Penname: Cholyn [Contact]

Real name: Brandy

Member Since: 20/09/09

Membership status: Member

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Unresolved by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Four years later, Keisha is still shook to the core about her nightmare she experienced with the infamous frat-boy murderer and rapist, Tyler. She’s coping and with the help of her friends, Julie, Greg and Will, she’s on her way to a somewhat normal life…until Tyler escapes prison and is hell-bent on finishing what he started.

 Sequel to Party Monster



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The Chamber Grindhouse 3
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 17476
Read Count: 21828
Published: 04/10/10
Updated: 01/11/10

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Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am so happy he's dead

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Date: 02/11/10
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Umm...Come on, Seriously? REALLY?? *smh* 

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Date: 02/11/10
The Return by threeb_1973
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 155]
Summary:

After an absence of over a year, Tara returns to Bon Temps with her infant daughter.

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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 27052
Read Count: 73424
Published: 18/10/10
Updated: 21/02/11

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Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: I’m Okay With It

Ohh Sam *smh* LOL, Yeah right!

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Date: 29/10/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Let’s Talk About This Now

Huh Oh! Tara is about to get an ear full....I think.

 Thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 21/10/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Here to Stay

I don't usually read TB fanfic or many fanfics for that matter, but this one caught my eye. Which is strange, because I don't really care for Tara. I think the idea of Tara as a mom intrigues me. I want to see what you do with the character. 

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Date: 19/10/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Playing a Hunch

Does Tara realize that Maya is probably a shifter? If you were going by the book, then Maya, who is Sam's first born would be shifter. It was such crap that they mad his brother a shifter, because there is only one child born per mother.

Sam is not going to be happy with Tara Mea. 

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Date: 19/10/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: You Read My Mind

Aww poor Sam. I wonder if he'll still feel mushy once he finds out that Tara didn't tell him about his child? 

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Date: 19/10/10
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Loving Mia by katherinemadison
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 660]
Summary:

 

 

 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229044
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11

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Title: Chapter 14: Mama Ruth

Mama Ruth was wrong talking about her period in front of them. LOL Mama is not going to be happy when she discovers that Mia, Aiden, and Kale are one big happy threesome. 

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Date: 13/12/10
Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Surprises

uh-ooh, here comes mama.

 

 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 08/12/10
Title: Chapter 2: Two Men And A Little Lady

This was a gorgeous intro, absolutely goreous.  Mia is at a place where she knows that lines might be crossed, that will take down a path that could destroy her, while Aiden and Kale want to cross those lines.

Hmm, I wonder if Mia will meet someone tonight. I can't even imagine the hell that will be rained upon the man, who tries to hook up with Mia. 

 I can't wait to read more.

 

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Date: 16/11/10
Title: Chapter 3: The Dress

Mia is denial is slowly wearing off. I'm sure the morning after will be quite interersting.

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Date: 17/11/10
Title: Chapter 12: Loving Mia Part Two

huh Oh! 

Thanks for sharing.  

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 03/12/10
Title: Chapter 11: Loving Mia Part One

That was pretty hot. I figured she would choose Kale, and I'm happy she did. 

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Date: 01/12/10
Title: Chapter 10: Protecting Mia

Good for Mia! She needs to let them know who runs things, lol. 

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Date: 28/11/10
Title: Chapter 9: Blind Date

I'm so happy Kale said what I was thinking. Mia, girl stop! *smh*

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Date: 28/11/10
Retired
Caution by Candice Caine
Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 675]
Summary:

 

 

Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

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Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11

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Title: Chapter 21: How Do I?

I REALLY hope Kam and Gianni don't have sex in public, because someone will probably record them. Lamar could attempt to win the case without every producing his own tape, and say that it's a pattern. However another judge would still demand a tape.  

Lamar better tell the truth, because unless he rapes Kambree and removes the time date stamp, there is no way a judge will by a fake tape. I still don't understand why Lamar is doing this. Why does he want her to act out? 

Derek don't be stupid...just don't.  



Author's Response:

Oh lord lol! We don't need Lamar gaining anything!

Maybe he's jealous or maybe it's something else, you'll just have to wait and see!

Derek, just oh lord lol!

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/10
Title: Chapter 9: The Date

It's just a kiss Kam, don't confuse it with anything more than lust, pure unadulterated lust. 

Gianni needs to learn when to shut UP! Boy just shut up.

The scene with Kam, Shane, and Gianni was cute.

I liked the dialogue during the date. It was snappy, fast and funny. 



Author's Response:

LOL! SHE DOESN'T NEED TO GET EXCITED OVER THAT!

Thansk so much! :)

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Date: 03/12/10
Title: Chapter 20: The Truth

I'm happy that he told her now. You are making me like Gianni...now, lol. It was good that he told her early rather than having someone else do the deed. It showed that he's matured, and he really cares for her. 

Good Job!  



Author's Response:

LOL, I think I just died! YOU LIKING GIANNI, OH LORD LOL!

Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 18/12/10
Title: Chapter 17: Fade To Black

Great rewrite! It sucks that Kam was suspended, but such is the nature of 'show' business. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

& so very true!

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Date: 15/12/10
Title: Chapter 18: Coming Together

I loved the part where she walked into his arms. I really hope Gianni stays strong, because his losing control will only make things worse.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

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Date: 15/12/10
Title: Chapter 27: Can't Hold Us Down, Part 2

It wasn't bad, at least not to me. I didn't think he was cruel. She seemed very happy, LOL. 

Author's Response: I was worried about how people would respond to it because some folks might start calling rape again lol!

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Date: 22/12/10
Title: Chapter 7: One word or Two?

Get him Renee, that boy is ridiculous! I hope Frankie comes to town, soon.  

LOL @ Kam yelling at the tv. I'm sure Gianni used that as a way to make her come to him. 

 



Author's Response:

Lol, someone needs to bust him up!

Kam was like, ya jerk!!!! LOL!

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Date: 01/12/10
Title: Chapter 13: Maybe A lot

Gianni, you know you're one step away from declaring your undying love. Don't eff it up! 

Author's Response: Lol, he needs to stop playing.

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
Date: 10/12/10
Title: Chapter 6: Price Of Fame

Gianni is such an ass. I hope Kam keeps him on the ropes. 

You're doing a great job staying on track. :D  



Author's Response: Thanks  so much! :)

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Date: 01/12/10
Title: Chapter 15: To Do Or Not To Do?

Aww that was a sweet ending. I really hope that Gianni's heart wins out.

Now don't faint, but I actually enjoyed Gianni is this chapter, LOL. I like this side of him. I also like the element of the waring pieces of his soul. 

 

 



Author's Response: LOL, I BELIEVE I MIGHT JUST DROP DEAD!!!!!!

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Date: 11/12/10