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Summary:

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Private Practice/Grey's Anatomy Crossover: If there’s one man who infuriates Dr. Naomi Bennett more then her now ex-husband Sam, it’s Dr. Mark Sloan, the lowlife plastic surgeon who wrecked her best friend’s marriage.  They butt heads at every turn and their mutual loathing has endured almost two decades public confrontations and scathing insults.  When Addison Montgomery asks Naomi to tag along on a trip to Seattle Grace, Mark and Naomi’s old rivalry finds new life, but this time it ignites a passion that  neither realized had always been simmering beneath the surface

My response to TokenBlackGirl's Redlight Special Challenge



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Naomi Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Red Light Special
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6014
Read Count: 10383
Published: 30/07/08
Updated: 30/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Naomi and Mark get a little....McSteamy?

I found it Laughing

I like this one too.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 134]
Summary:

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OLTL/General Hospital

Lorenzo Alcazar's been burned.

And the woman who did the burning just walked back into his life. Once again the Port Charles Police Department has fingered him as their prime suspect in the most notorious murders to hit Port Charles. And once again, he's forced to turn to Evangeline Williamson-the ruthless criminal defense attorney who played him for a fool and broke his heart in the process.

But when night falls on Port Charles, Lorenzo and Evangeline will give into their desires, reigniting a passion that that neither could forget but threatens to consume them both.

The Second Story in the Night Sins Series.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital, One Life to Live
Characters: Dara Jensen, Evangeline Williamson, Lainey Winters, Layla Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe, Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Night Sins
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32491
Read Count: 14730
Published: 12/11/08
Updated: 27/03/09


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

Whooo! Glad I didn't start reading till it was finished.

Very nice, smooth and you got me. Got everything else before hand except why Talia had to go. That's pretty good cause I always figure stuff out. I'm serious...no for real, my friends hate to go to movies with me cause I tell them what's going to happen before it does. It's really funny-you know for me. And they never like to tell me about the mysteries they read cause I tell them who did it before the end.

Okay then, finished tooting my own horn. Enjoyed it as usual.

Thanks for the great read.



Author's Response: Thanks NicLapy :)  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/03/09

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

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Sometimes there’s a mess that some people can’t get clean. No matter how hard they try, the problem is still there, mocking them, staring them right in the face. That’s where I come in. Being an assasin has never been easier.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: The Demon Chronicles
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17517
Read Count: 27170
Published: 04/03/09
Updated: 09/06/09


Title: Chapter 6: Play poker all day at the saloon

Very interesting...I'm a little confused so you have to continue so I can catch up. :)

I like your artist comparison.

 

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starhalf-star
Date: 14/03/09

Title: Chapter 8: He took 12 rounds straight to the chest

Okay, read the last two updates and I feel more confident that I know what's going on. Thank you.

You know I love a conspiracy theory so the whole rundown by the vampire was great! And Victoria is Violet that was a nice twist. But the guy said Cassia wasn't the lost child so why does Violet like her so much? No there is more to that, got be.

And you know you have to update soon.



Author's Response:

I thank you for your review and for you perceptiveness. I will be updating very soon and maybe then you will find out why Violet likes Cassia...

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/04/09

Title: Chapter 9: Can I touch your legs, Do I make you sweat?

Alistair is the man, I don't care if he is a vampire! Whats going to happen to Median? Is Alexis that friend of Cassia's the one that makes her stuff? I wondered about that last time.

Oh just let Alistair claim her, it doesn't matter what happens after that.

WhoooHooo!



Author's Response: Haha. I enjoy your reviews, and to tell you the truth i am suprised that his scenes work out so well. Now next chapter you will find out about medina and in the last chapter you will find out about alexis. stay tuned, and thanks for your review!!!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/09

Title: Chapter 10: I'll bite it but I wont light it

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Did he bite her or mark her? I hope so cause she belongs to him now, whahahahhahaaaaaaa *cough*

Sorry I missed this. I had to go searching for it which is why I read it all late.

Thank you girl, I'm ready for the next one...whenever you are...any time now...just post it...here...soon...



Author's Response:

There is something about your reviews that make me post a new chapter... anyway thanks for reading and here is the end of the story. enjoy!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed
Date: 28/05/09

Title: Chapter 12: Epologue- Baby i look like an outlaw

I got one question for you...What happened to Alexia? Did she die? Did she live?

Okay two questions...What happened to Viper? Did he die? Did he live? Did Alistair rip him to shreds?

Sorry, okay three questions...Will there be a sequel?

Really I like this story. The concept was fabulous! Very entertaining and interesting. You should make it a series, tell us about what took place after she got turned but before they had babies. Yeah!

Thanks a lot for posting this story.



