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Love Takes Time by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 114]
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Evangeline is a woman uncertain of her future plans and her fledgling relationship with RJ is not going as expected. On the other hand Todd wants to break free from his destructive relationship with Blair. “Destined to be together” These two own this phrase but there are always obstacles to overcome before this becomes a reality.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 60419
Read Count: 13494
Published: 15/06/09
Updated: 07/10/09

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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Damn, the beginning with Todd and Van was so hot, whoo!  I loved Todd's words to Van while they were in bed, how sweet.  I like Bill, hopefully Caroline won't be in the story too much but probably not, it was funny when Van was about to wipe the floor with her lol.  Great, Viki will throw a party for Todd and Van most likely and Blair's insane ass will show up but no one pays any attention to that slut anyway.  I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Nah Caroline was just for laughs to sneek in Vange's territorial side. Got to give Todd the words even though I wish someone was saying it to me...lol!! The introduction of Bill is to show the other side of Todd that even his dear sweet Vange didnt know. There are always so many sides to these two and that comes through in their relationship. Thanks for always reading and leaving your comments. 

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 25/09/09
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved the ending.  Blair is a nutcase, good thing she is at St. Anns, that is overdue on the show but whatever.  I'm not suprised by Viki's cold behavior RME but at least she isn't going to interfere, unlike Lisa.  God she needs to get a life, it's unbelievable, why can't she just be happy for her daughter?  Who is grown by the way, blows my mind.  Even though it was short, I loved the wedding and reception.  I also love that Todd, Van, and Starr relocated to New York, their own little family.  Hopefully Todd and Van have a child of their own.  That was a nice happy ending and I will miss the story.

Author's Response:

Hey bsb,

Lisa can't be happy for Evangeline because Todd is taking away her first born in many ways than one...lol!!! I didn't want to harp on the wedding because I've been there and done that before especially with the vows...lol!!! bsb I thought you would get the little hint that I left in the story but if you didnt I guess no one else did...LOL!!!

Thanks for all your support and leaving your reviews!

 Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 08/10/09
Todd Knows Best by chocolate470
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Todd Knows Best 

Evangeline has gone out of town on an urgent trip so Todd is left at home with the kids. Guess how many they have.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3873
Read Count: 4336
Published: 01/12/09
Updated: 01/12/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, that was such a cute little story.  This is just a one shot right?  I loved all of their kids (damn, they got busy lol) and I liked Jack too.  I love Jack and Keke.  Todd was so cute with all the kids, I loved seeing him in daddy mode, even when he caught TT and Tangie fighting like he was going to take out the belt lol.  I thought it was cute when Todd asked his other daughter to kiss his forehead to make him feel better, how cute.  I liked Todd and Van's little reunion at the end, just wish it was longer with more loving lol.

Author's Response:

Hey bsbgirl,

Yes its just a one shot. Sometimes its easy to write them but for someone like me who is so multi-chaptered its hard to say what to put in there and how long it should be...lol!! Busy? lol!!! Some I took from my nieces bc when they are altogether watch out...the house gets crowded and noisy and someone is usually saying something. I think if Evan wasn't in his arms he would have taken out that belt...LOL!!! Todd loves his little girls...his angels, princesses! I knew someone would have asked about that short ending but it left you wanting for more and that was the point...LMAO! Maybe I should have gotten Black or Jordanna to write the last part for me...don't you think...LOL!!!

Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 02/12/09
Zhuli by chocolate470
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Zhuli

For My Tangie Mates



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5475
Read Count: 1746
Published: 15/12/09
Updated: 15/12/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That story was great.  I was suprised Kichi was plotting to take Todd's money, I thought she was a nice girl.  I thought it was funny how Van was jealous.  I'm glad Van outed and exposed her for the fraud she was.  I loved how badass and take charge Van was in the story.  Thier love scenes were hot too.   The engagement ring was beautiful and I'm glad their getting married.  Also, I loved the pictures of Todd and Van, hot as hell.  Damn we were robbed.  Loved the story.

Author's Response:

party3 Happy Holidays to you bsbgirl!

Looks can be so deceiving and sometimes we ladies love to use them to get what we want Yeah we were robbed bsb but you know what OLTL robbed themselves of a super couple and I guess I can jump for joy over that one.

 Reviewer: bsbgirl Signed
Date: 16/12/09