Penname: neneburge [Contact]

Real name: Anita Brown

Member Since: 03/03/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

40+ year old mother of two..married 20years to same fella...who is extremely patient with me and loves it when you girls right the naughty cause it makes me amourous as he puts it..I just say horney..rotfl!

I am currently taking care of our neices who are 4yrs and 8yrs my (my kids: daughter is 21 and my son is 23) and it makes me feel young!!

I love to read. I love meeting new people. I love talking (as you can tell).

I work too hard but I am extremely grateful to have a job at this time!

I am very active in my church and with organizations I believe in because I believe that actions speak louder than words!!

I put God first in my life, my family second , my friends third and everything else falls into place!!

I am very happy I found this place and you wonderfully talented ladies!!! You make me smile, laugh, cry (rarely) and enjoy reading again!!

  

 




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The Art of the Steal by Reese
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89882
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10

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Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Ten

Ok I think the professor just needs to tell Col the truth. I think if that was him outside the restaurant, the misunderstanding are going to get crazy now. He si assuming she is seeing Rocky and sh is assuming the women is taking him from her...it can easily get crazy if no one is matue enough to tell the other what is on their mind and in their hearts! I worry about our kids..I want them to be ok!!

Reese girl you are on a roll and I am enjoying every word!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/08/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen

Well now that is th secret..that was not bad at all..I could even deal with Aiden being the theft as long as h never hurt anyone and he still loved our girl..lol!!

Collista handled it very maturely coming to her man's defense was awesomeness....they both together will get to the real reason that cow Carla is there and they will together figure out how to destroy her and keep her out of their lives forever!!

I am loving this story sweetie..you are doing your thing!! Great job Reese!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Nene!  Yeah, the secret isn't as ominous as it seemed to be, is it?  LOL at your accepting Aidan even if he was a former crook as long as he hadn't killed anyone.  Oh, and he still loved Collista.  I love it!  A dedicated Aidan fan, I see. 

Collista is finally coming into her own and giving us some signs of perhaps the man who raised her, her grandfather who had to have been a fairly tough cookie to establish a successful corporation at a time when black businesses of the magnitude his became were anomalies.

So here's to Papa Jonas Dixon's granddaughter.   Carla may just have met her match!

Thanks for reviewing.  *hugs*

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/09
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Eleven

This is ridiculous!! Are they both children!!Why doesn't he just tell Collista what the deal is so that neither of them have to go through all these changes. Now this is gonna get real crazy!! What could this cow have over him that is worth losing everything for...it is silly to allow this to continue until they have both hurt each other through what they perceive is happening to the point of no return..geez folks grow up!!

Loving this story sweetie...I needs more!!!

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Date: 04/09/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Twelve

Good they are finally back...it tookj a good old fashioned hard quick blow out sex ob to bring them back to their senses...

Now they need to join forces to defeat that cow..she is up to something and willing to pull Aiden down with her and he is going to need his woman and her friends help to stop her!!

You go Reese..you are doing your thang with this one sweetie!! Loving it!!



Author's Response:

yes, Aidan and Collista have still got it, and will need to come together to get the upper hand on crafty Carla.

I'm so happy you're pleased with the new chapter, nene.  Thanks for the encouragement.  *hugs*

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Date: 07/09/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen

LOove them both..the professor is extremley sexy and perfect for our girl..she is perfect for him..I am glad they are really starting to realize that !!

This was sexy, sweet and romantic!! I loved it sweetie!! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Nene.  Glad you liked the chapter.  The fun is going to start right soon, and Collista and Aidan deserve a bit of alone time. 

It's going to be a bumpy ride. 

Also, my apologies to Red.  I called her Nene in my response to her review.  Sworry Red. 

Thanks for reviewing.

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/09/09
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Seventeen

Little Miss Colista is diggging out all the info she can to help her man..I hope Aiden can see how much better it is when they work toegthee..

You know I did not realize Colista was not 21 tears old yet..Dr. Bell is really robbing teh cradle..rotfl..!!

I loved how she worked her step mom and Dad to get the answers she needed to without them even suspecting anything was wrong!!

I will be glad when the threat of her being his stident is over and they can come out from hiding!!

Great job sweetie...it is coming together right nice..I cannot wait to see what happens whe Aiden mets Papa!!

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL, Nene.  That's why Aidan was so reluctant to get involved with her.  He thought he WAS robbing the cradle. 

Collista straight up snowed her peeps without them being none the wiser.  I'm proud of her, too.

