Hi, I'm Megumi and I'm just your regular reader who love reading about Tangeline and other fandoms. And now a writer too. Well, a so-call writer to be exact. :P
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OMG, that was good Chocolate. Evangeline and Kevin going back and forward was nice. I see Evangeline had a ex to keep her needs met for a little while, but she know like we all know that she need something deep aka real love. Could the be with Kevin? Let see in the coming chapters. Now that's my Toddy, he can't stay out of trouble even if he wants too. LOL, Oooh, Now I'm real interesting in seeing how Todd fits in this blossoming relationship with Evangeline and Kevin. It should be good.
Author's Response:
Hey M,
Do you really Todd wants to stay out of trouble? The guy can't help himself...LOL!!! Kevin is trying to show Evangeline that he can't scare that easily. Since waking up from her coma she was in the habit of scaring away real relationship men...going for the guys on the fringes with no strings attach. Well I think you'll be happy to know that this story won't be as long as my Tangies. Hey I may even dedicate one of my other stories to you but it won't be concerning daytime. I have two stories on my mind and you might have an idea about one of them so keep your fingers cross that I can write them. Thanks chica para su awesome review!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
Wow, that sweet and hot chapter Chocolate. I'm glad that Kevin and Evangeline waited to get to know each other better before taking that next step. And boy, it was a hot next step. :lol: Okay, I'm going to admit it, Kevin and Evangeline were hot together, not as hot as my Tangie, but hot nevertheless. I do wish these two happiness in their future. I sense this story is coming to a close, but I'm looking forward to the close too. Thanks for writing it dear!!! *hug*
Hey M,
LMAO...Okay, I'm going to admit it, Kevin and Evangeline were hot together...I knew I just had to use the right words, movements to get you more interested...the next chapter has more in store...LOL!!!! Yeah its definitely coming to a close bc you know I can't go down that long road with these two like Tangie so on that point you win....lol!!! Thanks for reading amiga!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Omg!!! Chocolate, I love this chapter so much. Ohh, you weren't lying about the loving girl. So Hot!! But what I really love about this chapter was Evangeline and Todd coming to an understand about her love life and Kevin and Todd coming to an understanding that though Kevin has Evangeline's heart, Todd will always be her best friend. I love them strolling along at the end of the chapter. It was so cute!!! Black-eye and Busted Lip and all. *LOL* Wonderful Job Chocolate!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed this chap M, cause it took a little bit of me. Looks like I'm on that break again...LOL!!! I said let me pump up the loving some more to get M...more interested in this couple...LOLLL!!! I hate how a mind operates about forgetting to put this thought here and there but generally I'm pleased with this last chapter. Don't you always find Todd and Evangeline's friendship so interesting bc it can go either way; friends or lovers. How about I allow Kevin to die in a next update to this story and these two get together...fatchance...LMAO! bc I know you would want that story. I'll give you the clearance to write it though. Thanks for always being so supportive amiga!!! *hugs*
Reviewer: Megumi Signed
The opening chapter revisits the sad ending to the relationship of the young lovers Peter Weston and Zuri Adele.
As the years go by both their lives have strayed off into different directions. Now Peter embarks on his journey to Liria in search of a news story but also in search of closure but can his heart truly give up on its one true love? And what has become of Zuri? The woman who holds to key to his peace of mind.
Chocolate!!! :hug: I missed you and I just love the update. So Peter's higher ups had known about Zuri and his past. So basicly, the both of them were use as scapgoats. Pff, but no matter. Peter and Zuri are together, in love, and about to get married. I just fear for their safety and I hope they get out of the country soon. But Zuri has to take care of some business with the evil father of hers. I hope her mother's friend has the infromation Zuri needs to great rid of the man for good. And the love scene Chocolate..... SO HOT!!! I love every minute of it. You can clearly see how much they love one another. I can't wait to see the next update and don't worry Chocolate. This update was great.
Author's Response:
Hey M...hugs...
Yes they had a file for a while due to Zuri being Jengo's daughter (foreigner in a strange land, tracking her movements sort of deal) :) Well you listed the three great things that came out of it..:) Hey M my love scenes pale in comparison to your Tangie hotttttt love scenes...(I still hate writing the stuff...lol!) As always M thanks for your awesome report in everything and I mean that from the bottom of mi corazon amiga!!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Wonderful update Chocolate!! Noooo! about Zuir mother being dead, but something in my heart kind of felt that she was. I love how Peter and Zuri got back together. I thought it was so beautiful and loving. I wish Peter and Zuri wasn't in so much danger. Hopefully they can escape saftely. And I love adore Mother Wimbo.
