Penname: Cholyn [Contact]

Real name: Brandy

Member Since: 20/09/09

Membership status: Member

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Summary:  

Anyone who thinks controlling people is a science is dead wrong.  It's an art.~ Jim Profit

 

 

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2729
Read Count: 2347
Published: 12/08/08
Updated: 12/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Alice

That's was excellent and very HAWT! 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/02/11

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[Reviews - 138]
Summary:

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OLTL/General Hospital

Lorenzo Alcazar's been burned.

And the woman who did the burning just walked back into his life. Once again the Port Charles Police Department has fingered him as their prime suspect in the most notorious murders to hit Port Charles. And once again, he's forced to turn to Evangeline Williamson-the ruthless criminal defense attorney who played him for a fool and broke his heart in the process.

But when night falls on Port Charles, Lorenzo and Evangeline will give into their desires, reigniting a passion that that neither could forget but threatens to consume them both.

The Second Story in the Night Sins Series.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital, One Life to Live
Characters: Dara Jensen, Evangeline Williamson, Lainey Winters, Layla Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe, Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Night Sins
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32491
Read Count: 16335
Published: 12/11/08
Updated: 27/03/09


Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

Thanks for the sequel! This was as interesting take on Eva. I love Rick and Eva's relationship. I could actually see them being friends.

By the words of their last coversation, will there be a future Jerry/Dara encounter? Dara is so straight laced, while Jerry is, well, a pyscho so a story with those two could be really interesting.

Not sure if I said it, but killing off Liz in Possession was so uncool. I can only take comfort in the fact that she was Elizabeth Morgan. (Liason:Sigh) 

I use to love Lucky and LL2, but that was with JJ. So forgive me if I would have liked for Talia to kill him, and Sam!  

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/10/09

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[Reviews - 404]
Summary:

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To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60674
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 18: A gift

Woot for the big bomb! LOL

This was a cute chapter.

Thanks for updating : D

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I liked it. I also liked the change and the vunerability in the character. I'm looking forward to her reaction, when she discovers the truth about her past.

Thanks fo updating again so soon.

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Date: 22/06/10

Title: Chapter 17: Hunger

Variety thanks for updating. I think Sabine was fine. Being with Ulrich is new and yet old to her, her body knows him, and her mind is still probably adjusting to that fact.  

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 29/07/10

Title: Chapter 19: the truth

lol at that ending. Sabine should know better.

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 17/09/10

Title: Chapter 14: Suspicious

I'm curious as to how Sabine will handle the truth. Will she blame Ulrich for what happened to her? Her life with Salvatore sounds like it was hell. What is Sabine to Salvator, does he have deeper feeling fo her or is it obsession. I highley doubt the later; he doesn't seem like he knows how to feel anything.

Thanks for updating

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Date: 17/03/10

Title: Chapter 2: Choosing three

I have had this in my fav for a while, but I've been waiting for more updates before I decide to read it. So far so good! I think it's funny that you cast Marsha Cross as Lorraine considering she's in her late forties, possibly early fifties. LOL I am intrigued by this story, because I know a little of what will happen based on the synopsis, and this last chapter was very promising. I am a little confused on the era that this story takes place in, and how the humans know about lycans and Vampires? 

 

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 3: Something Unexpected

I like Ulrich and Sabine, they are two people with a good head on their shoulders. I aslo hope Sabine's farther doesn't die, I can't imagine what the loss would do to her. I want to know who Salvator is, because I'm guessing that he'll be up to know good.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 4: appreciation

I really like Sabine. I know, I'm repeating my self like a broken record, but I she's got spunk, and like that she doesn't just let him lord himself over her. Lorraine and Isabella are going to be out for blood, and I sure hope that Sabine doesn't loose any.  

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 5: revenge

Hmm, Salvator is up to no good, I'm quite certain that he will be the one to do the deed. I like the back story, your doing a wonderful job at the "military"-like stuff. I knew one or both of those witches were going to try and kill Sabine. Thank goodness lycans have excellent hearing or our heroine would be dead.  

