Penname: luciangirl [Contact]

Real name: Nadia Raymond

Member Since: 02/07/08

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[Reviews - 28]
Summary: Photobucket

 

A chance encounter on an elevator causes two people to reevaluate the meaning of love and life. Can true love be met all while Chasing Venus? Can a wallflower change? Can a savvy businessman learn that love is the riskiest deal of all? Interracial romance. What happens when cultures cross, in-laws meet, and an unconventional woman faces a very traditional family?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6587
Read Count: 6466
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 20/06/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I just discovered this story and I am very excited to see how these two interact with each other. Please update soon

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 24/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 171]
Summary:

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Enter into the world of political drama and intrigue as Payton Samuels takes on the job of Director of Media Relations for the campaign of the nation’s golden boy Senator Cameron Marshall. Millionaire playboy and heir to the international fashion conglomerate The House of Marceline, Jared Marcel seeks to win Payton’s affection. Experience the back door deals in Washington…knowing everyone has an angle and no one is what they seem.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 63247
Read Count: 10951
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 20/04/09


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 "Nothing Good Comes Easy"

I just discovered this story and I must say, you sure know how to spin a tale. The plot line is really intriguing, there is the obvious love story, but also there is a hint of something sinister. My kind of story. I can't wait to read more. great job so far.

Author's Response: Hi Luciangirl, I really appreciate the compliment and feedback. I am so glad that you discovered this story. There are a lot of twist and turns...I hope you enjoy the next chapter, I will be updating soon. Thanks again.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 25/08/08

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 "Hello Stranger"

Is Jared dumb? Letting Ming go back upstairs by herself. That girl is up to something. Great update. I am really enjoying this story. You should post it on the sweetest taboo. That ladies there would lap it up.

Author's Response: Hi Luciangirl, You know men...if it were a woman it would have been totally different. The funny thing is that this part is a true story. I just got cleared for TST...you will see it there soon. Thanks for looking out! I am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 11/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 49]
Summary:

I’ve been watching him for two weeks now. He’s beautiful, absolutely, undeniably, beautiful. He’s about 6’1, with a hard, but lean and athletic body. His short haircut fits his soft but chiseled features and that smile. Don’t get me started on that smile. Every time I see it, it sends a shiver right down my spine and I almost have to sit down to regain my composure. Then, there are the lips. Those pretty pink lips. They are so alluring that it would make God himself take off a Sunday afternoon just to admire them. I think that’s what I like about him most, his lips.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9850
Read Count: 3673
Published: 14/10/08
Updated: 30/10/08


Title: Chapter 2: two

i just discovered this story, i really like the quirky, fun feel of it. i can't wait to find out more, especially about Tony.

Author's Response: ooh, i'm glad you fount it. thanks for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 17/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Spin-off story from Bonded (not uploaded yet but will be) featuring Nolan and his search for love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 734
Read Count: 980
Published: 23/10/08
Updated: 23/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Preface

I am soooooo excited about this story. I know you have to finish Bonded first, but I am sooo stooked about it. I can't wait.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 26/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Dawn Austin is a geologist, living her life in Vancouver until she's offered her dream job in Iceland only days before her 30th birthday. On the eve of her birthday,her body starts to change, and with the help of a new friend, she learns that she is a creature of myth; a Valkyrie.

Dawn is then introduced to a world she never knew existed; made up of creatures and places that she'd always thought were no more than fantasy. But her biggest challenge may be learning to live with what binds her to this world - the Elfen Lord, Hinrik. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 67135
Read Count: 8929
Published: 25/10/08
Updated: 24/08/09


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 - Truth

i am really enjoying this story. I love stories that is set in an AU. Dawn is so funny, her reactions were very similar to what mine would have been. I am looking forward to reading her metamorphosis.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 18/11/08

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Clarity

I loved her reaction at the end. That is soo "human" I am really starting to enjoy these fantasy stories. Your characters are deep and the story line is fascinating. Great job.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 25/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 348]
Summary:

Can two people fall in love after what is only suppose to be a One night stand? Nykia Walden and Antonio Bronson share a night that neither can forget. Was it only a one night stand or did these two share more than lust? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32454
Read Count: 42585
Published: 17/11/08
Updated: 11/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Kettle Woman

i just found this story, it is soo good, i love the interaction between Kia and Mel. Please update soon