Hey M,
I knew we would love Mama Wimbo, she is a creation of so many older women that I have met in my life. You know what I did, copied your story off T&E and had a wonderful afternoon delight with Todd and Evangeline at work...LOL!!! I felt it and was so sorry when it ended...I think I've lost the art of writing for these two...sadly. I was trying to come with ideas but so far its a bust. Maybe when I read your update I will get inspiration. You know I have two emails that I cant see. What is going on? Thanks for the awesome review. My mind is so tired!!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Wow, I didn't expect for Zuri to run into her grandmother. Now I'm very interest in why Zuir mother left in the first place. Peter, you romantic, he moved so he could protest Zuri. But it's in vain because they will meet each other gain and then it will be on!! Juma makes me sick. Of course he had her followed. I wish Zuri didn't have to deal with these 'tradtions' but things will get better. Hmm, I wonder where is Zuri's father is at? Thanks for the update dear and read my pm to you. I got some info you will enjoy!!! *HUGS*
Author's Response: Hey M :)
I had her run into her grandmother for a reason and you will see. Well I believe my story is almost coming to an end unless I can whip my mind into shape lol!!! Yeah things are finally clicking in Peter's mind that he is not in England and Zuri has some serious consequences to face if he persues her. Let's see what my mind can brainstorm over the weekend ;) Is this PM on Todd and Evangeline bc it seems I'll be in a tiff again since this internet cafe is moving to a seedy area. Will I ever get a break...arggghhh. As always thanks for supporting. I see you were first this time around....*hugs***
Chocolate!!! What a wonderful update!!!! *HUGS* Wow, I love the Peter was concerned for Zuri, but Zuri wasn't going any place without him. Peter marriage prospal in front of Mama Wimbo was so sweet and I flet the love between Zuri and Peter. And their first time...... HOT!!!! It was lovely dear! I just hate they are in such danger, but I hope they will make it out safely in the end. as for Juma and Jengo, I hope those two get theirs in the end. I can't wait to see the next update dear! :)
Author's Response: Hey M,
First off, I blame you for writing that sex scene...LMAO!!! or I wouldnt have done so. Glad you felt the love between these two. I wonder what my two evils deserts will be, haven't come up with anything concrete as yet ;)
Well I have finally sorted out the problem with downloading your story and so far so excellente. Although I cant read the hot stuff at work bc the security guard is right over my shoulder reading it too...LOL!!! To prove I've been reading...I loved when Evangeline told Blair off, Todd grabbing her hand and Spencer getting arrested...poor stupid Blair now she has no cake...LMAWO!!!
My great friend thanks for leaving an awesome review! *HUGS* back atcha!
Grrr, Chocolate, I wanted to actually like this Juma fellow, but he showed his ass in the end of this story. Zuri may have to pay consequences if she tries to break the engagement. Peter should had hit his ass again. You need to dismiss him as soon as possible. Oh I knew I was going to love Zuri and Peter first meeting in years. So passionate and hot!!!! Grrr again for this Juma fellow shorten their hot kissing together. Who cares he is Zuri fiancé, Peter's has her heart!!! I can't wait to see what happen next dear!!!
Author's Response: Hey M,
So you wanted to like Juma too...LOL!!! It started out that right but my mind strayed to the darkside regarding Juma...LMAO!!! Still he is important to this story as I go along and who really knows how my mind will be going along...lol!!! Thanks for going on this ride with me. I'm fascinated that you like this story considering that it isnn't a Tangie. Hey have you written your Tangie as yet? Well I have read Jordana's story and I'm suppose to have a review but my mind...ahhhh..LOL!!! Thanks for the awesome review!
Great beginning Chocolate. I felt their pain so much. Please continue this story soon!! *HUGS*
Author's Response:
Thanks M,
I'm trying to apply some emotional qualities to my characters even though its hard to find the words sometimes. Visualization is easy but the words are difficult...lol!!! Don't worry I am putting my fingers to the keyboard but all the rewriting in my head now that will be the problem...LOL!!! Have a Happy Easter mi amiga. Thanks for being so awesome!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Wow, that chapter was thrilling Chocolate. I truly feared for Zuri life. Man, I want Juma and Jengo gone like yesterday. Playing with people lives they are because they want money. I feel that Peter and Zuri don't have too much protection with the British Embassy either. So I'm hoping that the information that Zuri's mother has given to her will be the key of her freedom to the likes of Jengo and Juma. Great update dear!! I look forward the the last chapters of this story. :D
Author's Response: Hey M,
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and yes they are somewhat on their own when it comes to safety. I haven't even started the last chapters because I'm tired and something else always seems to get in the way. Maybe I need motivation before its too late :) I promise to give myself a pep talk tonight. Thanks for the support amiga!
Wow, another great chapter Chocolate!! I'm feeling Zuri and Peter pains of regret, anger, and loneiness, and heartache. They are both trying to move on, but their hearts won't allow it. That's because they are still in love with each other thought Zuir is focing on becoming a wife to somebosy else and Peter is just slipping way with sex on relationships. I find it intersting that Zuri's father is ordering Zuri to move out and Peter is in assignment in Zuri's country. I was wondering how you were going to get them back together. Great way on doing that Chocolate. I love the setting and this story rocks!! I can't wait to read the next part soon!!
