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This is a story about a couple who wants to have a child. They will have to use a surrogate to have this baby. The woman they selected is a college graduate who wants to go to Law school. She sees this as a an excellent financial opportunity. She figures the couple gets the baby and she will get her Law degree, however, fate will effect all of their lives.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 39835
Read Count: 30971
Published: 20/10/08
Updated: 10/03/11


Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Let the Healing begin

I'm liking this story~  Love the love between Jarred and Jailyn.  Hoping she'll make it out of ICU with minimal lasting effects from the accident.  Also what is up with the Jeffrey and Saige drama - she's so wanting a baby that she basically ignores her husband's infidelity.  In the beginning I got the feeling that their relationship was tight, but for him to even put himself in a situation like that shows something more was going on in their relationship.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 12/12/09

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 A Special Thank You to BlackMamba for the AMAZING banner

Suzette is a Diva in every way. From the way she dresses to the way she walks and talks. She is beginning to hate being the it girl and decides to take break to try this new spa retreat for some rest and relaxation. When her car breaks down on a country road she is more than happy to be rescued By Kyle a rancher and businessman.

Kyle is a mans man, he loves the outdoors and working with his hands. He is a cowboy after all. On one fateful day after doing some business in the city he is driving home when he rescues his destiny.

Suzette is a city girl in every way,in her high end jeans, expensive clothing and heels (who wears heels in the country?) but she was the most beautiful thing Kyle had ever seen he was a Big man and he loved a woman with curves, a woman who could handle a real man. From the moment he saw Suzette she was his.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9843
Read Count: 31662
Published: 29/05/09
Updated: 04/07/10


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Sweet love story!



Author's Response: Im really gla you enjoyed it, hope to keep you interested. thanks for the review

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Date: 18/12/09

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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 41276
Published: 29/08/09
Updated: 24/01/10


Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow a germ freak having sex in a public bathroom.  I think he's on his way to getting over that phobia.  Great update!

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Date: 24/01/10

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To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60700
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 12: To pass the time

Loving this story!  Can't wait until they meet up again.  Especially since it sounds like he's still in love with her.

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 13: Ch. 13

Awesome update!  Love the way they were "reunited" -- her at her element now as a vampire and kicking the crap out of him.....

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Date: 14/12/09

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a short addition to the Series Love Bears All

It was an hour to show time.  With the trunk full of chafing pans lined with her love's labor lost inside each one, a fifteen minute drive to her destination seemed now like a hike across the Great Plains-impossible to meet in the time she was now allowed.

"What seems to be the problem ma'am?"  His blue eyes sparkled as he spoke.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 29483
Read Count: 6738
Published: 23/09/09
Updated: 20/08/10


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wow....... that's a tough ending to the first date.  Definitely curious about the mama drama thing going on! 

Author's Response: More details forthcoming cyn2pede.  There's some back story that will come, as will Jerard's role in all of that.

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Date: 09/01/10

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A part of the Kerrington & Associates series. Donovan Williams is a rookie in the Miami Dolphins Football Organization. He's lonely and praying for love to find him. Kendra Davis is a rookie in some sorts as well to the Dolphins organization as an athletic trainer.  Will she and Donovan become fast friends and later lovers?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36599
Read Count: 47438
Published: 04/10/09
Updated: 14/03/10


Title: Chapter 13: Dancing

Well I'm glad Kendra is questioning what's in the lotion.  I just wish she would've thought about it before using it or asking the other trainers about it.  I would think that's one of those things that would be drilled in to trainers, not to use anything on athletes unless the 100% knew and trusted the ingredients.  She's jeoparized both her and Donovan's career.  I wonder why they wouldn't be more concerned about the photographer, even if he was just paparazzi.  Wasn't there a clause in the contract or something about dating?   Good update! 

Author's Response:

The Clause applies to Chad and Dani.  I introduced those two characters as a set up to a future story.  Chad is Donovan's new agent.  All of this will make more sense if you read Love a Second Time around. 

Kendra's slightly naive, and didn't think to test the cream first.  David is a respected trainer in the NFL...

