Penname: TRaberah EH [Contact]

Real name: Tameekah

Member Since: 27/08/09

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Raberah


Well, I'm twenty and I started writing before I knew how to write. I wrote my stories in my mind, and I acted them out with my friends or just by myself. Crazy, I still remember those to this day. Still think about those characters and the places they took me. My second love is Music. And it's only because lyrics do not come easily to me. ^_^ I spend almost every hour of my life with music playing. I'm inspired by it and I would live off of it if I could. I love taking photos and being Crazy. My family, they're a mess, and I love them too. And what else do I love? Interracial relationships, I think they are beautiful to see. And I love the experience of them. And reading about them. Duh right? I love a lot of things. ^_^


♥ So get to know me!




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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79607
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4

If I could I would just rate you 10 and move on to the next chapter, I am so interested in reading what will happen next. Leesha, poor girl, Ricky put a hurting on her. And he put her in a brothel, which is only little better than walking the streets. It happens too much, women and girls are mislead, kidnapped and then sold into prostitution. I feel for her and my wish is that Subrina makes it in time, but I know she won't. Man, this has left me with a heavy heart.

And I hope I remember the things that were hinted at here in this chapter when they come up again.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

Knowing that women are victimized that way was yet another reason I weaved that into this storyline. I wanted to hold a mirror up to my sistas' faces and hopefully let them see where they've let some man get into their heads the wrong way. It grieves me to know that we are often so desperate to be loved that it makes us vulnerable and easy to take advantage of.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5.1

Promise or no promise, he killed a woman. Her life is over because of him, there is no promise in the world strong enough to cover that up. And what if he does it again? Surely after getting away with murder, one feels as it it's no big thing to do it again.

Subrina, come and give that sorry excuse for a man what he's due.

*Peace. 

(P.S. I hate Ricky, too!) 



Author's Response:

Subrina is coming. No doubt about that.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 5.2

Too late.

She made her one phone call, Ricky, and your ass is grass. Because you know Subrina is too much woman not to come and investigate. I hope she eviscerates him.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

She's going to get him that's for sure. She just needs a plan and a little help. Both are coming.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6.1

Oh, damn, lol. That preacher is messy, coming up to the mother of the deceased woman he lusted after and, I think, had sex with as well. Wow. Then to take it a step further and flirt with another woman that isn't his wife: double wow and triple shame.

That repast, though beautiful, turned into a mess. I must say, Salethia surprised me in the best way this chapter. I could see my own Mom standing up for me the same way and that just brought this chapter home.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

I like that Salethia stood up for her daughter. She kinda redeemed herself in my eyes...just a little.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 6.2

It's Subrina right? It has to be her! Aww, Caesar is not trying to give the big girls any love because of his Momma and Auntie. Sad, Brina's got the thickness in all the right places. Lol. On a bad Trip - anyway.

I loved this chapter. Neelam is a crazy hot-mess, that song made me laugh out loud, and finding out where it came from made me laugh that much harder. Nana Shirley is a G, yes indeed, I love that her very presense commands respect. They all better act like thay know something about her. Mm-hmm. 

The Rev. better go home and pray. 

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was Subrina. I'm glad you liked that song. It was my favorite in the whole movie. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7

Well, all right! Leesha, you sneaky devil, writing it all down. I wonder who sent it, or if Leesha had it set to be mailed at a certain date. So that maybe she could cancel it...if she was still alive and well enough to do so. But I don't know, it seems that Leesha was on a pretty short leash. Maybe when she and Ricky were still shacking up, before the prostitution. Goodness, this has really gotten interesting.

I absolutely need to know more.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

Leesha was much smarter than Ricky thought she was. I like when folks underestimate their so-called victims. Despite the short leash she was on, Leesha did what needed to be done.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 8.1

Proving herself mode is no joke apparently. I hope her parents and sisters do not pester her much about the lengths she's gone to. It is for a good cause, above all, Justice.

Author's Response:

Subrina should be commended for what she's about to do, not criticized. 

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 8.2

That woman, the more I read about her the worse my headache became, that's what effect she had on me. She NEVER says the right thing, ever. Sweet baby Jesus, she needs... I cannot even muster the understanding, the knowledge, to let on as to what she needs...

