Penname: chocolate470 [Contact]

Real name: Georgia

Member Since: 04/07/08

Membership status: Member

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When I was younger I loved reading very much but since the advent of television my reading habits have fallen off considerably. My first language is not English but a version of it which is "Creole" since I am a Belizean. My mother is Jamaican but my father was a Belizean. I felt that my earlier televison viewing habits have shaped my some of my opnions over the years but these days I try to instill in my nieces that we as black women have to be proud of ourselves.

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Summary: This story was first written in 2006 when OLTL's PTB had one of their few good ideas and began to transition Evangeline into Todd Manning's world.  This is my take on how that might have happened.

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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2869
Read Count: 2830
Published: 24/01/09
Updated: 24/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah Evangeline doesn't need these guys to validate herself as a woman or to take care of her emotional needs. But you know I still see Todd as someone who could understand all of that...:) Thanks for the Tangie cause I can't get enough!

Author's Response: I think so too.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

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A sequel to Romeo Must Die. A young beautiful physical therapist (Perri) is consumed by a dark stranger who haunts her daydreams. A reclusive night club owner (Craven) must find his destiny before he loses all sense of his humanity. Will either be set free from the force that tortures them or will they remain shackled to the freedom and power they intrinsically possess?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider. The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider, and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



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Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: Perri Reed
Classification: Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 27
Completed:Yes
Word count: 27289
Read Count: 18567
Published: 27/03/09
Updated: 27/08/09


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I hate it sometimes when a vampire has that type of power over your senses and your very being...it's so chilling. I'm trying to figure out whether Craven is both good and bad. What role does Han play in all of this?

My favorite part is Han's conversation with his teacher because I sense that he is missing Trish very much. I wish you could give us a flashback into their relationship. But I give you major points for that eventhough I want moreLaughing



Author's Response: Vamps are sneaky, they truly can't be trusted. They are so goal oriented. It's hard to tell good from bad. Ok...chocolate470, I've got you covered.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/05/09

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Spark since you read my story I decided to give yours a try. I have always been a fan of Romeo must Die and I love this tribute and actually wish that you would give a glimpse into Han's and Trish engagement like him remembering...hint...hint...LOL!!! It's your story and you do as you wish. I am interesting to find out about these two...



Author's Response: Hang in there...there is so much to tell with this story. I really want to give it all. Because the fans waited for so long to return to an update. It's in the bag!!

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Date: 07/04/09

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Now the picture is becoming clearer. Craven/Kai is after poor Perri so come on Spark who is going to rescue her from this fate. P.S. I noticed that she is having those dreams so please for her sake...LOL!

 



Author's Response: Funny that you would ask...I wish I could share...but you will see.  Most would think at this point it will be from an unlikely source.

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Date: 20/04/09

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I guess ladies get this all over the world...when you are stressed you need "protein" and when you do meet someone you have to worry about their gay tendencies...Laughing

Should have known Perri's dreams would be interfering with her life. Thank goodness Desire is around even with her nutty ideas Wink

Keep the updates coming! I do want to see how all the characters continue to build up in this story.



Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review  chocolate...and continuing to follow the story. I had lost my way with it over a year ago.  But I found my muse again. Glad to have you join the roundtable! Wink

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Date: 28/04/09

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

No way that Craven choose a host body that had an awful ride SurprisedLaughing

I have a confession my mind did think that something was missing from that last chapter I read but why I forgot to mention it is beyond me. I guess someone pointed it out to you...

Better watch out Perri because dude is planning your wedding...Foot in mouth Awaiting the next update!



Author's Response: LOL. Gotta do what you gotta do! LOL. Thanks for the review. A new chapter is in the workings!

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Date: 05/05/09

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

So Han plays a pivotal role in this after all. At first I was unclear of his part in your story so you got me there. If he is going to rescue Perri does that mean what I think it meansSurprised So looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: The story has so much to tell.  A lot of unfinished from the original, plus the main plot. Han is my baby too, so he definitely gets some love.  But Kai...love love!

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Date: 19/05/09

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

That Mr. Frazier cracks me up and your description of Desire's symptoms was too good because it made me remember myself dealing with the flu...not good...:)

But I'm guessing that her illness came sudden and I bet I know who has something to do with it...humph! Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response: I love John Witherspoon. "Bang Bang Bang" He's such a fool. Desire has a role to play in all this. She's not going to just speak and back away into the shadows while the main gal struts her stuff. It's a way of shifting the mic from one to the other.  It's going to play well. Thanks so much for continuing to read. And for the wonderful review!