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww, they are adorable together and that was such a sweet chapter.  

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 7: reunited

Poor Sabine, I feel so sad for her and her farther.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 8: wedding

O Mee GEE, I just wrote a FULL review and it didn't take! Argh!!

SO I will just say that I highly enjoyed this chapter.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 9: A mortal no more

O boy! Poor Ulrich, he goes out to save his kingdom and looses the person he hold most dear. Salvatore is a real creep and how the heck did he get her out of the Scotland without anyone seeing them. I know that the battle was a distraction, but someone should have seen something or can he telaport someone with him?

 

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 11: proposition

Sabine has really changed. Salvatore is still a creep and an even bigger A-hole to boot. I am happy that she learned to fight and isn't just bowing down to him. Yeah, she better leave Raze, because he will be dead twice over if Salvartore ever hears about that kiss.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 12: To pass the time

Thanks for updating.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 13: Ch. 13

Me likey! I can't wait for an update. Poor Ulrich, the woman he loves is now the thing that he hates most. Not only will have to get use to the "new" Sabine, but her new attitude. She use to be sweet and naive and now she's hard and over wordly. This story keeps getting better and better, and I can't wait for the reunion. 

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Date: 14/12/09

Title: Chapter 15: a visit

That was a bit unexpected, but it's always great, when a writer knows that they're changing the characteristics of a character, and let's the reader know it. I don't know if I like her opening up so fast, but this is Sebine, so there is probably more to it.  

Vanessa is going to get a realy shock, when she discovers just who, Ulrich's lady love is. lol

Thank you for updating! :^)

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/10

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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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What happens when what you wish for isn't what you wanted? What happens when you bite off more than you can chew? Take a glimpse of the dark wish one woman keeps, and how her dream turned into a nasty nightmare.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape, Sexual Content
Series: She & Him
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1808
Read Count: 3929
Published: 06/10/09
Updated: 06/10/09


Title: Chapter 2: Scream

Yeah that was intense, but I enjoyed it I would love a back story. What is he? Where's he from? I want to know if she will ever escape? This has so much potential to be an interesting full length if written right. Of course their would have to be good guy to balance this out, because I don't see him conforming.

Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 23/05/10

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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

For Keisha, Kappa Sigma’s annual Halloween party was supposed to be…well, a party. She never imagined it turning out to be the fight of her life when she meets, Tyler, a member of Kappa Sigma and her future monster…



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape
Series: The Chamber Grindhouse 2
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8291
Read Count: 14491
Published: 26/10/09
Updated: 07/11/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

O....K.. Now that guy is seriously freaking me out. YIKES

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstar
Date: 07/11/09

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was a pretty good story. Damn, Tyler was a sick Bastard. He is not getting out of jail in this life time. Once they pin the other murders on him, he might get the death sentence, depending on the state he lives in.  The only way for a sequel would be for him to plead insanity and escape the nut house. I'm thinking a good 6-8 years later, where she's moved on with her life and has a steady relationship.

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Date: 07/11/09

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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 


I love you as certain dark things are to be loved.


Vampire Diaries



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Story Status: None
Pairings: Damon/Bonnie (Vampire Diaries)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Bloodlust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 994
Read Count: 6120
Published: 19/11/09
Updated: 19/11/09


Title: Chapter 1: Skin

This was interesting, LOL. Imo, Bonnie and Stephan is an odd pairing. I sooo could not imagine her doing something like that to Elena, Caroline yes, Bonnie No.

I love TVD too. I am all about Bamon and that goes back to the books. Atlhough, the Bonnie in the books was hella annoying.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 20/11/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1636]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419212
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 24: I'll Send You a Sign...Just so You Know

That was good, I can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18/01/10

Title: Chapter 23: When You Are on Your Own

I heart Niki! I loved him confessing his feeling for her in Russian.

I was happy that Sunny was torn in her emotions. It wouldn't be real if she didn't feel some resentment from her father.

 

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Date: 15/01/10