, clingly man is enough, but two! Good thing they look so good and have money! 

LOL! 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/11/10

Title: Chapter 10: Protecting Mia

Great update!

Damn, I'm going to shake Mia like a rag doll! Girl, is such a buzz killer. So, she's a virgin. Kale freaked out. He admitted liking it hard and fast. He told her that Aidan is the gentle nurturing one. She knows Kale is a bit wild and untamed.

It makes sense to me that Aidan would be her first. She wants him just as much. So when is she going to stop with the temper tantrums?? Kale and Aidan are who they are. She knows that too.

As for the ass-whoppin' they put on the two guys... more power to them, especially to Aidan who obviously acted out of character.

Aidan and Mia together are HOT.

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/11/10

Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

Thanks for the update!!

Wow! The two mothers are a real trip. Rude snobs!

Mia had a right to slam them for being so insulting.

Can't wait to read what happens next!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/01/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

Tandra and Kevin's first Thanksgiving as a married couple, and they are planning a big dinner with both their families.   Emotions are high and so is the stress level...well, for Tandra.  Kevin is as cool a cucumber.

Cute little Thanksgiving Oneshot.  Happy Thanksgiving Day!

Comapanion-ish piece to In Sickness And In Health



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff
Series: Tandra and Kevin's one shot adventures
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1223
Read Count: 3155
Published: 25/11/10
Updated: 25/11/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the picture. Poor soul who burned that little ole bird. lol

Honey-baked ham! Got both the turkey and a ham.

My sister must have called me TEN times, long distance, the Thanksgiving that she did her first turkey for her husband and the in-laws. Lol.

Cute little Thansgiving story. Brought back memories. Thanks for sharing.

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/11/10

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Everyone in South Creek, Arkansas knows to stay away from the Dixon farm. No matter how tattered and worn the property may be, no matter how long its been since the true owner was shot dead on his own door step, no one dares to step on that land.

Some say a fierce heathen spirit watches over that plot and not a soul can pass its gates without being known.

Sadly, for Elwyn Connor, he has no choice.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 6914
Read Count: 8127
Published: 24/12/10
Updated: 26/02/11


Title: Chapter 6: Regret

What a welcome back!

I've missed this story. This wasn't expected; but we all knew that these guys were coming back. I'm very sorry neither Esme nor Elwyn were better prepared for them.  Poor Esme. Her suffering continues.

Hopefully, this is the worse of it. Maybe??

Untl next time...

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/02/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A Oneshot by Thespiandiva

Those innocent eyes,

That smile on your face makes it easy to trust you,

If they only knew, the girl with the tattoo, like i do....



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2798
Read Count: 2798
Published: 17/01/11
Updated: 17/01/11


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Great story! Great one-shot!

I'm intrigued... and feeling a bit greedy. 

From the feedback thus far, I wonder if you'd re-consider not making this into a full story. You have an interesting plot. The beginnings of some good characters, even Edward's stupid childish self. Why was Ben a little put off by Simone mentioning a boyfriend? Alisa and the life she must have led since the age of nine.

Human trafficking is a horrendous practise. I believe that Ben would pursue Alisa... right after he hunts down Edward and puts an ass whopping on him.

Also, the song is interesting. But what really caught my eye was the banner and the background art on the cast page. Very nice.

Either way, thank you for sharing!!!

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/01/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:
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When he left, it was the worst day of her life.  But he made her promise to always wait for him.  Ten years later, did she keep her promise?


Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10532
Read Count: 5895
Published: 12/02/11
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 1: And We Meet Them

Love the cast!!

Author's Response:

Aww thank you!

 

-Rina

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/02/11

Title: Chapter 2: Leaving Is The Hardest Thing To Do

Good start.

Poor Bree. I understand needing to "find yourself." You cannot be a good partner in a healthy relationship without knowing yourself first. I give Trent credit for that. However, I never know what to make of guys who want you to put your life, your future on hold for them while they're off "finding themself."

I'd love to see what happens after Trent breaks Bree's heart; so, please, keep writing. MORE, please.

Thanks for sharing!!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you.  And I totally agree with you about finding yourself in order to be in a healthy relationship.  And what kind of nerve he has, asking her to wait for hiim?  LOL.  Thanks so much for the review!

 

-Rina

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/02/11

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

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 They were three...they wanted a fourth.


 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19686
Read Count: 9701
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 21/07/11


Title: Chapter 5: Deeper and Deeper

Great update!

So, MJ and Ronnie... aka Veronica... aka Ronald are fast friends now.

Mr. Max is a hoot. Seems he knows what's up!!

No, MJ, you aren't imagining things. lol Laying off the bubbly might stll be a good idea though.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/11