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Date: 29/05/09

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

What is going on? Let me understand is like she is in a trance and he's gradually changing her into his chosen bride. What a bomber that she's getting ill at the same time. So she's not remembering those hot encounters. Is she supposed to be saved? hmmmm...

Author's Response: Perri is the chosen, Desire the concubine.Thanks for reading and the wonderful review!

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Date: 05/06/09

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Ohhh Craven is a sick bastard and poor Perri is getting caught up in his web.

As for the last scene now you got me hungering for more especially the banter with Trish. I remember that line. I miss her so much. Very, very talented. She could have gone so far with her great abilities :( Back to the present I am waiting to see where you take me Spark!



Author's Response: Yeah, the closer he's getting to the 'event' the more sadistic he will become, good intents but the carnal in him flucks with his human side.  It's going to be some interesting turns, so try not to blink!

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Date: 13/06/09

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I LOVED IT! Imagining that moment so far is the highlight of my morning. Too short Spark...LOL!!! I want the more to come...a little more of them please...then you can get back...Thanks!

Author's Response: Ok...another part for you is posted.  And then I got to get back to the story...k!

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/09

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

What a wonderful comment at the top that I inspired this sequence...ahhhh...you made my heart feel good.

Yesterday I read it far too quickly so this morning I decided to sit down and read it again more carefully...I loved this part...felt the emotion behind his words and the love...

"No. Wait.  I just.  I was.  I love it.  It's that I've never lived with anyone before.  Not a woman.  And of course we love...we make beautiful love." He smiled touching her face.  But, I want more.  I just have been hoping that you'd want to be more..."

Thanks for making my week with this chapter. Trish could bring out the other side of Han and he was open to accept her which is so beautiful. So sad that their happiness was taken away from him but you could see that he cherished the precious moments they spent together. Wonderful read...again Thanks :)



Author's Response: Thanks chocolate for reading.  I'm glad you enjoyed.  It was a great idea and it would have been such a loss to not have a bridge.  :-)

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Date: 08/07/09

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

So I see Craven wasn't at the top of his game like he thought he was. I know how these men work with a back up plan of sorts...:) Curious as to what he wants Bradley to do. Poor Perri will be taken up into this deceit. Who will rescue her?

Author's Response: It's going to get complicated...stay tuned!

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Date: 08/07/09

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Damn Craven has really changed Desire into a sex fiend without much control and hungry too...LOL!!! I'm still thinking poor Perri because she is blind to what is going on around her and yet I'm looking forward to the next update regarding what Craven has in store for her..



Author's Response: Perri is indeed clueless.

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Date: 23/07/09

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Craven is in big trouble with Desire and I couldn't be more delighted...LOL!!! Serves him right! At least I saw that Perri wasn't falling for all of his charms - her eyes are beginning to open to see something isn't quite right. Maybe I'm underestimating Perri we'll see. I did read it before but didn't have time to add my review...sorry!



Author's Response:

Perri's power is lies within...

If you haven't caught up to it by final chapter...I'll spill it in the epilogue.

 

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Date: 05/08/09

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

OH MY! Sex with these vampires are amazingly hot and raw and everything! It seems that Craven cannot control Desire all that well...nor his twins. Major drama done by his own hands. What a scene Perri ran into and of course those vamps have the gift of not letting you remember. Wonder how Craven will rectify his disintegrating plans.

Author's Response:

they are some sexy mofo's aren't they...

thanks for reading...and for the review!

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Date: 05/08/09

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I thought I wouldnt love this side of Desire but she is actually a fascinating character. Craven thought he had everything under control but by making Desire a part of his crew isnt working out as he planned. The more I read this story the better it gets.

Author's Response: Desire is comical to me, because she is such a vamp in that she's goal oriented.  She lusts for Craven and that's not entirely her fault...he sexed her and left her thirsty for more of him.  She's planning to turn the tables.

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Date: 18/08/09

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Ohh the plot thickens! Desire my type of woman - knowing when the take charge especially against Craven. We are definitely in for a battle. Is Craven mind so involved with Perri that is unaware of this plot against him? I'm not sure about this one because usually he senses when Desire is causing trouble unless she is able to keep that part of her mind hidden...interesting.