Author's Response:
Hey M,
You know how I do it...You know sometimes I don't know how I do...it just comes to me...LOL!!!! Zuri has accepted her fate to live in Imamu and be married. Those goals that she had for herself in England have all disappeared. I'm glad you are enjoying my story especially since its not a Tangie...LOL!!! Tell Jordana I'm reading her story in parts...basically when I have the time...lol! Usually by days end I'm dead tired. Always look forward to your reviews and thats why I had to PM you...*hugs* Thanks for your awesome support always!!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Great update Chocolate. My heart ache when Zuri was dealing with the fact that her mother was dead and her father may have been the cause of it? Scary and sad. I'm glad Peter was there to comfort her. I know it was hard for Mama Wimbo to tell Zuir the truth about the possiblity of her mother's death, but it needed to be done. I wonder how Zuri and Peter is going to get the evidences to proved the her father had something to do with it. It should be very good. Plus I love Peter and Zuri passionate affection for one another. It was so sweet, but cut short because of repect for Mam Wimbo. Hopefully, Zuri and Peter will be able to express their love for one another soon. Thanks for updating Chocolate!! :)
Author's Response:
Hiyah M,
Are you trying to tell me that I need to add some sexual content to my story Ms. M....LOL!!! Glad to see that you are enjoying my non-Tangie fic although it takes some time to write out the scenes. A part of Peter thought it was cold of Mama Wimbo to tell Zuri about the possibility of Hisani's death but she felt compelled to do so especially with Zuri going away. It was sort of hard writing this scene - my mother is 77 so you get what I mean. All I can say M where there is a will there is a way and I already gave you guys part of the evidence. It's all connected *wink* As always thanks so much for your support!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Wow, this is so good Chocolate. I feel so sorry for Zuri loneliness she flet for the last few years and she and Peter has decided to moved on, but I have a feeling that the moment they see each other again, they aren't going to be able to move on as they first thought. Zuri's home life seem so dated yet she was there for her brothers. Her step-mother is a trip and and father some had been more understand to Zuri feelings, but at the located and culture of her people, it may not happen. Peter's parents are so concern for their son, but he are pushing them away because of his heartache. Hopefully time and love will heal Zuri's and Peter's heart especially with each other. :) Thanks for updating dear
Author's Response:
*hugs* Thanks for all your support M!
This is the type of home life that African women have to deal with sometimes and others have it much worst than this. Like I told another reviewer don't expect Zuri's father to come to her aid because they feel entitled, they are the kings of their castle.
As for Peter he believes moving to London will help him get over Zuri but he doesn't understand as yet that moving away won't solve anything. His love for her was so deep that it overwhelms his sensibilities but he will have to face her one day. It has to happen.
Of course you know me M, we are both hopeless romantics!...LOL!!! Always good to read your excellent reviews!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed Wow, this was a powerful chapter Chocoate. I'm so glad that Zuri was able to confront her father and have her justic. I wish the nut had died, but death would have been too easy on him. I love Peter being to suppotive for Zuri. They are so cute with one another. And Damisi surprise me in the end. She was ready to blow Jengo away. :lol: Great job on the update and I look forward to the ending of the story Chocolate!!! *HUGS*
Author's Response: Hey M,
Glad you enjoyed the chapter M...Yeah I thought it would be funny to have Damisi with a gun ready to blow anyone especially Juma to kingdom come...LOL!!! Yep the end is near and I don't think I have another one upcoming soon...or maybe that update to Todd Knows Best but we'll see. Again and always thanks for your great support and awesome reviews!!!
Chocolate!! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the ending sooner. I had major computer problems and just got the problem taken care of. What a wonderful ending and I'm so glad that Zuri and Peter can now live in peace and in love. Seeing all the evil ones get theirs in the end was sweet justice. We already had the talked about you retiriing for now. I'm going to missed you stories dear. :(
I'm going to PM you and see if I can send you a file about some of my little write ups I have written lately. Take care Chocolate and don't be a stranger when you can get online. *HUGS*
Finally M, :-)
I'm writing this review with a heavy heart but I will PM you why. I wondered where you were and was concerned because I said that wasn't like M to leave me hanging so I told myself something must have went wrong and there's no way for me to find out but I believed within myself that wasn't anything too serious. I thought about writing another chapter with a hot love scene but I don't have the access and finding it would have been another story.
Thanks for all the support you have given me throughout my time at the Chamber it made me expand my storytelling and want to improve my writing. To this day I'm still shy about rereading my stuff because I know I will come across some type of error that I need to change :-). When you send me those stuff I will try my best to read them all. THANKS! THANKS! THANKS!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed 
