Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: 03/03/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Was It Puppy Love or Is It True Love??? (Not good with summaries.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 24609
Read Count: 57766
Published: 09/12/09
Updated: 01/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Puppy Luv

Passion that was cuteness!! I laughed out loud at Larry..he is so like my crazy husband!! LOL

I think that DC and Julia just might make the sweetest of lovers one day!! Very sweet ...I really enjoyed it!!



Author's Response: ROTFL!!! Thank you Nene, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/09

Title: Chapter 2: Why Do U Care!

Julia is a trip..she is still a little rough (thank dad) ..It is going to take soem work to get her tamed..lol..I do think DC is up for it or at least he thinks he is...lol!!

I really like this cute little funny story sweetie...I cannot wait for more!!!



Author's Response: You are right. Don't call her Slugger for nothing.ROTFL!!  Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/09

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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Eureka

The world fractures. It trembles.

A gift for zeta

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Allison Blake
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Allison/Stark (Eureka)
Warnings: Extreme Language
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2143
Read Count: 4690
Published: 13/12/09
Updated: 13/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Still

Ok I have only seen Eureka a couple of times but that was beautiful!! Regret, sadness, jealousy and eternal love. I could feel it all through Nathan...

So sad that after he scarificed everything for a senseless pursuit of more knowledge ever needed, he had all he needed in his wife. Now she is recieving that love from someone else.

Excellent sweetie..it makes me want to read more about these people and their lives..it made me care about each one of them!!



Author's Response: Thank you neneburge! I'm so happy you like it :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/12/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

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 The Evil Dead

My name is Ash.

 

And I’m about to stuff my baby’s stocking.

A Gift for Minx .



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Family, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Tales of the Boomstick
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2010
Read Count: 3712
Published: 25/12/09
Updated: 25/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Another Bad Santa

I forgot about these two BM..they are hysterical!! I love Ash he is not your average dad by any means..lol!

That poor AJ..what parenst he lucked up on..rotfl!

Too and cute!! Great job sweetie!! Merry Christmas!!



Author's Response: Thanks nenburge! And you're right, Ash is definitely a special dad :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 2]
Summary:

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From My Favorite Things tribute to the readers.

It's Christmas 1999, and Brian and his expectant girlfriend Nicole are sharing their very first one together as a couple.  Nicole is nearly seven months pregnant with the twins and Brian is working hard to make sure Nicole doesn't ever have to, which nearly puts a chill in Christmas.

A special holiday story for the fans to honor my appreciation for your continued support!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Graphics by SPAC



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: My Favorite Things©
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4291
Read Count: 1026
Published: 25/12/09
Updated: 25/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know how much I love me some Brian and Nicole..I never read their back story so this is a interesting look at where they came from..it makes the place the ended up even more special.

Thank you for this sweet gift...I loved it!! Merry Christmas sweetie!!



Author's Response: Thank you neneburge, for reading and loving my couple.  They are so complicated to me, but so full of love...and those babies!!! dear heavens!!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 


Vampire Diaries


He’s not strong enough to fight this. He never has been.


A belated gift fic written for BlackMamba



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Bloodlust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1368
Read Count: 4278
Published: 27/12/09
Updated: 27/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

Hawtness!! Extremely so...I want more of this story..Stefan and Bonnie need to be together! Great job sweetie~~

Author's Response: Thank you nene! This was a short one, but I think I'm going to write a longer fic for the show soon. I have way too many ideas for these characters. :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 208]
Summary:

After the hostile takeover of the world by fairytale (and nightmare?) creatures, Roxanne doesn't have much of a choice but to go with the flow. She does have one major problem, though. There's this guy, see...And he thinks that she is destined to be his mate. What's the problem, you ask? Well, for one thing, he can't touch her without doing her bodily harm...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 47491
Read Count: 24041
Published: 18/01/10
Updated: 09/07/11


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Is Leo match making..I am pretty sure I know who that is and I think that is why Leo did not take her sexually because he knows she belongs to someone else.

I wonder will he biting her regulary make her a vamp eventually or does she have to take in his blood!!

There are still lots of questions..but I will patiently wait for your revealing of each layer...

Good job sweetie!!



Author's Response:

Yay! You're right on with Leo's involvement in all of this!