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 04/12/08

Title: Chapter 8: Two Brothers

oooh i sense drama. great update. i can't decide which of your two stories i like more.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 14/12/08

Title: Chapter 12: The Right Man

You have to post the second part now. i am soo into this story you have no idea. Wilson has been redeemed a little in my eyes, but i still think he is a jerk.  Michelle needs to get out from under her father's thumb and grow up. I can't wait to see how Tony and Nykia react to each other when they meet up again.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 27/12/08

Title: Chapter 15: Miscommunication

these two are getting on my last nerve. talk about miscommunication. and why is Nykia's first reaction always to run? great update. please don't leave us hanging for too long.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 03/01/09

Title: Chapter 16: Friendly Advice

oohhh and the real drama begins. i am soo into this story you have no idea. I wish i was reading it after it was completed because i hate waiting. Please update soon.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 05/01/09

Title: Chapter 18: Unexpected Forgiveness

What a perfect ending. i thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish and I am excited for the next installment. I hope we can to see some of Tony and NyKia in Melissa and Nicholas's story. Great job.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 11/01/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary:

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In an era filled with prejudice, racism, class divisions and societal norms enter Drake and Eliza – one born into wealth, one born to serve that wealth. Whilst growing up they shared a mutual respect for one another but years spent apart made their lives take its assumed direction. Could a return visit rekindle their friendship and something more?  

Banner:  Thanks to TokenBlackGirl for the awesome banner!

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36040
Read Count: 56861
Published: 21/11/08
Updated: 14/01/09


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

a perfect ending to a perfect story. I am happy you gave them a happy ending. I am looking forward to your next story, Great job.

Author's Response:

Thank you Luciangirl,

I'm glad you enjoyed my story! I hope you will enjoy my next story whenever that is...LOL!

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 15/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 99]
Summary:

A single mother is determined to give her sons a father for christmas even if it means reopening old wounds.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 11349
Read Count: 8908
Published: 08/12/08
Updated: 25/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

oh my i love christmas romance stories. I can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 09/12/08

Title: Chapter 1: "Mommy, can we have a Father for Christmas?"

i love both of your stories and i must say you have me hooked on this one. I can't wait to read what happens when father and sons start talking to each other.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 09/12/08

Title: Chapter 5: A Man in Tears on His Knees.

WOW what a powerful apology. I am already addicted to this story. So try to give me my fix as soon as you can. LOL

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 11/12/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Melanie's life was finally coming together. Her business was thriving and she is engaged to be married in two weeks on Christmas Eve. Everything is wonderful,easy and uncomplicated until her past walks through the door.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Challenges: Tis The Season Holiday Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 8649
Read Count: 9229
Published: 15/12/08
Updated: 18/12/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

WOW I'm intrigued, I sense that there is something deeper going on that a young boy making a stupid mistake.

Author's Response: Hi Luciangirl, Seth is realizing that it is hard living with regrets and trying to make things right is not as easy as he thought. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 15/12/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Special thanks to idjunkie for the banner!

Luciana James seems like a typical single mother, working as a casino dealer and barely unable to support her and her son, she tries to make the best of her bleak situation. Colin Anthony knows theres more to Luciana than she lets on, but he didn't know how right he was. A journey neither ever imagined begins filled with struggle and hesitant love. Where one man's and one woman's lives become entangled and broken hearts are unavoidable.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6593
Read Count: 1420
Published: 17/12/08
Updated: 22/12/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I just found this story and i am already hooked. the cast is gorgeous and the storyline interesting. please update soon.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 07/03/09

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Meet Ryan a dreamer whose dreams-life has been on hold for some time now, and is starting to believe that love; love is only for fairytales and dreams are just for kids...

That’s until Mr. Right, a shy northerner with a heart stopping smile, stumbles into her life and waltzes into her heart. Enters her old crush, the Lady’s Man that never really noticed her but that’s okay, because he’s not the one who gives her butterflies anymore, or so she thought…

But what happens when Mr. Right is just right for now and not the one she always dreamed of?

Has life put love on reserve, again?

Or has her prince charming always been there and he’s just now noticing her…

love



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7472
Read Count: 17882
Published: 29/12/08
Updated: 16/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Love is for fairytales and dreams are for kids...

really good update, but just a small request can you put in some paragraphs it is really hard to read.