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Date: 05/01/10

Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

Love these two.  Saying prayer before they eat....... and eventhough Donovan's pissed he still kisses her before he leaves.  No yelling, screaming ..... WOW!!!

Author's Response: So you don't think he was angry enough? I love them too...

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Date: 17/01/10

Title: Chapter 12: Let's Take a Trip

I'm definitely in like with these two.  They're just too cute.

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Date: 31/12/09

Title: Chapter 18: Planning it Out

David is scum!  Hope him and that other gut get theirs in the end!

Author's Response: They will both get it.

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Date: 21/01/10

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 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 419716
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 22/03/10


Title: Chapter 21: Cause I Am Me, the Universe and You

I had that feeling ..... isn't that the crap.  Jacob's finally seeing the light, finally trying to turn his life in to good and then Peanut goes and stabs him.  Is he dead???  Will he survive???? How sad.....

Nikolai and Sunshine don't seem as cohesive as they did before, I don't know why their voices seem to indicate they are ... but hmmm, can't pinpoint it. Maybe it's because they weren't together much in this chapter.  Great update!

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Date: 03/01/10

Title: Chapter 12: The places you've been ...The things you have learned ...They sit with you so beautifully

I absolutely love this story!  It's awesome how Sunshine is so strong and her character is staying true to that.  It's cool that Nikolai is trying to keep her as far away from the dark side of his life as possible.  I'm still trying to tell if his motivation is more from love or possession -- or maybe stemming from possession but turning towards love???  Poor Sergei though, I don't see how this can turn out okay for him because regardless of Nikolai's motivation he doesn't share well.  So he needs to keep his infatuation under wraps because the only way I see him leaving at least partially in tack -- is from Sunshine appealing to Nikolai's softer side for her, but then she'd probably end up paying for that too.  Great writing! 

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Date: 13/12/09

Title: Chapter 13: You know I tell the truth... We are just the same

......and so it begins.  Nikolai is not a stupid man, I wouldn't be surprised if they were being watched.  His actions during the conversation with Sergei seemed to hint that he knew Sergei was feeling more than just a bodyguard to Sunshine.  I love this story!

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Date: 15/12/09

Title: Chapter 14: Making Holes in the Night

Oh hey, so Nikolai finally admits out loud that his "plan" is for her not to leave him after the five years are up.  Plus he's showing the depth of his feelings for her by cutting the meeting short, holding her until she fell asleep...... and the major bosses know of her and obviously his feelings towards her, hhhmmm. 

I just wonder about the whole Sergei thing -- he should know that there is no future in him pursuing Sunshine.  When it all comes down he's probably either going to be beat to within an inch of his life and then grow in to his own empire thing with lesson learned or he'll be dead.  He's showing his lack of thinking by sneaking in to the study, after getting a warning from Nikolai.  Either way it won't be good.

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Date: 17/12/09

Title: Chapter 15: I can feel everything you do...Hear everything you say

Love it!  Don't know why Darla would need to start crap a year or so later, but it is "just Darla" so I'm sure it's just part of her DNA.  Still don't get Sergei not wanting to save his own butt, but he's letting himself be ruled by his heart.  Guess he doesn't understand that Nikolai didn't get to where he is today by being the nice guy.  This is just too good.

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Date: 20/12/09

Title: Chapter 16: We are Building Bridges Part 1

Wow...... Darla needs to get over it.  Find herself a new sugar daddy or something.  She's only going to make things worse for herself in the end.  I wonder what Sunshine will think if she finds out the mistress was dumped, the way she was dumped, and that it was done on the same night that she met Nikolai.  Also the fact that she is now her dad's friend.  I knew Nikolai was pissed at Sergei, but not that deep seated intense dislike for the kid.  He's wavering on killing the kid....  would Sunshine be able to move past that if it happened.... Great story!

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Date: 21/12/09

Title: Chapter 17: We Are Building Bridges Part 2

Oh no, starting to feel like the pain is going to start.  Nikolai seems to be getting antsy as Sunshine is starting to spread her wings.  Looks like we're getting ready for the struggle.

