Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: 03/03/09

Membership status: Member

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40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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For Love & the Game by bana05
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[Reviews - 122]
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Takeshiro "Shiro" Inoue is a star catcher in Puro Yakyū, the professional baseball league in Japan until injury forces him out. An old contact with the American Major Leagues has him returning to the States and to Lydia Holmes, one of the best pitchers he has ever faced and his best friend whom he'd met right before he'd started his career.  They have been close for eight years, the majority of which had been restricted to online interactions.  But now that they are on the same soil, his career isn't the only Shiro is interested in reclaiming.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 47035
Read Count: 17411
Published: 13/11/10
Updated: 02/03/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Ok they are sexiness and I a so loving them together!! I know we gotta a lot of story to go but I was so hoping they would let go and be wild and crazy cause that Shrio is sexy as heck!!!

I cannot wait for more of these two ..I already like them both!! I am sure we will hear more from those sexy brother too!!

Great start sweetie..long time no see...but you are back with a vengence!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, last year's NaNo was more of a sequel so I couldn't post it up here, but I'm glad to see folk haven't forgotten me!  And Shiro...well, they weren't ready even though their bodies were.  Gotta ramp up the tension a little more :p

bana 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/11/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Lawd I love this story!!

I love Lydia..strong , smart and talented!! I love how she is clueless to how much Shiro adores her and wants her well she was until maybe the couch..lol.

I love Shiro, strong, silent, extremely sexy and fine.

I really like Deanna...she seems to be every girl's mom dream, smart, beautiful, caring and supportive!!What she aspires to be one day.

I cannot wait to see what happens between, I have a funny feeling this Bryant fellow may actually have a thing for Lydia..but we will see...Shiro has pretty much had her to himself though neither of them realized it...let's see what happens with competition enters their lives!!

Ok the end was a sexy explosion....Shiro can take my fingers anytime he wants!!!

Great job sweetie...I am loving this story so much I hate for the chapter to end!!..More more more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! These two are a great challenge for me as a writer because they are so purposeful and don't do anything without thought; but love...isn't as cerebral as I think they would like it to be. :)  I hope you enjoy future updates!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/11/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Ok first Shiro with is quiet dignified sexy alpha self is my dream man..he is so smooth with his sexy self he just drops the most beautiful things on Lydia so unexpectedly and blows your darn mind!! What he said about thwie daughter being beautiful the sexiest thing I have heard in awhile..I wanted to eat him up myself!

and him feeding her was panty wetting hawt!! I love how he treats Lydia..perfect!

Shiro's family is wonderful..I love hsi dad an how he demands respect without any effort! I see who Shiro takes after he remains me of his dad...in the way he treats Lydi!!

I love how his family loves her already..and his parents treat her like their real daughter and how his dad wanted to know his intentions with Lydia on a serious note..I loved it!!

So many things about this story I love..I could rattle on forever..it is a awesome story...I love Lydia and Shiro together...they feel like friends!!

Great updt sweetie..great story!!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! They are a really wonderful family to write. One of my favorites--almost right up there with the McKensies! But considering it's that same universe, that suprises me none.

 And Shiro definitely has some Daddy Shinobu influences! All the sons do, actually.  Next chapter will have more family time so I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I loved Lydia's conversation with her mom...her confession of love for him warmed my heart so much..it was so sweet and real.I could really picture her saying just those words and as a mom of an adult young woman..it would have made me smile and touched my heart too..especially if my daughter brought home a Shiro!! 

Her mom gave her good advice about the birds and the bees..actually very real advice and she seemed to have taken it to heart!! 

Shiro is a special man..beyond gorgeous/sexy and 100% alpha....he treats a woman like a woman should be treated ..with respect. admiration, lust and love!! He is a good catch and Lydia has him on her hook!!

I think they are adorable and very sweet together...and I see marriage and babies in their future!!:)

I laughed out loud when all 5 five men stood up at Bryant's comment about Lydia..it took me a minute to realize the fifth man was Igor..lol..Shiro comment was deadly cold and I am assured Bryant knows he meant every word!!

I really love these folks...everyone of them...even Igor has a small place in my heart after coming to Lydia's defense..but Shiro's family ..his mom and dad especially..I love...and Lydia's mom is the best!! You write them so real and honest..you really can picture families just like them...you are hitting this one out of the park sweetie..great job!!



