Penname: chocolate470 [Contact]

Real name: Georgia

Member Since: 04/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

When I was younger I loved reading very much but since the advent of television my reading habits have fallen off considerably. My first language is not English but a version of it which is "Creole" since I am a Belizean. My mother is Jamaican but my father was a Belizean. I felt that my earlier televison viewing habits have shaped my some of my opnions over the years but these days I try to instill in my nieces that we as black women have to be proud of ourselves.

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Before Nightrise by greatodinsraven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

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A fantasy tale set in Llanview.  The world is split in two, the light and the dark, in the light are the humans that walk the earth blissfully unaware that in the darkness creatures of the night wait to strike.  Evangeline Williamson is a retired vampire slayer who all her life has had to straddle the line between the light and the dark.  Living a quiet life in Llanview she thinks she has managed to escape her secret past until she becomes the object of affection for two rivals from different vampire clans.  Drawn to both, she finds herself caught up in old vendettas and hidden agendas.  Now as a clan war threatens to break out jeopardizing all of humanity, Evangeline must make a choice: follow her head and lead a normal life in the light or follow her heart and her soul mate into the dark.  



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson, Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live), Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: When Night is Falling
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 38229
Read Count: 7505
Published: 29/06/08
Updated: 28/08/08

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Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Hey that scene with the invisible arm was freaking terrific!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, was kind of freaky hahaha.  Todd definitely is the guy that gets what he wants and perhaps Evangeline will be no exception, or will she?  Thanks for reading and the review and stars!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/08
Never Say Never by Heart and Soul
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 119]
Summary:

Todd Manning returns from a dangerous, yet unsuccessful mission to find his son only to discover that his BFF and attorney, Evangeline Williamson, has been cruelly attacked and then snatched away into seclusion by her protective family.  Go on a journey with him as he endeavors to track down the love of his life and faces head on LOVE, OBSESSION, LIES, BETRAYAL, DECEPTION, RACISM, REJECTION, HEARTBREAK, HEINOUS ACTS OF VIOLENCE AND YES, EVEN MURDER.  How can happily ever after be born from this?  Come see for yourself.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson, Other
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 44
Completed:No
Word count: 79449
Read Count: 14461
Published: 06/07/08
Updated: 02/05/09

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Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 30

Ok Heart and Soul your descriptive prowess in this chapter was simply amazing. If Blair didn't get the point earlier well she sure did at the end...

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/08
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 32 pt. 1

Amazing the way you captured their feelings towards one another and Evangeline dealing with Todd's supposed betrayal. Great job!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/04/09
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 32 pt. 3

YOU'VE DONE IT HEART AND SOUL...your name certainly suits the content of your work. I'm there standing in that room listening to them push back and forth against one another. I understand Todd and I certainly understand Evangeline's worries about loving him and starting a relationship. Excellent work better than anything I could have written...

Author's Response: Wow.  What an awesome review.  Thank you choc for all your reviews actually.  Whatever constructive criticism you have is always welcome as well.  Smooches.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/04/09
Love is stronger than pride. by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 76]
Summary: Llanview has moved on since the opp attack left Evangeline in a coma. Todd is married to Blair, Chris is with Sarah and John is about to walk down the Alsie with Marty. Will things change or have they really moved on?

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Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:Yes
Word count: 51635
Read Count: 7521
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 14/11/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Too little too late?

Besides the eggs should I be thinking something else?

Dye you are so sneaky!! You eased that one right in and I had to wrap my brain around the idea. Unless I'm very wrong...hmmmm



Author's Response:

Hi chocolate470, Guilty as charged, I am sneaky but I got you did'nt I? How you like me now? lol

As far as i know, she ate expire eggs but there are other possiblities, you never know. Thanks for the review, it left me with a smug look on the corner of my mouth.

 

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/08
Title: Chapter 19: Seed of doubt?

Dye you are still sneaky...why was Todd bringing that chocolate and cherry ice for?

As for Nora those two are always going to butt heads at least you made it on the lighter side than I do.

