Penname: TRaberah EH [Contact]

Real name: Tameekah

Member Since: 27/08/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Raberah


Well, I'm twenty and I started writing before I knew how to write. I wrote my stories in my mind, and I acted them out with my friends or just by myself. Crazy, I still remember those to this day. Still think about those characters and the places they took me. My second love is Music. And it's only because lyrics do not come easily to me. ^_^ I spend almost every hour of my life with music playing. I'm inspired by it and I would live off of it if I could. I love taking photos and being Crazy. My family, they're a mess, and I love them too. And what else do I love? Interracial relationships, I think they are beautiful to see. And I love the experience of them. And reading about them. Duh right? I love a lot of things. ^_^


♥ So get to know me!




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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79607
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11


Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 34.1

Lol!!! Caesar is a trip! She'd looking for you in the produce, really, dude? She doesn't need fruid and veg, oh, no, just a little bit (or big, whatever) of Caesar. This guy, man. He kills me.

When he rolled up to the P-Ranch, I thought that, too, was hilarious.

Love it.

-Peace.



Author's Response:

C is really a funny dude. I had fun writing about him.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/04/11

Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 35.2

Wow, again Blaine shows how much of an ass-hole he can be. Keeping the girls big is more important than keeping him healthy? Can they not be both? I have seen it before and it could be done again!

Goodness, I really do not like anything about this guy. He just makes me sick, keeping these girls in mental, physical and emotional bondage the way he does. All the while laying the charm on so thick some of them can't see two feet in front of their faces! His wife included.

Someone please kill him already. He's due.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

I've seen it before as well. Blaine sucks!

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/04/11

Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 35.3

For real, what now???

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Read on. You'll see...

:)

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/04/11

Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 36

Seriously, Mercedes, you could come no better than that? After he was feeling on her booty, as R. Kelly would say, you came at him with that and a scowl on your face, to boot! You might have had a chance at being attractive if you stopped showing how ugly your insides truly are. Little, big head girl!

Caesar and Bree, caking in the hallway! They are fooling no one. They are going to be a worst kept secret now that Mercedes has seen and verified with her own two eyes. Though maybe her seeing red will help in that department, I doubt it though.

Blaine has had a difficult life, but it seems like he never dealt with it right. Or at all.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Little Big Head Girl? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!! I haven't heard that in a minute.

Thanks for the comment and the laugh, TRaberah! lol

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/04/11

Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 37

Gutter-brain, SuBree, gutter-brain! Get your head in the game, as Chad would say. Focus, on Avalon's genius and not Caesar's everything else.

Goodness me, it is 4:58AM and I am trying to gather my wits and comment. Impossible.

I loved this chapter, and the aforementioned recipe sounds delicious. If you actually have it, I want it. Lol. Every time Avalon and Subrina grow closer, it puts a smile on my face. I like their friendship.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, I lost (misplaced?) that recipe in my recent move. I truly don't know WHERE it is. :( If I ever come across it again, I'll pass it on to you.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/04/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Being eighteen is hard enough, but when you factor in the shape shifting, howling at the moon, and a serious craving for rabbit and deer meat being eighteen is less than easy. Meet Edison, sister to three brothers, daughter of Josephine and Tobias Banks. Her and her family, who share the same animalistic habits, have just moved to Brookesville.

When several of the local residents go missing only to be found dead in the woods, Edison suspects it more than the everyday animal attacks. All clues point to the Taylors and their less than normal son, Aiden who is devastatingly attractive, but has secrets even his beyond strange family can't explain. But when one of Edison's friends goes missing along side Aiden's girlfriend, Edison teams up with Aiden in hopes of finding whatever is snacking on the locals of Brookesville.


Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13806
Read Count: 2542
Published: 31/10/10
Updated: 23/11/10


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

They're a Beautiful bunch.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/06/11

Title: Chapter 2: Can't Escape

I wonder what it was that Ryan said to Edison. Also I don't really understand the relationship between Edison and her brothers. It's odd, the way they behave toward her, seeing as they were all born the same day. I'd think they would be closer than they are -- or than they appear to be. It's early in the story, though, so there is probably more to their sibling relationship than I know.

I wonder why Edison is so touchy where her name is concerned. My name was unique when I grew up, I loved it, I adored being different for whatever reason. Why does it bother her so?

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Date: 11/06/11

Title: Chapter 3: Let's Start Over

Who is the young woman behind Edison's cast photo? I think she's very pretty, but does she fit, I wonder.

It's kind of obvious that "whatever" killed that woman in the woods is not human. Why they believe that to be a possibility is a mystery to me. Humans cannot, without some new-fangled torture device, inflict that sort of harm on one another. Not that we cannot do just as bad or worse, of course. It just doesn't seem likely.

Ryan and Thomas' dad happens to be a detective, eh? Interesting. Also, will we be meeting Aiden anytime soon?