Thanks for reviewing.  Oh, and yeah, Aidan meeting Ben should be...interesting. 

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Date: 30/09/09
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Eighteen

That darn Aiden is one jealous fellow...just when it seems Collista has reigned in her jealous the Professor spends a large portion of the night fretting over some young guy his lady could careless about..aww Aiden!!

I am worried about what this cow might try to do to them now that Collista had embarrassed her and thrown her out of Aiden;s bed..she is a sneaky cow so it will be something!!

I an so nervous about this event I just want Aiden and Collista to be alright!!

Reese girlie this story get smore complex and intriguing each upt..I love where you are taking Aiden and Collista...this story si excellent!!



Author's Response:

LOL, Nene.  What can I say?  The dude is sprung!  

You know Carla is not going to take that punch and chalk it up.  So yeah.  Everyone had better be on their mettle.

Thanks so much, Nene. Glad you're enjoying the story and that it's meeting your expectations.

Thanks for the review.

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Date: 02/10/09
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Nineteen

Ok Reese that was fierceness honey..hawt, sexy, raunchy, absolutely off the chain!!

You are writing them hotter and hotter...sexier and sexier and more and more loving...I rally love these two..

Collista turns Aiden into an inexperienced young boy, schooling the teacher on how to love..I thought her handling him and his reaction was priceless!!

I love that Col friends are on board to help Aiden...I want this to turrn out well for him and Col...they are going through so much to be together before that cow showed up now she could cause tear them apart for ever...I know Iris and David will do their best to help Aiden...I just hope it is enough!!

OK emotional, horney, little sick, is our girl preggars????Hummm

Great job sweetie..I know I say this over and over but it is true ..I love this story more each updt!!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/09
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty

Darn Aiden and Col..are hawt as heck together!!

So they are finally going to the Gala. There is so much at stake here, I hope neither of them screws this up.

I cannot wait for more sweetie..great job!!

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Date: 09/12/09
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-One

Lord that cow has set Aiden up. He is going going to come off as the theft and the wicked witch of the west will get away again. Where is Collista and Iris they are suppose to have his back. I knew something was up when she all of a sudden could not get the perfume bottle to work...good grief this is a mess. I sure hope nothing happens to Aiden and he does not take the fall for any theft!!

Child we need an updt quick..I cannot stand Aiden being in trouble!! Great job sweeetie...I thought Aiden was going to kill Jake..lol!!



Author's Response:

LOL.  I knew you'd be upset with Carla doing more stuff to Aidan, Nene.  Yeah, Carla is slick and kind of has the upper hand on Collista and Iris this go around or so it seems.   

I'm going to get another update out as soon as can be.  lol  Don't you worry.  Aidan is one jealous puppy, isn't he?  I love it!  :-)

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Date: 12/12/09
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Two

I knew it..I knw that I had gotten that painting and they were setting Aiden up. Those kinds of theives don't go through all tha trouble for nothing. Now Aiden and Collista will have to come out the closet with their relationship if she wants to keep him from jail. That will mean his job will be over and reputation ruined. That witch got she wanted..she ruined him one way or another...

I just hope their relationship does not take a hit. They have been through so much already..If h has to lose his job, h should not have to lose his girl too!

Loved loved loved this updt sweetie....so glad my story is back!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Aidan is down for the "count", (pun intended lol), and it's up to Collista to come to his aid.  The next chapter won't be long in coming. 

Thanks for the review. 

 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/01/10
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Three

Girl this story is freaking off the chain good..I love suspense as much as romance...Aiden is the bomb and brilliant...I want to know more....

Tobias sounds like he does not play..a bad a" old man..I cannot wait till this all unfolds...I would bet more people are involved in this heist than just who we suspect!!

It is soo good!! Loving it sweetie..more more more!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  That's high praise indeed, nene.  I'm a suspence girl myself as you can see, and like you, I adore smart men.  That's the muscle I'm most interested in.

You like my Toby.  I call him Toby.  LOL  

Ask and you shall receive.  A new chapter is on the way.  And thanks for reviewing.

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Date: 03/02/10
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Four

Reese girlie..this is a masterpiece...

Such an intelligent, make you think, sexy, exciting and emotional story!!

The evolution of the Aiden and Colista's relationship from stuudent teacher infatuation to a full on adult grown up affair was beautiful to witness.

We loved the sexiness, the craziness, fun and emotional roller coaster these two took us on and it made us love them all the more.