Author's Response:

Im so sorry about that, i had some but didnt hit the html button. but thank you so much for sticking with it and for the review. its means alot. i just fixed it, so hopefully thats better.

thank you again, Dani

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 05/01/09

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 140]
Summary:

Spencer Edwards is a happy bachelor. He’s got a great job, lives in a great penthouse, and thanks to his good genetics, a fair amount of luck where the ladies were concerned. Family was the furthest thing from his mind, but apparently, life had other plans.

 

His world is turned upside down when his older sister and brother-in-law die suddenly, leaving their two young children in his care. Spencer can barely take care of himself, and he’s not so sure he should be placed in charge of anyone else.

 

But a light appears at the end of the tunnel when spirited, no-nonsense live-in Nanny Reese Talbot enters their lives. Through ups and downs and self-discovery, Spencer learns just what it takes to be a Family Man.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 35037
Read Count: 11081
Published: 05/02/09
Updated: 07/08/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I am sooo in love with this story. I love nanny stories. Those candidates were crazy. WOW I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 06/02/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 272]
Summary:

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Art Historian Aidan Bell and student Collista Carson can't stand each other. Yet for some reason, he asks her to be his new assistant.  Although doubtful that they can co-exist without killing each other, Collista has her grade in his class to think about and so accepts the position.  One thing leads to another, and before long, the two are finding it hard to maintain their professional distance.

Then the specter of Aidan's murky past casts its shadow over the forbidden relationship.  Add a priceless painting, a ruthless art collector and soon Collista finds herself in the position of having to help Aidan solve a mystery before he goes down for the count.  Will he have enough time to teach her what she needs to know about the art of the steal?  

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:Yes
Word count: 131714
Read Count: 89885
Published: 22/02/09
Updated: 22/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Characters

great start. I really like the tension between those 2. I can't wait until the get it on.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the encouragement.  I'm glad that the reluctant attraction between these two is coming through.  You won't have too long to wait.  These two are hot to trot for each other and eventually Collista, who isn't as in tune with her feelings as Aidan is, will come to realize what this antagonism between them really is all about.

Thanks for reviewing. 

 

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 23/02/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

What an awesome surprise. I was waiting impatiently for an update and you didn't disappoint. Like Iris said, those 2 need to get it on and soon and not in public.

Author's Response:

LOL!  I know.  Don't those two need to come on already?  And yeah, a little privacy might have gone a long way towards accomplishing that. 

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 22/03/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary:

Willing to do whatever it takes to finish college and help her family out of poverty, Aurelia Bunting does the very thing that she hates – she becomes an exotic dancer/stripper. On top of that, her steady boyfriend just cheated on her with her best friend and she has a large tuition bill due.

Fresh from a breakup, too, Professor Baron Weaver is not so deep in grief to overlook the beautiful Virgin Island native that attends his brother’s bachelor’s party. There’s something about her that’s just so…so delectably unforgettable.

Since anonymity is crucial at events like these, Aurelia has no idea that the man she’s dancing for is going to be one of her new professors this year. If either of them had known, they would have never even considered finding comfort in each other’s arms that fateful night.

 

The Professor © 2008-2009 by Suprina Frazier (Mi’Chelle Dodson)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15288
Read Count: 17435
Published: 21/06/09
Updated: 21/06/09


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I just read the entire story in one sitting and screamed bloody murder when i realised that you ended it like that. I am off to get the ebook. I can't wait to read it all. great job with this story.

Author's Response:

Bloody murder? LOL. Okay, never had a reader to say that to me before. Chuckle. Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed the short story so much as to want to read more. Hopefully you'll find the rest just as enjoyable as the first part.

Thanks for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 22/06/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 237]
Summary:

 

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Broke and in debt from college, Mary Oluwanke gets a job at one of Chicago's most popular Italian resturants, Mambo Italiano. The resturant is a family buisness. And like all families this one has a great deal of problems.

Buon cibo e buona compagnia vanno di pari passo. Faccio buon cibo, così ho prendersi il merito per la buona compagnia"*

*Translation: Good food and good company go hand in hand. I make good food, so i take credit for the good company.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 23316
Read Count: 44503
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 01/09/11


Title: Chapter 8: Capitolo sette

ohhh shit, this is going to be bad. poor Mary! please update soon.

Reviewer: luciangirl Signed
Date: 10/02/10