Author's Response: lol... well suprise!!! there is a sequel...its been posted..it has a cool banner so you cant miss it. And i have made a series.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/06/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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A sequel to Romeo Must Die. A young beautiful physical therapist (Perri) is consumed by a dark stranger who haunts her daydreams. A reclusive night club owner (Craven) must find his destiny before he loses all sense of his humanity. Will either be set free from the force that tortures them or will they remain shackled to the freedom and power they intrinsically possess?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: Perri Reed
Classification: Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 27289
Read Count: 17797
Published: 27/03/09
Updated: 27/08/09


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

OOOO that was him, in the bookstore, int he suit! Creeeeepy! Yey!

Next!...



Author's Response: LOL. I can't believe I missed these reviews. They're so funny. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

"Excuse me. I don't remember telling you to speak."

He got jacked didn't he? LOL poor guy. One should never take loans from men one can only meet at night.

Rule #1 from How to Avoid Getting Your Blood Drank

He really should have bought it before.

Moving on...



Author's Response:

One evidence of shiesty...doing business after dark. LOL! 

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh now I feel real sorry for him, he doesn't like to eat the humans. A vampire with a conscience. Who'd have thunk.

So now she is in his trance, and.... you stopped.

Well, you kind of write him as a good guy. So I'm confused. And Han? Yes I'm confused. But that is nothing unusual.

Till the next update!



Author's Response: I wrote Craven in the ways of Blade/Julian (Embrace). I think a concious vamp is so effing sexy. Thanks for taking the time to read. I recall you mentioning a confusing startup. It was reworked. I hope you enjoyed. I am looking forward to moving the story along. Wink

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Okay, the scrawny kid. She's freaking out. Oh yeah, things are bad.

Sorry, goto read the next one...



Author's Response: LOL. Thanks for reading.  Funny how they always take the form of someone who they least likely resemble!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Oh no! Not Desire, not Sundiata! Oh, well, I feel bad, he just wants to be human again. Poor tortured soul. But um...he is still creeeeepy.

We of course have skipped to Rule #5 in my book -- Never work the closing or night shift alone. Poor clerk guy. but why was he moaning? That could be gross.

Okay forward HOOOOOOO!....



Author's Response: And of course the birds that flock together rule...lol!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

See that's the part I hate...the ripping. Why does that have to be? I mean, can't they just stick a straw in or something. Its so...animalistic.

Thank you Perri, she has obviously read rule #2 in by book - beware of men who wear sunglasses at night. but that is a no brainer.

Okay, what's next...



Author's Response: I know...the carnal thing. I'm insanely in lust with vamps. They do things to me. The immortal thing and ripping, I could do without. But gawd it's a sexy life!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Okay so the guy upstairs is the Chang-shai? And the twins are his little vixens. And he likes the 'ugly' one. Interesting.

On to the next one...



Author's Response: LOL...Niclapy, you know vamps are strange!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Tried and true friendship is often measured in the length of compromise.

I like this line. So she is disciplined at all, but if she doesn't like Bradley because he thinks he's the 'shit' why would she be interested in the Asian stranger. She can't possibly believe he doesn't think he's the 'shit.'

Do I need to show her my line pick for the last chapter?

okay, here we go....



Author's Response: LOL Niclapy! You know that the stand offish men get the girl...and that having what is not in reach.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/05/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Trouble Sleeping Image Banner

 

Good night, sweet prince;
And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest

 

A Monica/Mohinder one-shot.

 


Story banner is courtesy of TokenBlackGirl, she of the incredible Photoshopping skills.


 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Monica Dawson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 792
Read Count: 1745
Published: 28/03/09
Updated: 28/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/03/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

Looking back, he couldn’t quite find that moment when things started to change between them.

A Cold Case story written for the March "Friend or Foe?" challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Challenges: Friend or Foe?
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3615
Read Count: 2699
Published: 29/03/09
Updated: 29/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Other Side

Oh my God! what....did that just happen, I'm sorry...did I just read a story without sex!

I'm speechless.....almost: so I liked it, that was nice. Makes me wish I could watch Cold Case. But nice character description. Nice toggle narrative. By the end I was like 'just kiss her already!'

Thanks. Oh and just joking about the sex.



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!

You're silly. But yes, no sex in this one, I just couldn't find a place for it,. But I"m glad you liked it, especially because you don't watch the show. But you should check it out when you get a chance, Tracie is pretty awesome on it. :D

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

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Show a man what he expects to see and he won't look beneath the surface.

The first story About Her



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 31439
Read Count: 14155
Published: 03/04/09
Updated: 03/04/09


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven

This was totally explosive! I don't know if I commented on it before. I read both parts. Very twisted, I liked it. But I have to tell you Bruce Wayne is one of the Gods I pray to every night. I am a die hard Batman fan. I mean Superman? Whats that? Who has time for a do gooder that runs around in tights? No Batman is dark and broody with MAD MONEY honey. God he's such a turn on. And you made him turn on let me tell you.