The twist and turns in this story were so thrilling , youcould not help but cheer the good guys on and want ti rip teh hair out of the heads of the bad guys,

I am so glad Aiden was vindicated and his father revenged.

I hope we get to see hear more from these two...they are meeting the parents and their relationship has to come out of the closet,,,rotfl!

This story is a treasure sweetie and you told it well! Bravo bravo bravo!!



Author's Response: Thank you, Nene.  I'm truly humbled by your praise.   It really means a lot.  *hugs*

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Date: 28/02/10
The Heart of the Matter by Reese
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
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Pathologist Alexx Woods has been widowed for well over two years now.  Promoted to Chief Medical Examiner, she’s flourishing professionally.   Friends and colleagues at Miami-Dade’s CSI department have been wonderfully supportive, especially bad boy CSI Ryan Wolfe, who, to the surprise of everyone, has gone above and beyond the call of friendship in his quest to ‘be there’ for the team’s favorite ‘mother’ figure. 

Yet as Valentine’s Day approaches, life is about to change once again for Alexx.  It all starts with a misunderstanding and the arrival of an unexpected visitor.  The startling revelations that ensue compel her to delve into long suppressed emotions, confront rigid societal conventions and her own deep seeded fears about loving again.

 

 

A Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Rylexx: CSI Miami
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41347
Read Count: 15309
Published: 27/02/09
Updated: 11/08/09

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

awww nice ending sweetie....I am so glad they are going to make a go of ut cause they are HAWT togetheer..no really he loves her and her family and she loves him so they can make it work, It was not easy but it appears they have finally got it together...

Great story sweetie..great job!!!

 

What;s this sequel you say...!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, nene.  Yeah, Rylexx finally appears to be on the same page.  They are going to give it a go, and yes, we will see where it takes them...but that's another story.  lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

 

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Date: 12/08/09
False Pretenses by bana05
Rated: All Ages
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Summary: Martha thinks it is just a thank-you gift...but the Doctor knows otherwise.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Cannon, General
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: None
Series: Doctor Who Series Three Postcards
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 837
Read Count: 3434
Published: 27/03/09
Updated: 27/03/09

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Title: Chapter 1: False Pretenses

Love it sweetie..very cute!! This is part of a series?? I need to go and read the entire series now!! I want more...

Author's Response:

Hi!  Thank you for reading!  Yes, it's part of a series, so just click on it in the summary box and you'll get to all of them, or you can click on my user name.  I hope you enjoy them if you read them!

bana

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/03/09
Peacetime by denny
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Matthew Sirk is a half-demon, half-human time traveller in love with two women and not certain where he wants to be. The only thing he is certain of is that he has to complete a dangerous mission, which just might save the world. But for him to succeed, he has to forgive an old friend and make a choice about the women in his life. 

And of course, he's running out of time.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 13041
Read Count: 1969
Published: 31/03/09
Updated: 30/06/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK you got me!! I want more..I want to know about these foks , their backgrounds, how they fell in love and where they are going, why she is so afraid of something ahppening to him she is being a real beotch to him now and who pray tell is the woman that dies in the beginning!!

Great start sweetie..you go my full attention!! More more more!

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/04/09
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is getting so interesting...I have like a million questions!! Who is Kimi? Why is Artemis so ademant to ruin his relationship with Sonia? Why is he risking his life for this last mission? More about his background and how he got to this place. More about Sonia and who is his other love that he has to chose between..I really am enjoying this story sweetie..can hardly wait for more!!

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Date: 02/04/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok they might fight hard but they love even harder!! That was seriously HOTTT!!! I actually like Sonia and Matt together...she is strong and he loves and respects her because of it even though she can give him a really hard time!! Wonder what is up with Kimi and why she wants to see him...long as she is not making a play for Matt I am alright with it,lol. I cannot wait for more..this was smoking!!! Good job sweetie..

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Date: 09/04/09
Baby of Mine© by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

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Sequel to It's All About You. The second installment of the series Love Bears All

Baby of Mine is the story of a young man (Brian Keith Santi) and a young woman (Nicole America Mendes) growing preciously in love and looking towards the future of building a life together. Every thing seems to be going well until tragedy strikes the young family. Brian finds himself standing alone in the face of fear and uncertainty but rises to the challenge of fatherhood and dares anyone to doubt the woman he loves and the family few believe is even worth it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55656
Read Count: 18499
Published: 23/04/09
Updated: 26/03/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Beautiful beginning sweetie..I want a Brian badly!! I havd nit read the first stiry so I will have to go back to that one after this one!..I feel something is a brewing..I am kinda anxious to find out what..long as the perfect babies are fine and their love survives I think I wll be ok!! Great start sweetie..cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks so much for visiting my fic neneburge! so glad you enjoyed reading...yes Brian is the cat's meow!