I pick and choose what vampire folklore I want to use. For this story, Leo would have to give her some of his blood for her to become a vampire.

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoy the story!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/05/10

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think Roxi is coming off very confused and somewhat hard to like.

I think her tantrum with Mod was bad behavior and her dislike of him for simply saying he wants to hve kids with him is silly.

I also think her relationship with Leonardo is becoming quite complex....she seems to be wanting to use him to get back at Mod but what did Mod do but be ubber sweet to her and spend a boat load of money on her to make her happy.

Any..Roxie is not  nice person on my opinion right now and I am having a hard time liking her.

I think this chapter was not boring but probably should be part of a larger chapter. The story is getting more complex when it probably should start answering a few more questions...if you ask.

I am all for a long good story but we need a little more action or romance or understanding..I think.

I truley love this story I really do but we just need something more to make us rot for Mod and Roxie ..or Roxie and whomever...ok!

You are an exceptional story teller with a great imagination...I cannot wait for more....so don't keep us waiting too long for that action!!



Author's Response:

You make a lot of good points. Roxi can be really obnoxious; and she really isn't being fair to Mod. She is really rude at times but I think of it as her rejecting the situation and/or using it to her advantage. I think it's hard to make a character (esp. a main character) seem realistic without making them do stupid/mean things.

I can see where you're coming from about the chapter length. I try not to make chapters too long because when I'm reading really long chapters I lose interest. And I would hate for people to lose interest. On the other hand, the story isn't over yet. It's actually not close to being done so it's propably still going to be a while before all the questions get answered and things are 'put to rights'. I am sooo with you when it comes to more action and romance... The understanding may have to come a bit later, though. Sorry!

I'll be sure to get some more action and romance in for you! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/07/10

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I thought Roxie was a bit hard on mod. He didnt say she was going to have all those  babies..I am sure will be offspring of offspring. Besides I think he really cares for her. It was also very insensitive and immature to bring up his passt relationship with Adele in a way to hurt him. I was not happy wit Ms. Roxie's behavior at all!

Now it appears we see ugly evil demonic Mod and he may not be what anyone wants!!

Good chapter sweetie..sad for Mod though..still team Mod!!



Author's Response:

First of all, you're ahead of the game about the whole offspring thing!

And yeah, Roxi was the ultimate jerk in this update. She actually is blowing things out of proportion but all of that is resolved later, much later. It'll be a while before those two are cozy again.

There will be more demon Mod in the future. He hasn't played all his cards, not even close. I'm glad you're still Team Mod! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked this update!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/10

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ok I am starting to like our girl with Mod. He is generous and kind..he seems kinda shy with her but very careful. You can tell he cares about her a lot!!

I cannot wait for the next chapter I need to know more before I decide if I agree he is the man for her!!

Ok I am gooing to beg for pictures of our cast unless I missed them..I love picturing them!!

Great job sweetie!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like Mod and Roxi together. It's pretty much the first time they get any play as a couple. But there's still a lot more story to go!

I hope you like this chapter. I'm kind of nervous about the next chapter, though. When I post it, you'll see why.

As for cast pics: I have been debating this in my head for the longest time!!! I feel that as a writer I should be able to describe characters and leave the rest to the reader's imagination; but at the same time I feel like it would be cool to post pics. I'm so conflicted!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/10

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ok somehow I got really behind in this wonderful little fic but I am all caught up now!

I love Melissa and her relatonship with Parker seems a little strange..she is his true mate but does not love him..very strange but cannot wait to read more on them!

If Leo takes Roxanne's virgnity how will she mate with mod or is that what is suppose to happen between the two of them!!

The fact that she is so sleepy leds me too believe he changed her to vamp not had sex with her..but I guess we will have to wait and see..

great job sweetie..I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I've been able to hold your attention with this story!

Melissa and Parker do have a strange relationship but there will be more about them later.

Roxi's relationships with Leonardo and Mod only get more complicated from here on. I can promise you that. Lol

And you'll see what happened between Leo and Roxi in the next chapter. I promise!

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/05/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I really like mod and i am very suspicious of Sam. It is appaent Leo's friends ae as nice as him and seem quite deadly. yes roxie you are in over your head so stay away from sam. I want her and mos to workout but she has to give him a chance!!