Explain to me why you have Vange running away from knowing the results of this test. I guess thats what sistas are for...lol!

Ok let me say it....thanks for making my little wish come true...so is it a boy or a girl? Will your story go that far? what are you going to name him/her? Get my point..LMAO!!!



Author's Response:

Oh choc, you are just as bad, if not worse. You are a con artist, you must be enjoying pimping me into extending this story,lol but I get happy giggles with our little conversations.

To answer your questions, 1] Todd just felt like having a girlfriend moment with her, that's what the ice cream is for.

2] Vange saw the test result, she was just too pissed off to talk about it with her nosy lil sis, I'm not sure what the sex of the baby will be yet, might have to flip a coin on that one.

3] As for the rest of the story, I think I have one or two more chapters left in me but we'll see what happens.

What would chamber life be like without you choc? I hope I'll never have to find out, you are such a great sport, thanks for reading and keeping me on my toes.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/10/08
True Love Survives by rhondanicole18
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
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What happens when you see someone from your past who has haunted you for years?  What if you never really lost your feelings for this person?  What happens when you see this person again?  Will they give you a second chance?  Will you be able to try to have a relationship again?  These couples asks these very questions as they try to find out exactly what love really is.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:No
Word count: 56527
Read Count: 6378
Published: 08/07/08
Updated: 06/04/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Prologue: Ten Years Earlier

Hey Rho...you've got to believe that I read this yesterday... but forgot to submit a review...ouch!

You had LeMarcus showing up like a dirty dog to interrupt foreplay...LOL!!! This time you gave him 12 inches...LMAO!!! with that one...I guess you're trying to tell me something undercover... be like C...just come out and say it..LOL!!!



Author's Response: Hey Choc!!! LOL. thanks for reading.  LeMarcus is such a party pooper and a hater. LOL. Glad you liked it.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/08
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30-Tiffany

May I say that you did a splendicious job on this chapter Rho...Rho...I wonder what the heck you were talking about regarding writers block...what writers block...LOL!

Keyshia Cole is Tiffany and that bombshell confession that Nicholas is Antoine's son. The girl had to try to make that money even though she ended up with $1...that was a riot!

Best damn chapter!



Author's Response: LOL!  thanks for reading Chocolate Chaos.  I must say that I had a hard time writing this chapter just the way I wanted to. Nicholas is not Antoine's son though.  Too bad for him though cause he could use a good male influence.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/02/09
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33-Latoya and Kyle

Yes Rho you made them work through their issues in a biblical sense...LOL!! and I didn't miss the ten inches comment either. I wondered about that engagement surprise but Kyle...hiyah men...but Latoya didn't seem to mind at all!

Author's Response: Hey Chaos!!!!! Thanks for reading.  I really appreciate it.  Hey there's nothing wrong with a well-endowed man.  I  happen to like those kind.  LOL.

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Date: 22/04/09
Secretary by TokenBlackGirl
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:  

Anyone who thinks controlling people is a science is dead wrong.  It's an art.~ Jim Profit

 

 

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2729
Read Count: 2348
Published: 12/08/08
Updated: 12/08/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Alice

I LOVED THIS!!! Although I find that being at work and reading this type of fanfic certainly does wonders for the imagination..:)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed
Date: 18/08/08
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Ki Fashions by Quania2004
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 204]
Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49841
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16

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Title: Ki Fashions

I'm glad to see them warming up to each other..finally It took a visit from the parents and a walk out to let Ki realize that his heart was warming up to Serena. Rodney is being a good father in protecting his baby. I am still wondering about her trip to Korea and how that will go...Looking forward to the update!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/01/09
Title: Ki Fashions

Wow...Ki has some real secrets and he which means you...LOL have kept them hidden well especially the fact that he is a twin for one... I could only imagine what the reaction is going to be about Ki's black wife but Ki will probably be too busy arguing with his brother than worrying about Serena's feelings but we will see...Definitely looking forward to the next update! Love the family dynamic!

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Date: 10/02/09
Title: Ki Fashions

Quania at last an update...lol!

