Penname: BelovedTangeline [Contact]

Real name: Nicole B.

Member Since: 01/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio: I'm just an average girl with dreams of doing it all one day. I love to read, and I firmly believe that the pen is indeed mightier than the sword!


[Report This]
Reviews by BelovedTangeline


Love is stronger than pride. by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 76]
Summary: Llanview has moved on since the opp attack left Evangeline in a coma. Todd is married to Blair, Chris is with Sarah and John is about to walk down the Alsie with Marty. Will things change or have they really moved on?

Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51635
Read Count: 7525
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 14/11/08

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 7: Where are you?

TODD!!! TODD!!! TODD!!!

 In case you didn't hear me the first time:

TODD!!!



Author's Response:

Beloved, I heard you all the way from China, I actually think my left ear might need an earing aid. It's nice to know you are pulling for Todd, all he has to do is get off his a$$ and maybe he'll get there on time.

thanks for the stars.

 Reviewer: BelovedTangeline Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/07/08
Unfaithful by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
starstarstarstarstar
[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Evangeline and Todd are married but how will a night stand affect the the love and trust between them?



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1553
Read Count: 985
Published: 18/08/08
Updated: 18/08/08

[Report This]

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a good story! I liked that Todd was willing to forgive Van for anything... even cheating on him *side eyes St Blair of the She-Wolves*

One thing though: there are points in your story where you use the word 'Am" instead of using "I am" or "I'm". It's really taking away from the flow of the story. Also, you might want to look into getting a beta reader to catch your spelling and punctuation mistakes.

Other than that, it's a nice story and a heckuva lot better than the tripe that's passing for SLs these days on OL. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the constructive criticism. I'm Just one of those people who doesn't have a lot of patience, hopefully I can improve on that.

 Reviewer: BelovedTangeline Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/08/08