Author's Response:

*is verklempt*

 

Thank you so so much for your comments! They really are appreciated.  Everyone's is--I have few words to express it! *hugs*

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/11
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Lawd Lawd those two are hawt as firecrackers and I love it!!!

Beyond their sexiness however is a deep abiding respect for each other. I love how Shiro was very up front with her father and saying he would not force Lydia to do anything shee did not want to nor would he stand in her way. How he would not say I love you at this time because it might be seeen as unfair presure to stay instead of going and how he explained to her ..they could still be husband and wife while she pursued her dream...that was very nice!!

I love how Lydia wantd her dream but also wanted her man...and but was not willing to give her man up for that dream..she told him what she wanted and did not leave any doubts!!

I loved it..I loved this story...these to are one of my favorite couples and that darn Shiro puts the sexy in alpha man....I love him!!

Excellent writing sweetie...you make these two so real..we cannot help but love them!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it and these two really are fun to write. :)

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/01/11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

First of all ..they are sexy as heck!!! I still want to have Lydia's man for myself for a couple of hours!! Shiro is so sexy...he loves her with his body and his words!! Lydia is sweet and kinda innocent with Shiro..she lets herself be vulnerable around him only..I love that about them!!

I love that Lydia's dad is going to finally ask her mom to marrry him..that was very sweet!!

Lydia's talk with her dad very mature and frank as was Shiro's conversation with her dad..I like Otis a lot!!

I cannot wait for the proposal...I cannot wait for them to finally get hitched..lol!

I love love love this story sweetie..great job!!



Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, the men in this story are some of the favorite of mine, definitely.  I appreciate you reading!

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Date: 03/03/11
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Loving Mia by katherinemadison
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 660]
Summary:

 

 

 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229084
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11

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Title: Chapter 15: A Mother's Love

Lawd I love MaMa ruth..I laughed so hard I cried!! When she said it smells like sex in here I spit out my water..then told the child she need to clean the car so people dont think she has a weird ordor,,I was screaming!! rotfl!

I knew she would put 2 and 2 together though..the boys are obvious;y in love with moa and they dont hid it well!! I think it is way sxy that they cannot hide their feeling too!

Now I wonder will the boys families be as acceptying of Mia as her mom was of them...even if they are going to hell!!! rotfl!!!

Great updt sweetie..it was fun ad wayy funny!!



Author's Response: Your response had me laughing. Glad you liked it so much. Too bad not all parents are going to be like Mama Ruth in accepting their relationship. *sigh*  Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10
Title: Chapter 22: Mia's New Life

Now that is the life....when they get rid of the crazy..which I really believe is the guy Jasmine set her up with more and more..then they can reallt complete Aiden's list!!!

Twin girls sound perfect cause those women will rule that house for sure....!!!Keep em coming sweeetie..it is soo godd..



Author's Response: Aidan would want twin girls LOL. But we will see! 

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Date: 09/02/11
Title: Chapter 21: Prank Call

I am trying to guess who it is..I think it is either the boy who jasmine tried to fix her up with or the old white man Jasmine was dating...we will see but his crazy behind has picked the wrong one this time!!

The boys families are a trp..Kale's dad is a big racist bully like his mom but I do like Aiden's dad..at least somebody has sense in the family.

I love the thought of them getting married!! Which one will make it legal..what kind of ceremony?? I love them together...and making it official is going to be beautiful!!

I hate this story is coming to an end,it is one of my all time favorites ..I wwill miss the kids so much!!

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Date: 09/02/11
Title: Chapter 25: The Miracle

I never thought I would love this story so much but these guys loved Mia so much...you couldn t help but love them!!

I lover Aiden, sensitive, tender , caring, fine and compassionate....the model type!!

Kale..strong, sexy, alpha, no nonsense and fine....the sexy alpha type.

Mia perky, cute , loving and a perfect match for both of these men!!

I loved how you made them come to life and made us cheer for them all the way through...you wrote hem perfectly.

I will miss them so much but I am happy they got their babies..twins..one for each...and two for Mia...it just feels right!!

Great job sweetie..Thank you for this masterpiece!! 

 

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Date: 17/02/11
Title: Chapter 18: Torn

Ok I was starting to feel so badly for Aiden...I know she was mad at him and teh boys are very controlling but they do love her endlessly..she had to know that and that they were very selfish with her as well.

