Penname: TRaberah EH [Contact]

Real name: Tameekah

Member Since: 27/08/09

Membership status: Member

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Raberah


Well, I'm twenty and I started writing before I knew how to write. I wrote my stories in my mind, and I acted them out with my friends or just by myself. Crazy, I still remember those to this day. Still think about those characters and the places they took me. My second love is Music. And it's only because lyrics do not come easily to me. ^_^ I spend almost every hour of my life with music playing. I'm inspired by it and I would live off of it if I could. I love taking photos and being Crazy. My family, they're a mess, and I love them too. And what else do I love? Interracial relationships, I think they are beautiful to see. And I love the experience of them. And reading about them. Duh right? I love a lot of things. ^_^


♥ So get to know me!




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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
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Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79607
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 22.2

Aww, he wants to be with her for real, for real. I, for one, am excited, I think they deserve and would be great for one another. I even see them working through the speed-bump of Subrina's lie / FBI cover. Especially since Caesar thought it was terrible thar Ricky beat Leesha, but when he finds out that the bastard killed her, I think he'll be even more grounded and understanding as to why Subrina had to do what she's done.

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Avalon is a mess! ^_^ I love that woman, though. I see where Caesar gets his snooping skills, he got 'em from his Momma. Of all things to inherit, who knew?

-Peace.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think C & S will make a great couple. I so agree. lol. C's not going to be happy about any of the sneaky things that Ricky has done, past, present, or future.

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Date: 11/04/11
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 23.1

Wow, C, you could have at least made mention of her, like usual. That was not cool.

I definitely enjoyed this chapter. Comparisons between British and American English have always been of interest to me, because I love doing accents for my friends and family. I've yet to use them in a story, but I will soon - it's Brill. ^_^

Love this, 

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

I would LOVE to hear some of your accents. That would be hilarious! And you write too? How cool is THAT! Please share a link so that I can read some of your stuff.

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Date: 11/04/11
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 23.2

Caesar stupid, ladies and gents. Sitting with Mercedes? Strike one, two, three - ah, hell, all the strikes. And giggity, really, dude? Not your best on a bad day.

He's in hot water, I hope. Give it to him, Subrina!

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Oh C is gonna get it for sure. Subrina is NOT a happy camper.

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Date: 11/04/11
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 23.3

Love sickness, it's one ailment I'm glad there is no life long cure for. I love that SuBree lit a fire under their asses. And Mercedes, that poor girl, she really doesn't know that to get the sort of respect Bree gets, she has to first respect herself the way Bree does. It's simple, but she's conceited instead of confident.

She'll figure it out, or perish. 

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

So true about Mercedes. Every SINGLE word!

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Date: 11/04/11
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 24.1

I did indeed, yes, and it made me smile to see her loosening up. The fact that she's getting loose with Caesar is a definite plus. She needs to stop fighting it.

Hammer, Subrina, really??? LOL. A mess. I cannot wait to see how this dance battle unfolds.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Hammer. Subrina was going wayyyy ol' school. tee-hee.

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Date: 12/04/11
Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 24.2

Easier to control when she’s happy? Wow, Blaine. And Victoria is oblivious to this ass-hole’s horrendous insides. Miss Vickie, it’s a clear day, just land.

I think Neelam and Suge could be good together, but I wonder if both of them would leave the business or tough it out together. They both have so much to lose, with the paychecks they send home to take care of their respective families. Maybe they could start their own brothel, or some other sort of business to keep their families and one another taken care of.

At least Subrina’s not a contributor to the hot water bill. ^_^

I was a baby when most of those moves were hot, but I love 80s-90s movies and that video definitely made me smile! Too much fun. 

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

I LOVE that 'it's a clear day' comment. That was deep. REAL deep.

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P.S. Glad you like that video.

 

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 25.1

Adrees! Especially since it was that exact tattoo that let Avalon know who Bree Sheero actually is. That woman, man, she is slick.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Avalon is slick. lol

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 25.2

Oh, lord, lmao! That is so funny, but wrong on SO many levels. What a hook that girl's got.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

tee-hee. Yep!

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 25.3

I'm glad she cleared that right on up, got Sun-Hee to-ge-ther. Kept Avalon out of trouble and realized she does have an ally in the woman. Now, she just has to get with the son. Who is totally coo-coo-bananas over her. And for good reason, too, she's awesome.

Ricky has got a big mouth, but I knew that! Of course he just had to be there so he could start blathering off about Bree to everyone.

I am looking forward to the drama. 

-Peace.



Author's Response:

Subrina is definitely one awesome chick. I'm tryna be like her when I grow up. :)

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 26.1

Oh, damn! No more need be said.

Author's Response:

Okay. lol

Thanks for what you DID say. lol

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 26.2

I'm loving it. Poor Caesar, poor SuBree, they both seem heartbroken. Maybe she should just tell him... His Mom already knows, so, why not?

Does she wonder if she can trust him? 



Author's Response:

Subrina can't risk telling C her real mission right now. It's definitely a trust issue. At this point, the less people that knows the better.

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 27.1

Aww, there sure does seem to be a bit of drama. Caesar's heart is just a breakin' over there at the S-Ranch, poor baby. SuBree is hurting, too, but I think she'll go over there and make boo-boo all better.

More drama, more, more, more! 

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

lol. Look at your calling for more drama. tee-hee. It's a'coming.

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 27.2

I wonder what else will follow. And if Karianne will ever find out about it. I bet she does. I hope she does.

He's not that mad? Men never are. Lol. Mom once told me "Men are easy." I wonder how you feel about this, Suprina.

This is going wonderfully.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Naw, men NEVER are that mad. And your mom was/is so right. lol.