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Date: 26/04/09
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Is it wrong that I really wanted Peyton to kick Liz's behind..not go to jail but just wipe that witches butt!! She makes me ill!!

Ok Peyton and Greg...ok well ..I like them both I know she is married but...I guess she should do the right thing ..but!

 I understand getting over the past but her future is worrying at the foot of her bed and sleeping in that nursery and they need her..she got get over all of this and come back to her family!!

Ok I am finally caught up and so loving this story!!!

 



Author's Response:

Nope! Not wrong! LOL!

Peyton and Greg are a visible recreation of the emotional struggle of two forces meeting with a single cause in mind...to find strength in the globule of uncertainty.  It echoes the friendship that Jonathan and Nicole shared (but no kiss transpired).  I am not going to write that, because it is not going to be an element that could mess with my bubble (Nic / Brian).

Love me some Nic/Brian.  They are such a beautiful mess!

As for Nic's spiritual walk...she's getting the rest she needs as well as finding the peace in the closure her heart had sought for so long.  But if she won't come willing she may need an escort to drop her off...show her what she's turning away from!

It's all in the way of love!

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying...so much more to come.  Funny this story was only to be about 10 chapters.  I could never tell this story in that limit.  I'm glad I stretched the canvas.   Jonathan was a element that came to me but I needed an integration point.  And needed a time line for his point of entry that would make the story come together--explanations to questions that weren't going to be answered in a single shot.

:-) 

 

 Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/09
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

It is breaking my heart all the pain Nicole's serenity stay is causing her family..I almost cried wiith Brian and felt La Dona' pain watching her child this way. This is so sad..the babies need their mom..why is she being so selfish....if he cannot get her back then the Elder has too...she has to come back to her family!!

I really love this story sweetie!



Author's Response: It's not her intent to cause pain.  She's really believing they are better off without her.   Thanks for reading and the wonderful review! :-)

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Date: 07/07/09
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I am so happpppyyy!!!! Finally Nicole si with her babies and they have their mommy!! Her man has his woman his lifeline back again!! I am so happy for them!! All Nicole needed was see her babies and know they needed her and it was over...St. Anthony came through big time!!

I was so happy for them all..now they can begin that wonderful life together..with two gorgeous little ones !

Ezcellent excellent excellent sweetie!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the wonderful review!!!  Yes mommy and woman is home!  Now we must make it all legal!!!  Yes...she just needed to see her family...and forget the pain long enough to take a closer look.  St. Anthony rocks!!! He's getting his wings!!!

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Date: 09/07/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I love this story so much..I will be sad to see it end though it can have it's own sequel...lol!

I love how the babies are so different but eah has the personality of the parent!! I am so happy Peyton was able to get Jonathan's snake behind to help her get them both home on the same day!!

I hope Peyton can find happiness she deserves..she is a awesome friend to Nicole and deserves to be happy with or without her husband ...

 I am glad PawPaw Santi got a chance to see and hold his grandbabies...that made me smile!!

Great job sweetie..I will be sad to see this wonderful story end!!



Author's Response: Awe neneburge...that's just about the sweetest thing I've heard! You make me smile and cry at the same time! The cast is huge so the possibilties are endless! Thanks for reading my story. I so appreciate it! ;-)

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Date: 13/07/09
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Ok Blake s a pistol..but too cute!! LB long his tummy is full and he is dry , he is cool with anyone..that made me laugh!! I am sure Blake will come around soon after sh egives daddy a run for his money!!lol

I am so glad Nic and Brian finally got to make it hawt again..and it was truely hawttttt!! They are back..and it is so nice!!

I am sorry to see this one end but it was a great story sweetie!!!Now one to marriage and epilogue!! 

 



Author's Response: Yes neneburge, it's approaching it's final destination. But you know with all of these people single and running around that something is boud to happen! So glad you enjoyed the read...now to the wedding!

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Date: 17/07/09
Title: Chapter 19: Wedding Invitation & Program

You are such a perfectionist and creative as well!! The invitatons and prrogram perfect..wow!! Everythin is beautiful!! I want to be at this weeding!!

Author's Response: Awe...thanks! You guys have been so supportive of this tale I felt you deserved something special! Another special gift is coming!

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Date: 22/07/09