She needs her behind kicked. That might do it. Maybe. You never know.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

Sorry about the headache, but I so understand it. Some folks just grate the nerves like that.

Kick her behind? lol. Naw, I got something ELSE to turn her around. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 9.1

Aww, aren't they cute! Too cute, I love them. Avalon, such a pretty name, and Caesar are definitely a real Mother-Son team. So many guys are this way with their Mothers, I just wish more of those Moms were like Avalon. Losing their baby boy, those women sometimes lose their minds along with him. It's good though, Avalon has instilled in him a profound respect for women - even the shallow ones apparently.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

I've seen both kinds of moms - the kind that know how to share their sons and the kind that don't. The latter kind is capable of causing all sorts of problems in a relationship.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/11
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 9.2

I wonder if Neelam (I hope I got that right) will remember Subrina/Bree’s superior posterior. A booty like that doesn’t just lose its quality, even if it's lost some of its quantity.

I am excited to see how it all goes down when Caesar, Avalon, Victoria, Blaine, the P-Ranch employees, and, especially, Ricky meet Bree/Subrina. I wonder if ol' boy will try "recruiting" her again, the way he did when they first bumped heads.

And I laugh every time I read her cover name; it throws me that none of the characters (thus far) has gotten the giggle fits the way I have. Priceless.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOL!!! You tickled me with your assessment of an unforgettable boo-tee. Too funny!

I actually started to get the giggles when I said Bree's undercover name out loud. lol.

Thanks for commenting and for the laughs!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/04/11
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 10.1

Mmm, I knew Ricky's stupid behind would try and get our girl, but, no, hell no! I actually would have liked to witness her biting his head off with he rrazor-sharp tongue. And a lesbian just because she's not into you? Come on son! That is the worst way to come to Lesbianism. Goodness me.

Hah, Caesar wants a taste, that much is for sure. 



Author's Response:

You got Ricky and Caesar pegged right. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 09/04/11
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 10.2

Goodness, moving it along, I already have SO MUCH to catch up on already. Oh, well, I'm breezing right on through!

This is great. I love that the characters recognize how much the other characters "look-alike" others. ^_^ I am looking forward to seeing how SuBree interacts with these people, quite a few of whom are shady. We shall see.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

You're making good time. I will leave the story up until next Sunday, so hopefully that will be good timing for a fast reader like yourself.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 09/04/11
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 11.3

seems like those two are really hitting it off. loving it.

Author's Response:

Yes, they are. I'm routing for them too.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 12.1

Aww, how cute is SuBree, thinking about Caesar and his... biceps, lol. Right, she is not fooling me!

Ricky and the rest of those recruiters need to stop playing themselves, looking at her like a glass of chocolate milk and. straight up, they're thirsty! I do not think so, buddies.

The same market, lol, I wonder if they'll meet over by the cucumbers or by the melons. ~_^

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!!! Too funny!

Thanks for the laugh, TRaberah!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 12.2

Goodness, Topaz, he broke up with you, what was it, a night ago? That means you shed a tear, watch Waiting To Exhale and get your Angela B. on, but stalking him? Not cool, makes you look crazy and desparate. That's what binoculars and blackmail are for... Not that I would know the slightest bit about it. >_>

I loved Caesar's thoughts in this one, I adored his rushing to her aid, because that would not have been cute. But Topaz had to come and ruin the (erotic) sweet moment they were having. I hope SuBree allows Caesar a moment to explain.

*Peace.



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!!! You are really tickling my funny bone tonight. And I adored seeing Caesar rush to help her as well.

Thanks for reading along with us!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 12.3

LOL, her name gets me every time! I loved her reaction, she shocked the hell out of me. I, too, would have disappeared from that scene. Caesar apparently REALLY didn't have love/lust for the big girls, huh. His behavior is a straightforward shock to the system of everyone that knows him.

I cannot wait to see how Avalon responds to her son's heart going knock-knock over a curvy lady.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

No, C was really into slim chicks. All that has changed now though.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 13.1

I love it, absolutely I do. It seems like SuBree is fitting right in, as to whether or not that's a good things has yet to be seen. In the future, though, I'm sure I will find out. So, Suge was once Corvette and Leesha was once Lexus. What happened to one didn't happen to the other, that's obvious, but why was Suge demoted? Or was she? Gosh, I am brimming with curiosity!