Celina? well her character is great and stay true to the little witch perfectly. It's great. Your writing has such power, such force...it always moves me.

Thank you, thank you and thank you again.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/04/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

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He had no idea how he ended up on her doorstep.

Private Practice/Grey's Anatomy



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Naomi Bennett
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: New Beginnings
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4275
Read Count: 1940
Published: 30/04/09
Updated: 30/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Scientist

I think I was at a disadvantage reading this as I have never seen either of the shows, but I got the point and that is all the matters.

It was a nice story. Soft and understated. Though I have to say, I couldn't believe he walked out on her after she told him she was a virgin. Wrong! He came back tough.

You say you did another story with them? What was it? I'm a have to look it up. Thank you for a lovely story!

 



Author's Response:

Hey Niclapy. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.  The other story is posted here and I wrote it long before this one. Different take on the characters, but kind of similar (and a bit freaky) ;)

Thanks again for reading! 

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

 

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Tristan Danes is young, good-looking, and unemployed without a reasonably useable degree.His life gets turned upside down with the death of his grandmother and the inheritance of her small New York based coffee shop along with the mountains of debt that came with it.

Kira Moore just graduated from Boston University with a Biology degree. Her life looked good so far with the exceptions of a troubled law breaking sister and the inability to find a job. So what do these two have in common, besides 11 years of friendship they're technically married, well only technically. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 26320
Read Count: 9777
Published: 21/08/09
Updated: 22/07/11


Title: Chapter 3: The Build Up

You must update soon, this is getting interesting. I'm thinking Tristan likes Kira and Nate likes Bella - even if he won't admit it. Victoria has issues and where is there mom? And what is up with Kira? She doesn't like anyone? Or is she waiting to be slammed in the face by love. Eccentric people often do.

Thanks for updating!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading Niclapy :) Kira is a pretty eccentric person who has a lot going on that at the time excludes love/like and Tristan most definitely had some romantic feelings towards her earlier on, but in their present it's yet to be determined. Victoria does have issues and their mum will show up later but won't do much for her.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstar
Date: 01/05/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 400]
Summary:

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To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 58233
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: cast

Where for the love of God have you been? Or should I say, welcome back! Which sounds better?

I have been checking for this story...and checking...and checking...and - you get the picture.

Well, I was satisfied with the chapter so that made up for all the checking. So I'm digging the first conversation since the unfortunate turn-over of Sabine. She ain't ganna come easy. But he can manage it I think.

Waiting impatiently for more....

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstar
Date: 22/03/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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What happens when what you wish for isn't what you wanted? What happens when you bite off more than you can chew? Take a glimpse of the dark wish one woman keeps, and how her dream turned into a nasty nightmare.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape, Sexual Content
Series: She & Him
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1808
Read Count: 3737
Published: 06/10/09
Updated: 06/10/09


Title: Chapter 2: Scream

Wow, wow wow and double wow! Nice job! I know, I'm a freak. I liked it. So one question before I read the second installement. Is he a vampire?

Oh another question: You like vampires don't you?

Ha! Great story.



Author's Response:

thanks Niclapy, sorry on my slowness in the response to your review... i do like vampires and as for what our gentlemen is, well you will just have to see in the second installment whether his is a vamp or not.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/12/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8442
Read Count: 6418
Published: 23/10/09
Updated: 29/05/10


Title: Chapter 1: June 3, 1847

I am fascinated by the idea, that is to say, the implications of the banner. I enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forward to the next. Thanks for this period piece.

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed
Date: 29/10/09

Title: Chapter 2: June 25, 1847

Poor Mrs. Perl. Maybe we'll see her again later? Anyway, nice masacure!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed
Date: 29/10/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 208]
Summary:

After the hostile takeover of the world by fairytale (and nightmare?) creatures, Roxanne doesn't have much of a choice but to go with the flow. She does have one major problem, though. There's this guy, see...And he thinks that she is destined to be his mate. What's the problem, you ask? Well, for one thing, he can't touch her without doing her bodily harm...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 47491
Read Count: 23664
Published: 18/01/10
Updated: 09/07/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the most eclectic thing I have ever read. I mean the world turned upside down, humans becoming extinct. I love it!

So I see you are setting up this Leo vs Mod thing. Well I don't know whose side I'm on yet. Need more information. Do update soon darling.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story! One thing, though: Humans aren't extinct, but we'll get more into that in later chapters.

I find love triangles amusing, but that's just me. Don't feel pressured to pick a side. Things are going to get really complicated and emotional.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Niclapy Signed
Date: 16/06/10