I am getting a bit of a Teen Wolf vibe from this chapter, I don't know if that was intentional or not. I'd still like to see more of where this is going, though.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/06/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

 

MM 

Remember your mortality

 

Never in a million years did Liam Bourges think that the most mudane of his patients would end up turning his life completely around and make him face his demonds.

Siobhan will get the answers that she needs, even if it means causing pain to loved ones and absolute strangers, and it all begins with one, Liam Bourges

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of LuKohana. LuKohan is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1183
Read Count: 4281
Published: 07/12/10
Updated: 07/12/10


Title: Chapter 1: Characters

Bomb of Sex: Leto S. Bourges

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 93]
Summary:

Thank you for the banner Azl! 

 Quinn is ambitious, witty, and currently homeless. After a sudden breakup with her high school sweetheart she finds herself in need of an apartment ASAP. With classes starting soon she jumps at a great opportunity suggested by one of her best friends. The place is great but unfortunately she failed to read the fine print... 

Arrogant playboy roommate not sold separately.  

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 16925
Read Count: 16405
Published: 09/03/11
Updated: 13/08/11


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think you meant: Want to go to Yolk before I take you back to your place?

The transition from Noah and Quinn talking about getting breakfast to Aiden and Ava rousing Quinn from her sleep was a rocky one. Okay, A&A are no longer a thing, I can deal with that. I wish Ava wasn’t so needy, you know, I wish she would have been ice queen cold, making Aiden want her. Pulling the switcheroo, you know what I mean. Will there be a flashback later to this couch session between Quinn and Aiden? It’s a scene I would have liked to see more of.

Noah must be one unique dresser for him to recognize, straight away through an alcohol haze, that she was wearing the dude's clothes. I am on the fence again, I wanted Quinn to get a little nookie. That didn't happen, so I'm bummed. Plus Noah is a hottie with a body, you cannot go wrong. Aiden's cool, but he's been whoring it up with Ava and... everyone else basically. Quinn should get some, elsewhere, as well.

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Date: 24/03/11

Title: Chapter 1: CAST

Beautiful cast! I am in love with David, Noah and Peter! Mostly David, such a beautiful man.

 Also, what software did you use to create this collage(?)? It's kind of amazing. ^_^ 

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Date: 09/03/11

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You can see it right now, Quinn!

I love that her friends were there for her, but why could she not move in with either of them? I'm sure that it will be addressed soon, but I wondered while reading this, so... yeah. And I liked Pete, of course, still like his face, but he is a dog. And why do people say this isn't what it looks like when it so obviously IS? It makes the least ammount of sense. For every weak or ill-thought out excuse I decree that there should be mass ammounts of shooting, Madea style.

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Date: 09/03/11

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

As far as issues, I've only seen a couple missing words and a misplaced period. Wasn't searching Extra hard, because it was all good, but I don't think there were many errors anyway. But this caught my attention:

 

  • I am a pig, why do you think we Marta coming here once a week?

 

Photobucket, eh? I must look into this! SE7EN is definitely a very goodlooking man, that much is for sure. Got my Mother hooked on him, ^_^ it's quite entertaining. She's willing to go to jail for these Asian boys, man.

D.F.T.B.A.

(P.S. Leila is a trip) 



Author's Response: Error Fixed! 

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/11

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Better cool your jets there Q, you are just out of a serious relationship. Then again who hasn't ever been overwhelmed by too much hotness at once? Let he among us without sin be the first to condemn, amen, lol!

Poor Shaun, first Ellie puts his business in the street, then she slaps him and lastly she orders him BACK to box duty, damn.

I feel for Quinn, tears are second to what I hate most in the breakup process, necessary but horrendous.

I love how easily David, Noah and Aiden chat about breasts, fake ones versis real ones. ^_^ Made me chuckle. Bossy gitls, I was surprised (for a time) by how many guys are into them, now I'm all for it. It's a blast!

Quinn flipped out on Aiden. Isn't it funny that the "players" and "ladie's men" hardly ever know what to say to a woman? ~_^

Ta-Ta.

(P.S. Shaun is a cutie) 

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/03/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I enjoyed it, though I have to admit it felt rushed from jump, as if you were racing to get to the end. Alex P. as Daniel - nice. He does look... a bit high on his horse there and as if he would have boy-toys coming out of his ears, so, kudos!

Luoboutins are a pretty big deal, 'eh?

Ava - poor, poor Ava. A tiger in the sack, side-eye, OK, Ava, o-kay... In my mind, should I hear her name such pronounced Ah-va or Aye-va? I don’t know why this matters to me, but it does.

A diva debonair, slaving away in the kitchen with flair, looking fierce - all right, Quinn!

Leila is silly, I love her. I agree with HER assessment, sure Quinn is sworn completely off men. Uh-huh.

Daniel seems like a cool dude.

Aiden and David, nice, taking care of the girls, hooking up their food. Cocoa Puffs, after drinking liquor, lol?! Her stomach is about to be torn up. I remember when I tried milk after vodka, that was the first and the last time for a reason, mmhmm. I pray for her.