That Mercedes, and her fluffy group of minions, needs some sense knocked into them, with the quickness. And if Mercedes fell a peg or two below the rest of the girls, I wouldn't be mad, 

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

No worries. Mercedes and her minions will get what's coming to them soon enough.

Thanks for commenting, and for doing it so animatedly. lol.

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 17.2

Absolutely, Subrina and Caesar both are Sprung to the maximum; it's cute. But I am curious as to who Avalon thinks our girl Bree is really. Hmm. Who has she been chatting to?

I know the timing for a romantic endeavor is all types of wrong, but Caesar's biceps are worth it! Lol.

Author's Response:

lol. Let's just say that Avalon knows more than she's letting on.

I feel you about C's biceps.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 18

See, Caesar is getting No play. Guess he shouldn't have played with that woman's feelings. Of his own volition or not, it was a scandalous way to go about things. Plus, way to make her feel cheap, C. Oh, well, I have faith that he will win her back in the near future. ^_^

I loved Suge's back story, plus she from Jersey, as am I.

*Peace.

Author's Response:

Yes, by all means, keep the faith about Caesar.

So you're a Jersey girl, huh? That's all kinds of cool. I'm a southern belle myself - GA all the way!

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 19.1

That's my favorite Sara B. song as well, yet that verse never made much sense to me, now I know why. Thanks for that. ^_^ Now I have the urge to go and have a listen. Landslide is on, though, and I live for this song.

I love Subrina and Avalon's budding friendship, 'tis the business. Caesar is a hip-hop head, huh? Wonder how he feels about jazz. It's the music of champions, lol.

C'mon Ava, loose lips sink ships, and the P-ranch seriously needs to go down! Toria is her sister, I know, but damn it - Ricky killed a woman! And what else might have gone down in that place???

*Peace.

Author's Response:

You're most welcome about that song. Does Sara B sing Landslide? I'll look it up online.

Yes, C is a hip-hop head among other things. lol. I love all kinds of music, especially jazz.

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 19.2

Uh-oh.

Author's Response:

Yep. lol

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 20

I think she may have. If Avalon cared for Leesha as much as she says, then it's likely. If so, she'll hopefully be on Subrina's side in bringing the brothel to its hinges. Still, Avalon is her sister and she has done so much for her. But she repaid that debt years ago, so maybe that won't factor in.

Jealous of your Ma, C? Lol. That boy is a 70s style trip! I wonder what he has planned to get himself back in Ms. Bree's good books... It's going to be a scorcher.

*Peace.

Author's Response:

70s style trip? LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!

Too funny. Thanks for commenting! Loving it!

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Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 21.1

Hah, Subrina forgave him, good for her! Holding a grudge is no good, that much I've learned0. That video, just the beginning had me rolling. Love it, and the fact that Caesar makes puppets is, admittedly, creepy. Not that he makes them or that he plays with them... well, OK, that is a little bit creepy, but mostly because I hate dolls.

If he gave me one of those, I'd throw it in my closet until trash day rolled around, lol. Soon they'll be caking it on the couch. And if just one touch sets it off like that, they'll be doing a lot more than that. Lol.

*Peace. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOL!!! It's okay if you find that part about C creepy. He can't be perfect in every way. lol

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 11/04/11
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 21.2

I wonder if it's her at all and not Karianne. It probably is Avalon, though. Maybe she doesn't want her son hurt. Maybe she has more to tell my favorite undervover agent. Who knows, but her timing will live on in infamy in her son'smind. *Peace. 

Author's Response:

You're very close. That's all I can say. lol.

Thanks for commentinig.

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Date: 11/04/11
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 22.1

Avalon is a great Mom, great friend, great sister; all that jazz. She cares so much for her family, even the corrupted Ricky, it seems, which says good things about her. The fact that she's not allowing her familial ties to keep Leesha's loved ones from seeing justice on her behalf is commendable. It takes guts, even if they never know she had anything to do with it.

Although I don't see that happening. Sadly. She may lessen Caesar's hurt, it's inevitable that he's going to be hurt. Loving this, Avalon is observant, I love that about her.

*Peace.

Author's Response:

Yes, Avalon is definitely a family woman. She can love most unlovable folks. I said MOST because she ain't got no love for Blaine.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 11/04/11