I don't think Aiden will ever make that mistake again...and even Kale may calm down some...I am so relieved they made up because I could not take a break up either. The boys put it all out there for her..I just want them to be happy!!

Oh boy a baby maybe..I think everyone will be happy about that but Aiden's parents..lol lol!

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Date: 14/01/11
Title: Chapter 20: Secrets From The Past

Eric must be the rapist..well he is about to get a box of whoop ass opened up on him if he tries anything with Mia!!

Ok that blonde got an elbow to the gut and almostt a little more fromn that little fire cracker..the boys are protective of Mia but she is just as protective of them!!

I am glad they are getting there past out in the open..it will assist them in framing their future!!

OK THE THREESOME WAS OFF THE CHAIN THIS TIME..DOUBLE PENETRATION..OH YEAH BABY!!

Great job sweetie...I do love this story!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! 

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Date: 29/01/11
Title: Chapter 14: Mama Ruth

Mia's mama is a trip!! I think she may be snooping too much..Mia and the boys better be careful!!

I worried about Kale..maybe should have told her mom she was dating one of them to take the pressure off...I dont know..mama is smart hiding their relationship from her will be very hard!!

Great updt sweetie...I cannot wait for more..!!!

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Date: 13/12/10
Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Surprises

Rut roh!!! Mama is in the house..lol!! This might not be pretty and Mia is on her period tooo...we dont have a lot of patience when we are misrable. I cannot wait to see what happens!!

Ok the boys are cute with Mia but they treat her like a new toy , instead of their new woman. They are not treating her as an adult for sure..more like their child and they are most over protective parents on earth.

This you belong to us and you are mind has to work both ways..they have to belong to her as well..they all have to be equal partners if their arrrangement is to be successful!

All that paranoia has too stop before they make negative happen..

I am so glad she is not pregnant ,..they are just getting to know each other..and they are still very young...let them get comfortable as a trio against the worl before they create a life together!!

Love love love this story sweetiie...you are doing your thang!!

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Date: 08/12/10
Title: Chapter 24: Eric

My boys to the rescue but Ms.Mia was trying to handle her business first!!! I love she did not bow down to that trash Eric though it almost cost her life!!

The boys opened a huge bag of whip arse on Eric and I am sure Kale made him pay seriously for touching our mia!!

I am concerned about the baby?? Does this mean she was not pregnant?? With only one chapter to go (crying) there is so much to cover..maybe you can stretch it to two more chapters???

I absolutely love this story!!!Great job sweetie!

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Date: 12/02/11
Title: Chapter 11: Loving Mia Part One

Why should Mia have all the fun!! I want one of those sexy as heck men!! Lawd they were wearing that sista out..what a way to lose your virginity.

But they are still so loving to her...Aiden is one sweet talking gorgeous man...and sexy as heck. It was funny when he said he always thought he derserved her..lol.

Kale insecure..I am not shocked though and that is why Mia choose Kale I think.she is a loving person and he will probably surprise us with his tenderness.

I cannot wait for more...Absolutely hawtness sweeetie!

Great job!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review I love the way you described the Kale and Aidan, I would think you've met them in person. LOL 

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Date: 01/12/10
Title: Chapter 12: Loving Mia Part Two

Lawd that was hawtness..sexy hawtness!!Poor Mia will not be able to walk tomorow. She will nred soak in plenty of hot water and let her poor body heal. She is better woman than most who could not have taken one of them being a virgin , let alone both!! wow..

No baby yet..they need to get to know each other as a threesome first ..then marriage ..then a baby or two!!

I love this story ..cannot wait for the morning after!! somebody is gonna be walking a little funny lol! Great job sweetie!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/10
Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures for Loving Mia

I just started reading this wonderful story yesterday and I am hooked.

I love Mia and the boys and how their elationships have blossomed...I think Mia will come to undersand that Aiden as her first was a good idea even though the boys didnt give her chance to make that decision ...also the boys, espeecially Kale , are going to have to let Mia be herself and makee her own decisions good or bad..she did evnetually choose them afteralll....

Great job sweetie!!Cannot wait for more

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Date: 29/11/10
Title: Chapter 16: Aidan's Plan

I really love how much th bos love and want to protect Mia but it can be suffocating sometimes too..Mia is not going to be happy when she discovers their plan...but if not happy leads to more hawt buck naked sex I am sure the boys will not care..lol

I love how Kale was trying to get Mia mad for more intense sex,,,they are too much and both guys are wayyy sexy!!