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 27.3

"On to the imminent love scene..." LOL. Seriously, best end note to a chapter yet!

I guess they will be doing the do, eh. Live long and prosper.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that endnote. :)

Live long and prosper? LOLOLOLOL!!!! Too funny!

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 28.1

^_^ Glad that their enjoying one another. He's taking charge. that's alone is enough of an aprhrodisiac to drive a woman crazy! Go Caesar! You're the man, obviously, lol.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

You got that right, TRaberah. I LOVE an alpha male.

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 28.2

Hah, lol, that last line tickled my funny bone. Work it out, Ms. Sheero, show him what you're working with!

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

tee-hee.

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 28.3

Well, she failed, lol. Just kidding, but she totally did fail at going over there to smooth things out. I mean, he is definitely a Complication and, oh, when he finds out! I cannot wait to see how this spirals.

Tomorrow.

I will find out tomorrow.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

Tomorrow it is then. Thanks for all the laughs and witty comments! :)

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Date: 13/04/11
Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 29.3

Oh, wow. This has Blaine written all over it. I wouldn't put it past that slime-ball to pull a Jack Nicholson, The Departed style.

In other news: Suge really has it bad for Neelam, coming to SuBree's room all shook up 'cause he's been arrested. Tell him that the Pokey is figurative... for prison sex. Not the kind he likes, either!

So, she did not, in any shape or form, shimmy? Aww, damn, Gina. I was kind of enjoying that imagined scene; good times, good times. I hope Subrina can work through this, maybe help Neelam; he seems like a good enough dude. You know. So, yeah, do your thug-thizzle, Bree Sheero, and bring Suge's man home! Or at least to a low-level security prison. 

P.S. Bree knows she IS going back over to Caesar's. Stop all that lyin'! To yourself, 'cause you're fooling nobody else.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

No, SuBree (as you call her) didn't shimmy. It was a brilliant idea though. Wish I'd thought of it. lol.

And yeah, Bree is lying to herself. tee-hee

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Date: 15/04/11
Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 30

I wonder. I am currently food-deprived, thinking is not currently my strongest suit.

Blaine, that Dirty Bird, I cannot stand that dude. He gets grimier and grimier, the more I read about him. Someone (Subrina) should run him over in an unmarked car checked out from evidence. No one would miss Blaine. Okay, maybe Vickie but she would get over it.

I cannot wait to see how Caesar takes seeing SuBree so soon after she floored him.

-Peace, 



Author's Response:

Blaine is definitely a grimy dude. He's going to get his. No worries on that one.

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Date: 16/04/11
Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 32.1

LoL, please already, people! You two need to jump one anothers bones or... stop all that. Both of you have stuff to do, worrying about getting busy instead of actually getting busy... with helping, nasty!

Aha, SuBree is putting her cookies on displaine for Blaine, huh? I get that, he'll be too busy ogling her to actually worry about what "retirement" means. At least that seems to be the plan. Blaine loves him some big girl trim, and SuBree just keeps setting the cookies out there without giving him a bite.

But has she underestimated him, I wonder? With Blaine, just about anything is possible.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

tee-hee. Look at your tryna get them hooked up already. LOL!!!!

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Date: 17/04/11
Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 32.2

Mental fortitude, I can dig that. Now, if only I had something that I just had to do in order to push my feelings aside. I envy Bree right about now, she has her emotions in check and I... I let mine get the better of me just this evening past. Ah, well, tomorrow (or, rather, today) is a new day, and I will find something to do. Something bigger than just these crazy, overwhelming emotions.

Thanks for that.

-Peace. 

P.S. Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

I understand where you're coming from. My emotions haven't been as much in check as they usually are. That normally happens whenever I'm very stressed though. Are you stressed? Maybe we BOTH need a vacation. :)

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Date: 17/04/11
Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 32.3

Oh, cry me a river, Blaine!

Author's Response:

tee-hee. Enuff said.

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Date: 17/04/11
Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 32.4

Suge and SuBree are cute, yet she's one more person that Subrina's gotten close to that doesn't know she's an angent. Of course, Suge might take it better than Caesar, seeing what they've been through already. Yeah.

-Peace. 



Author's Response:

I agree. Suge will take the news much better than Caesar. He's pretty stubborn. Keep reading. You'll see.

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Date: 17/04/11
Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 33.1

Yes, I've noticed that he's keeping a pretty sweet stash tucked away. It makes sense, money causes people to show their true colors and those colors are not always pretty. Subrina and Caesar have it right. Suge let Subrina know what everyone at the P-Ranch thinks. Funny she never noticed, where was all that deductive reasoning, SuBree? Was it that good-good that got you all confuzzled? -Peace.

Author's Response:

Yeah, that good-good had do strange things to a person's mind, even the strongest and most intuitive person. Real talk.

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Date: 18/04/11
Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 33.2

Caesar, sir, she has yet to become your woman. LOL! I know he meant well, but it just seemed funny to me. I've been watching a fair bit of anime lately and he took me to a place.

In my head I saw him walking away, muscles tightened in anger, hunched, moving quickly, kicking up dust and pebbles, with steam coming out of his ears and strange lines floating around his head! Then when he threw his hand up, it just made my vision that much more ridiculous.

X_x That's probably not what you were going for, but I'm glad to see funny somewhere. 

-Peace.

P.S. Do you read lesbian fiction? I have this one I've been thinking of posting, with some tweaking, in a few days. 



Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOL!!!! That was a hilarious vision you painted with your words. Too funny!

As for lesbian fiction, it's not really my cup of tea. But if that's what you wanna write, do you! Either way, I'd like to check out your writing style because you are certainly entertaining me in the comment section.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 18/04/11