I love the pace of this story including Serena getting into the family dynamics like speaking with Jae-Hwa. Interesting that I can see both sides of Ki. I can't say he's overly sweet with Serena but it seems that little by little he is falling in love with her. Of course Serena is already there. But no one can replace that business mentality of his.

Please update soon cause I'm looking forward to some events and you know one of them...LOL!!!

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Date: 24/08/09
The Broken Record by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 38]
Summary:

[chief of police] John Mc Bain is [movie and music producer] Todd’s step brother and John just got married to [lawyer] Evangeline who happens to be [unemployed] Blair’s best friend, Blair is married to Todd.

Todd returned to Llandview some years ago to discover that things never stay the same, the newly wedded Mc Bains are coming to Llandview settle down. The connection was already there before the reunion started and as we all know, John + Todd + Blair + Evangeline = Double Drama

Sometimes, second chances are like broken records, a melody is always missing.



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14370
Read Count: 1884
Published: 18/09/08
Updated: 30/11/08

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Title: Chapter 4: sex, lies and secrets. 2

Let me try this again...

Dye those sage advice at the end of each chapter...LMAO!

I love this line:The tips of his fingers glided up and down the back of her thighs like Arabian silk...I think I love the Arabian silk part...

Blair coming home just in time to greet Evangeline and smelling her huzzie all over her was a real hoot. So I think you'll have her running over to John for a confession sit down and you know what. Looking forward to the next chapter!  



Author's Response:

What's up chocolate470, I laugh at myself with those advice too. I love your reviews, so much fun to read, I just enjoy how you try to call me out on my game lol. you think you know what will happen next??? Think again baby.

Thanks for the review you made me smile through the headahce of a day I was having.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/08
Title: Chapter 5: "Complicated"

WTH!! One more chapter...say it aint so Dye!!!

You had me going through all these emotional changes...sniff. I really loved the the exchange between Todd and Evangeline...couldn't have written it better myself! (Boy and "Nobody" by Keith Sweat is playing) made me feel it even more. It is possible to love two men...down here its one for the sex and one for the money...LOL!!!

You had my heart in confused anxiety when Todd sent that message and John saw it and then John grabbing a gun...classic...

Then you had to go talking about one more update...bommer!!!

It was still a great read!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Choc, well what are fanfic sisters for if not to punish each other with their crazy stories?

How much do you like my payback now? lol

Hopefully there will be more fanfic anxieties to come, just remember to breathe, thanks for coming thus far with me, your reviews are always amazing.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/08
The Vistor by wwefanforlife
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:  Evangeline is a divorce woman who has to start her life over a visted from a stranger awaked something in her she thought was dead.

Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1518
Read Count: 905
Published: 30/10/08
Updated: 30/10/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH LAWDY WWE! That was on FIYAH!! I laughed when I read long, thick penis. I don't know but it brought a huge grin to my face. I almost susbsituted but didn't ;-) Damn Evangeline! girl was definitely not getting any good loving having a dream like that on a long flight. I feel your pain :D It was a great read wwe!



Author's Response:

Glad that you like it and girl when I read that part too I had to get a cold drink my dam self lol. thank you for the review put a smile on my face need it that today.

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Date: 13/10/11
Lost in Translation by Quania2004
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

 

 

Bryan Zheng runs into a girl, twice in his early life. After years of not thinking about her, he suddenly can't get her out of his mind. One day he saves a woman from two guys. He sees the similarities between the woman and the girl he remembers and decides to take her in when he discovers that she doesn't have a place to live. There's just one catch...they can't understand a word of what the other is saying.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2746
Read Count: 806
Published: 05/11/08
Updated: 05/11/08

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was already in love with your first fic and now this one has got me equally intrigued. Keep up the great work!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/08
Two Weeks Notice by BlackMamba
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 152]
Summary:

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One Life to Live 

 

Evangeline Williamson is a brilliant attorney with a pragmatic approach to life and who always tried to do the right thing when it came to her clients and her job.  But it all come crashing down after her most notorious client, Todd Manning, is found guilty and later exonerated of a crime he didn’t commit. Her career and reputation gasping at death’s door, Evangeline accepts Todd’s offer to become chief counsel for Buchanan Enterprises, a company he’s recently acquired through a hostile takeover.  