I cannot wait for more sweeetie..excellent hawt sexy..drooling upd!!



Author's Response:

They mean well, they just don't know how to go about it lol . These are men who are use to getting their way. 

Kale is a trip isn't he? This was one of my favorite scenes.  

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Date: 22/12/10
Title: Chapter 23: Deception

Jasmine traitor cow...drug Mia in the arms of this psycho!!! What a friend..so scared for own life that she would give up Mia's what a piece of work!!

Eric the rejected want a be boyfirend/blind date...really why I am I not surprised especially since I know Jasmine brought this crack head in their lives.

I hope Mia whips his tail before the boys get there and finsih him off..somebody needs to show this fool all women are not helpless slutty bimbos like Jasmine!!!Whip his butt Mia for all the women he has hurt and for trying to kill your men!!

It si getting good sweeetie..I cannit wait for more!!

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Date: 11/02/11
Title: Chapter 17: Jealousy

OMG..Mia should have known the boys would be following her everywhere she went..they are already crazy jealous and Andrew trying to kiss her was over the top.

He had to have seen her walking around on Aiden's arm all night. Mia really should not have let Andrew get that close. She knows her boys. Yes, the boys are wayyy to possessive but I think in this situation they have just caused.

Mia might have a chance to talk to Aiden..he is normally rational so I think Andrew better be glad he is not now facing Kale..or he might be dead. I hope this does not damage their relationship or make them even more possessive.

BTW I was laughing hysterically with the boys dreaming about a pregnant Mia in the sundress , barefoot with her hair flowing..it was hysterical..they are so gone!!

OMG sex with two in back seat of a car..uhh yeah..too hawwt!!

Welccome back sweetie...the updt was off the chain good!!

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Date: 08/01/11
Title: Chapter 19: Meet The Parents

I am ready for a baby and all the crazy fuss the boys are going to create if Mia is having their babies..lol! 

Kat I always like that twisted very funny piece you add in each updt...You always have a big belly laugh from me..from Mama saying car smells like sex, to Kales making Mia angry to have angry sex, and on..this time Mia telling these old bats that the Negro may be preggars by their precious sons..that was priceless!! 

I love this story ...is not only just a hawt threesome story but they are very loving and devoted to each other a real family!! I really love that..great job sweetie!!

I hope our Mia is preggars the boys are gonna be nuts..lol !!

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Date: 22/01/11
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Caution by Candice Caine
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 675]
Summary:

 

 

Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

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Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11

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Title: Chapter 24: Something New?

Why does she need to go to LA to be a song writer...songwriters can live anywhere....especially NY. I don't blame Kammie for not wanting to give up on her dream cause in a way that does make it seeem like Lamar has won..but she does need to step away for awhile till things calm down or till Lamar is found out ...then she can go back to Broadway if she still wants too!

I love how much Gianni and Kam depend on each other for support that is the beginning of a great relationship!! Kass finding out the truth was wayyy funny!

When is Lamar going to get his..he is still making her life miserable and getting away with it!!

Great job sweetie..I love how ypu never keep us hanging for long...and always deliver the goods!! great job..



Author's Response:

We shall see what she decides! ;)

Kassie and Kam are too much together lol!

Oh, lord, Lamar, what will happen to him lol?!

Thanks so much!

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Date: 19/12/10
Title: Chapter 22: So Dominatly

Hawtness I mean hawtness!! Gianni has turned little Kammie out and she is a super freak now!! LOl LOl

They were hatness but also very loving and sweet. Kammie is very sensitive to Gian and that is sweet...also tender with her man's feelings...that is so sweet!! 

Gianni is an animal and a sexy as heck animal at that..If he laid it on me like he laid it on Kammie..I would love him too!!

Girl Candy you are really writoing a special one here..I love it..great job!!



Author's Response:

Lol, poor thing!

You can't help but love those two! :)

Thanks so much!

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Date: 17/12/10
Title: Chapter 9: The Date

AWWW Kambree you were suppose to be stronger and kick that punks butt..now look at him all cocky and stuff cause he got you to kiss him back..damn damn damn !!

Poor Kam is a virgin and she is dating the devil himself...I can only hope the devil chnages and learns to care for a woman the right way!!

Another great updt sweetie..good job!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!!!!! She should have gotten the holy water!

Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 03/12/10