Being inside Aiden's head for a while wasn't horrible,  so if there was more to it this girl wouldn't be bothered by such. Yeah. Tis all.

Ta. Ta.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15/03/11

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Seeing Oppa written msde me smile, it's my favorite word after sunbae-nim. In "Boys Over Flowers" those two made several appearances and I just took to them. I wonder if when Quinn called him that, if it went straight to Aiden's groin. Seems like a possibility. And, yes, Aiden should totally check IDs. Some thirteen-year-olds look thirty-five these days, that shite will get him caught up. Heh. I enjoyed Quinn's sister in this one, and Aiden, David and Noah never disappoint when you out those three in a scene together.

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Date: 17/03/11

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice, I keep telling my hubby I'm psychich, she has always been Ah-va in my mind. She just seems like an Ah-va. Love it. Pete's behavior came out of left field and he has got some nerve labeling Leila a slut when he cheated. I hate losers that use "You ignored me" or "You didn't have time for me" as excuses for their infidelity. If you feel so ignored, you can Bounce. Oh, yeah, I said it, had to go old school, lol.

Noah is a cutie and I can definitely see Quinn making a move with him, her shaggy-haird avenger. But I wonder if they will sleep together. I mean, I am ALL FOR them doing the shag nasty, lord knows Aiden has been getting his jollies, but I hope this doesn't make things weird between him and Aiden. Eh, who knows.

Twas a good update, I enjoyed it.

Ta-Ta. 

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/03/11

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Summary:

 b


 


 They were three...they wanted a fourth.


 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19686
Read Count: 9697
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 21/07/11


Title: Chapter 1: Take a Bow

Beautiful.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/04/11

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Summary: Lorca Lark has just lost her husband and is with Child. She fears that she will lose herself because of the grief of his passing and the uncertainty of the future. She returns to Pittsburgh and finds herself wrapped up in a Brian kinney, who's gay, but has always carried a torch for Lorca. When he decides that marrying her is for the best will it be a marriage of convenience, or does brian have something else up his sleeve?

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 30938
Read Count: 12754
Published: 02/04/11
Updated: 23/10/11


Title: Chapter 1: Players

I know everyone save for Liam, Lorca, and Randall! They must be originals, or take aways from another show. I love QAF, seeing Brian's name is what made me click on this story in the first! I hope you use him well, he was a genius character. One of my absolute favorites.

-Peace.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/04/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Dee-Dee: Dysfunctional Cultural Arts Major

 

Brock Jackson: Football God in line for the Heisman Trophy and all around asshole.

 

Gabby/Gabriel Hines: Fun loving wanna be actress, & Cinematic art student.

 

Pamela Kasson: Cheerleader/Heiress; an all around snob.

 

Jake Mason: All American Football Quarterback, Hottest guy on campus

 

Ricky Martinez: Ex-Pretty boy teen model, Football Wide-Receiver

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 2839
Read Count: 2793
Published: 11/06/11
Updated: 18/06/11


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I must disagree with your Ricky; supernatural serial-slashers Freddie Kruger and Jason Vorhees I found only mildly frightening - when I bothered to be frightened at all. Whereas demons, faceless, nameless entities that work their way inside you and change you entirely - sometimes without your knowledge - render me scared of my own skewed shadow at night.

How disgusting it is, what they must have been doing beneath that cover. If it were mine, it would be one I'd forever relinquish to Denise and Ricky, for keeps. However Bordello of Blood is an interesting title, I shall look into it. Hah, Bordello is yet another name for a Brothel, I love that.

Brock treats Dee-Dee like a dumb-dumb which is why (I hope) she dump-dumped his childish ass. But a handy under the blankets in a room full of people, really? That is just nasty as all get out. That was an entertaining fight between former lovers? This lot are easily entertained, lol.

PEACE.

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
Date: 20/06/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't know... this chapter has confused me a bit. Is this how the regular narration will appear throughout? I also have a few theories on horror of my own I would like to throw out.


In movies, I think most horror films take place in small towns due to the lack of police or the lack of decent police. I've noticed in all my years, the police are never about shit in these movies. Yet in movies, mostly action flicks, with police the black-and-whites are everywhere, even when the force "can't spare anymore bodies." Plus some group of young people always "just so happen" to be going to or going through said creepy-ass town, or spending the night in some place rumored to be haunted (a prison, a hotel or an asylum), giving the killer/big bad the opportunity for ultra-violence. Also, making a tiny town unsafe sets the general public on edge if it's done correctly, the message: No place is safe enough.


Everyone knows the City is full of crazies, aged fourteen to forty, but those small towns are supposed to be where you go to escape the insanity of the city. Yet if the country/small town is just as frightening as the big city, why bother to leave the safety of your space at all? It's nice to think on, but "scary" movies hardly scare me anymore, still I am fascinated and I do enjoy them. Hope I haven't said too much, though I tend to on occasion. ^_^


PEACE.


 

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed
Date: 19/06/11