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Date: 22/12/09

Title: Chapter 18: A fire burns... Water comes

Just when you think "just Darla" may be finding her way out of the story there she is just worming her way back in.  I'm sure we're headed for strife so I'm preparing myself for it.  Because I know Nikki is not the nicest of people, but darn it I like him.

You've been so good about updating frequently and regularly so even if you don't update until.... 1/15..... I totally understand.  You're awesome Thanks! 

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Date: 25/12/09

Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

Oh wow.......... Nikki's ready for the big step.  Wedding and babies how sweet.  Sunny's still young though and she hasn't had time to be young since her mom died.  Some people need that, others do fine without it.  Sunny seems to genuinely love Nikki (at least the part of him that he allows her to see).  Sunny's about 21ish at this stage and did we ever find out Nikki's true age?  Based upon event, several chapters back, I remember trying to figure out his exact age based on how long he knew Darla and how long it had been since he took over the organization but still came up short for exact age.  One of my favorite stories by far!

Author's Response: Thank you! Sunny is just shy of 21 at this point and Nikolai was definitely 31 when they met. (Darla lied about her age and was about 35-ish when she first met Nikolai and is 42-ish now, whew). Nikolai is around 33 now.

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Date: 27/12/09

Title: Chapter 20: Even When You're Miles Away Part 2

Ultimate love for this story!  Mr. Coffee -- stay away from Bed Sty, I'm not getting good vibes from that.  Peanut doesn't seem to be the most trustworthy/reliable person.  Trying to get them back probably would have worked the first year .... 3 years down the line -- the relationship will NEVER be the same and seems past the repairable stage.  I wish he would give up on that pipe dream, but he's an addict.  Nikki needs to start trusting in his and Sunshines feelings for each other and stop feeling the need to manipulate every situation.  Sunny is a hard one to read, especially with her bamboo analogy ...... I'm pretty sure her feelings for him are genuine, but she could just be bending but not breaking.  It's just their cozy times seem so real and it would have to be a really good actress to have that level of affection still after 3 yrs.  What's up with Sergei?

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Date: 29/12/09

Title: Chapter 25: I'll Be Long Gone

This was such a tear-jerker.  I'm so sad for all of them.  Sergei don't know who he's playing with though, he might want to re-think this whole thing.

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Date: 20/01/10

Title: Chapter 26: Gotta Make My Own Way

Great update!  Love how Sunshine is still showing her concern and love for Nikki, eventhough she is mad.  Nikki's fighting hard to keep his darkside down.  What's the saying 'you can take the gangster out the hood but.....'  Sergei is nothing if not persistant, I don't know how many times Sunshine has called him her friend and yet there he is trying to be more... what's going to happen when Nikki finds out???  I know you said Darla is out of the story now -- Is that because she no longer exists?  I can't imagine Nikki just let that go.  I'm still wondering what Darla got, all the money that was with the brochures or something?  Anyway great story!

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Date: 21/01/10

Title: Chapter 27: Today Is a New Day

Finally she realized Sergei had feelings for her, and let him know that feelings weren't returned.  I'm glad she did it right away.  If she still has strong feelings for Nikolai it was good to get that out of the way.  She's making Nikolai court her, how cute.  I wonder how far this Jil thing is going to go.  Great Update!

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Date: 23/01/10

Title: Chapter 28: Different From Tomorrow You'll See

Great update!  I see why Sunny wants to know what he does, but I see why he doesn't want her to know either.   I don't want Sunny to become Darla!  All these guys that can't take a hint can't be a good thing.

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Date: 26/01/10

Title: Chapter 29: I'll Be High Flyin'

These two are explosive together!  I wonder about the intern ship though.  I understand the need to be independent, but is she really?  His apartment, I assume he's paying for it, the body guard, and I'm sure he hasn't stopped giving her money,  She should have quite a lot now since she didn't seem like she spent a lot.  So she really seems to be holding out for him to tell her everything before she'll go back eventhough it seems that's where she wants to be,  She's even holding back responding with the I love you's.  Great update!

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Date: 29/01/10