Great updt sweetie...moe more more!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked this update.

With Roxie growing more comfortable with Mod, there will be more Moxie interaction. But she is going to have other things to think about and work through.

Sam is an interesting character. It's actually his character that's held me up a lot in terms of writer's block and such. I think this chapter does him justice, though. We'll be seeing more of him.

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/10

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Very interesting..we now add a witch to the mix and Leo's son..hummm..something is up..cannot wait for more!!

Author's Response:

On Alex: I know! It seems I never run out of supernatural characters to add. But as of the next update, I'll be pretty much done adding characters. I made the party an event where we meet the rest of the significant characters.

On Samuel: He's a live one, but you'll see him in the next update.

And I'll be sure to have that out for you very soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Ok I really like this story..so quirky and funny..but slightly scarey and eery. You just don't know what to expect. There are so many questions.

Who is Mod..or what is mod?? Why does his touching her hurt her? How can he heal her? Why does he seem so fragile?

Where did Leonardo go? What does he do? Is she his mate or Mod's?

So many questions...how this world come about??

This is so much fun...I can hardly wait to read more!! Good job sweetie!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story! I love reading and writing suspense!

I can tell you only a little about Mod. He's is cursed. He's not really fragile but that will be explained when I explain what he is.

Leonardo is a businessman. That's not really important to the story.

To make it clear, Roxi is Mod's mate. The story just takes the scenic route...

I actually had a chapter that told how the humans were 'overthrown' but it was pretty gruesome. I might include it later.

Again, I'm glad you like the story! Please keep reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


Being Human


She’s definitely not just about making tea.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Annie Sawyer
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Annie/Mitchell (Being Human)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1718
Read Count: 2050
Published: 01/02/10
Updated: 01/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Friend is a Four Letter Word

I love these three..to be honest I kinda always pictured  them in a three way..lol. Very cute , sexy and sweet!! Loved it swetie!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/10

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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 Psych

"Just so I get this straight, what you’re referring to is a gathering of parishioners around large vats of cooking grease and not the grainy dry good?"

For NubianOki



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Other
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2420
Read Count: 14206
Published: 04/02/10
Updated: 04/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: God is in the Fish Fry

I laughed so hard at this one I thought I woukd cry!! I don't watch teh series enough to know all the storyline but i catch it from time to time and you nailed them perfectly BM. I could actually visualize everything they said and did which fit their characters too well.

I loved Gus; sister too, is she a real character from the show? If she is not she should be just the way you wrote her...

This was very cute and funny BM...I hope you do more with this duo!!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/02/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

  I love I love I love
This dream of going upstream
I love I love I love
All the trouble that you give me

-Feist - "The Limit to Your Love"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3213
Read Count: 3552
Published: 08/02/10
Updated: 08/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I really enjoyed it but what's up with Jacob..I thought he loved her,,,how could he just let her leave like that and why all the secrecy...her brother knew they had something going on anyway!!

Very good but I need more more more...!!! Good job sweetie!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

2ndS&H

A story about a woman and the man who possesses her.

The second installment of the She & Him Series.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: She & Him
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4132
Read Count: 7853
Published: 28/02/10
Updated: 28/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Vermillion

Ok I feel so bad for her I could cry!! How is ever going to get this demon out of her life. H is slowly killing her. He says he want sto marry her and them to have a family..that would destroy her for sure...she is taking medication when he is leave her ..she cannot do that for life...He is cruel and brutal to her as demons are so how could a humna survive that kind of life. She has to escaoe or destroy him..but how!! I want her free for her own sanity...and God forbid they have a baby..spawn of Satan is the last thing she needs!!'

This so good...I hope we don't have to wait to long for the next story in the series...this is so good and so well written...bravo sweetie..bravo!!



Author's Response: Neneburge, Layla and Maximus have a very intense relationship where the lines of love, lust and hate are blurred. And to me it seems like they both dont know whether they want to escape. But for Layla's sake i hope she finds her happiness whether its with Max or not. Anyway thanks for your review.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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 Merlin

Gwen wakes to the sound of Arthur's deep and steady breathing and feels very much the same.