The pay is substantial and the perks keep coming.  But there’s no client more demanding than Todd Manning and two years later Evangeline has had enough of living his chaotic life instead of her own. She tells him as much and gives him two weeks notice to find a replacement, forcing Todd to realize just how desperate he is to keep her in his life—not only as his attorney but as the woman who’s stolen his heart.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Movies, All My Children, One Life to Live, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Kerri Reynolds, Lily Winters
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15412
Read Count: 15936
Published: 23/12/08
Updated: 14/05/09

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Title: Chapter 1: The Cast and the Music

Oh my goodness some of the OLTL cast and you mixed in Y&R although I don't for the life of me know that Ryan dude...execellente!

Author's Response: Ah, Ryan Lavery. AMC beefcake extraodinaire. It's okay if you don't know him.  He's pretty simple.  Love Y&R so they all got to come on board. :-)

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Date: 23/12/08
Title: Chapter 3: Two

Toddikins at it again. No he doesn't treat her like a secretary when of course he did do it. Evangeline not recollecting thoughts of imagining thoughts of Todd "ahem"... He knew what he did and whatever his back is against the wall then he will throw up this friendship line...classic! And now what is he doing...hiring a new chief counselor...young and hot...I'm waiting for your writings on this one!

Author's Response:

Hey choc. Thanks for the review. And yes, this is a very Todd way to handle things. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/01/09
Title: Chapter 4: Three

I love how you are adding Lily as a new element because she certainly knows how to bring it so Evangeline better watch her back! Awaiting your next update!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/09
Title: Chapter 5: Four

Black I wonder what games you are going to make these two play. I knew it wouldn't be that easy for you Toddikins...LOL!!! I just love when these two...nah let me rephrase...I love it when Evangeline tries to fight off those emotions for her honeybear...all she has to do is squeeze...LOLLLL!!!

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Date: 06/02/09
Title: Chapter 8: Oh Wait! What Came After the Sexing.

Our couple couldnt be boring you this much Black...Laughing

I loved the last scene but turning Toddikins into Suzie Homemaker maybe I have to digest that part before I burst out laughing. Like I said I love the last scene between these two typical Todd but Evangeline always has his number.

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Date: 18/05/09
BE NOT NOBODY by SweetTahira
Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 44]
Summary:

When the time comes and you find yourself at a crossroad... who will you be... what will you do?



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live, Daytime Television
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6804
Read Count: 16459
Published: 21/01/09
Updated: 30/03/10

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Title: Chapter 1: All That We Never Said

Sometimes I feel like I have totally blocked John from my memory banks and have never contemplated writing a side where they actually talked to each other and got it all out. You did a good job in giving me the sense of the words that might be spoken if it were to happen and I love authors that allow me to feel the moment. I am definitely interested in seeing where you take this story and can't wait for the update! Great Job!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/01/09
Title: Chapter 3: Unspoken Truth

Oh Man! My only complaint that its way too short...LOL!!!

So Tangie...they speak with their eyes and without saying too many words. Dang Evangeline Todd offers to be your baby daddy and you don't even blink about the prospect...so Evangeline. Yeah she is there.

As you can see I'm a Tangie fanatic so keep those updates coming! 

 

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/03/09
Tis the Season for Moving On by IWriteStuff
Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

After ending her relationship with John, and her friends and family all with other plans, Evangeline believes she'll learn what the lonely do at Christmas.  However, much to her surprise, an old friend has other ideas.Evangeline and Kevin?



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Tis The Season Holiday Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1616
Read Count: 2543
Published: 24/01/09
Updated: 24/01/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this one shot and wished it were longer. Yeah even though I have my couple I wonder how those two would have been together. Hey got another Kevin Evangeline fanfic up your sleeve...hint...hint...

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/01/09