Author's Response:

She's tenacious...I'll give her that! Thanks chocolate...love reading your comments~

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Date: 18/08/09

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

WOW! to the last part. Well I knew Craven wasn't such a dunce when it came to Desire's plans for them both. After all he is the one that created her and knew her mind.

Can't wait for the last chapter. I hope Han makes the rescue and sends Craven back to the depths of hell. But you never know with you authors...LOL!!!



Author's Response: What you trying to say huh chocolate??? LOL.  Final and Epilogue cometh.

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Date: 24/08/09

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

YES! But in a way I'm sorry that Desire is gone but it was necessary. I could imagine the look on her face when the baby wasn't Craven...all the plans rolled away...LOL! Sundiata had a hand in saving Perri who would have thunk it. Well at least my man HAN came to the rescue!



Author's Response: Han did his best, but his best still wasn't good enough.  EPILOGUE will wrap up shortly. Thanks chocolate for reading.

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Date: 26/08/09

Title: Chapter 27: EPILOGUE

Damn Bradley maybe I should feel pity for him after all Deacon is his son but he knows what that kid will become. Han hunts on and on with no rest in sight. Hunting these two down has become his mission in life since Trish isnt around. Thankfully Perri is alright. Wish she could take him away from the darkness but I guess she does sometimes. Thanks for the great story because I thoroughly enjoyed reading it including that tribute to Aaliyah!

Author's Response: You're welcomed Chocolate470 for reading.  Appreciate your comments and the best suggestion ever was incorporating Aaliyah.  Fabulous idea!  :-)

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Date: 27/08/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Looking back, he couldn’t quite find that moment when things started to change between them.

A Cold Case story written for the March "Friend or Foe?" challenge.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Challenges: Friend or Foe?
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3615
Read Count: 3504
Published: 29/03/09
Updated: 29/03/09


Title: Chapter 1: The Other Side

Sweet. I too watch Cold Case because of her. Makes me wonder if they will take that route with Scotty because indeed he is a manwhore. Sometimes I wonder with whom he will settle town but I do love the concept of these two getting together. Great story understand why its a one-shot but still wanted more...

Author's Response: LOL, Scotty is a whore on that show and Kat always calls him on it. I thik that's why I like them together. I think I will write at least one more fic with them. I'm not sure when, but I"m not done with the charcters quite yet. :)

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Date: 31/03/09

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Summary:

Justin Timberlake’s goal was to steal the heart of long time friend Beyoncé Knowles.  After doing so life couldn’t get any better in his eyes, but living in a world where nothing good ever lasts and your privacy is a rare commodity can wear and tear at any strong foundation.  Not allowing drama to destroy what God put together Justin and Beyoncé come out stronger then ever and ready to take a huge step in their relationship. With their story book ending an arms length away Justin is devastated to learn his biggest nightmare could very well be his reality, and finds him self asking can heaven wait?



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Categories: Music
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 42986
Read Count: 53578
Published: 24/04/09
Updated: 29/07/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 01 – The Ellen DeGeneres Show

I'm already in love with this story. Beyonce and Justin...If you ask me I believe Justin should get with Ciara in real life or damnit it Rhianna...just sayingLaughing Back to the story I think Beyonce being such a private person will be a bit ticked off with Justin spilling their business like that especially that whole marriage thing. A little fight and then the making up which I know will be HOTT!!! Definitely looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

I don't know about Ciara... maybe Rihanna.  Ciara isn't my kinda chick.  It might be because she can't sing for shit but that's just my opinion.  Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad you're lovin' it.

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Date: 24/04/09

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 02 – Love Sex Magic

Meow...I see this cat fight is just about to get started. I do have to admit shiree that the video was HOTTT!! YES I HATE YOU...Laughing Ready to take that plunge into some B&J loving but I'll wait for the next update!!!

Author's Response: I promise it will be worth the wait.Wink

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Date: 29/04/09

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 03 – The Boardroom

So if I give you a feedback it won't be true...Laughing

Sex HOTTT! But I'm wondering who has a better side in this disagreement. I guess no one because they are both right. I see the battle of the exes here or maybe a collaboration between the two but that maybe too cliche. Trace is interesting to me because what is he really up to. Mr. Suspense? It's always good to have a few people in the mix to keep us readers guessingSmile Awaiting the next update!



Author's Response: lol glad you're still lovein it.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/05/09