Not like a Queen at all.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Guinevere
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Gwen/Arthur (Merlin)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2191
Read Count: 11037
Published: 28/02/10
Updated: 28/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Girl I miss these two so much!! You write them just as I wish they could be Black. Innocent, wickedly submissive,  and naively sexy Gwen and strong alpha experinced but very in love Arthur. I wish we cold see them this loving on the screen but i will take it here in out own fantasy land..I wil happy when they return...you make me miss then even more!!

Beautiful BM..love this two and this much too short story!!



Author's Response: I miss them too nene :) I'm glad you liked it though. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/03/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 113]
Summary:

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Jonathan Denson isn't what you'd call the life of the party but when he enters a room, he commands attention. The only problem is, the attention he craves isn't the attention he's getting. It's just too bad that the only person he ever truly wanted isn't ready for what he has to offer. Left with no other option, John decides that he's sick of leaving romance up to fate and takes his love life into his own hands.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended    

Huge shout out to KKMonroe, formerly CPM09, for my title. This story would have been called something I wasn't completely satisfied with if not for her genius. Thank you, lovely lady :)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12160
Read Count: 25902
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ok I lovvvve the beginning!! I cannot wait to see where you are going to go with this..a love tri angle maybe?? I am so excited!!

Good start NaNa!! Let's go....

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/05/10

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Rochelle is uncessarily bitchy..really..I kind of realy dislike her sometimes!!

I absolutely like Kaleesa and her and John make a greeat couple...I think I am team Jalessa!! yep definitely!

I cannot wait to see where this goes and who winds up with the prize that very handsome sexy John Denison!!

Great job sweetie..it is getting very interesting indeed!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/10

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Sorry I am not a Rochelle fan at all!! I love Kaleesa and I dont want John to work it out with rochelle she is a witch!!

Poor John , he loves a woman that is afraid of committment and in love/lust with a girl too afraid to show her feelings too!!

Geez!

Great updt sweetie I cnnot wait to see how this ones winds up!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

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When they were young, Kendal and Keoni hated one another. But as they grew into young adults something changed. Now, on the verge of adulthood, they'll come to discover that the ones they've been looking for were right there all along.

A one shot for Nene and the Summer Prompt Fest.

 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5755
Read Count: 15825
Published: 04/05/10
Updated: 04/05/10


Title: Chapter 2: When we were young adults

Ahh ha!! The tables have turned!! Is this the first sparks of young love on the horizon..I'd say yes it is and it is so sweet and refreshing!!

I love reading her thoughts  and interactions with her friends..they are so spot on and perfectly suited for that academic teenager.

I really like Kendal..smart/pretty and quick wit!! I think once Keo realizes what catch his best friend is things may change in the relationship dept..

I am loving this sweetie..it is perfect!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/10

Title: Chapter 3: When we were in love

Ok what..are you trying to make me cry Na Na!! I was so excited about the ending..them finding love and what their lives were like afterwards. That took me totally by surprise but it was beautiful!!

I am kinda sad that his life ended..I think it is good we do not know when or if they had a life together after the prom ..that is for our imaginations..but we do know they loved each other their entire lives...that is what is most important!!They shared love...

I loved it sweetie..beautiful and beautifully written..what an awesome writer you are such a wonderful talentl!!

Thank you giving me this wonderful story!!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Ne! I debated about this ending but I wanted to do something different. Life is full a happy and sad and I wanted to do a story that encompassed both. But you're right, the most beautiful thing about their love is that it was true and it'll never die. Thank you for letting me share this gift with you :)

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/10

Title: Chapter 1: When we were young

That Kendal is something else..I love her already!

 Ok but I screamed out loud at this part." He's got a mop of sandy hair that needs a haircut and chicken legs that jut out from khaki shorts. I'm sure he'll grow into them one of these days. But for now, he is so ugly and annoying and mean. I can barely keep myself from pushing him down ....this sounds just like something a pre teen little tomboy girl would say..lol..Ok theire mothers could be me and my neighbors sad..but true lol!!

You captured their thoughts and emotions perfectly..

You can tell they are talking about themselves growing up so I know it will all work out but I am anxious to see how they arrive at their final destination of love!!

This is so much fun already weetie...great job!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/10