Penname: chocolate470 [Contact]

Real name: Georgia

Member Since: 04/07/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

When I was younger I loved reading very much but since the advent of television my reading habits have fallen off considerably. My first language is not English but a version of it which is "Creole" since I am a Belizean. My mother is Jamaican but my father was a Belizean. I felt that my earlier televison viewing habits have shaped my some of my opnions over the years but these days I try to instill in my nieces that we as black women have to be proud of ourselves.

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A love of a thousand years by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

T: Give me your heart and I promise to protect it from aching, I want you to love me as if you have never been hurt before.

E:  Love is an illusion created by people who want to believe that it's real, but it's a big ole scam, nothing more.

 

Todd and Evangeline met in university, at first, they played god with each other but just when they began to realize how much the heart matters, the truth that might ruin everything.



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 9718
Read Count: 961
Published: 01/05/09
Updated: 04/06/09

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Title: Chapter 2: What's your flavor?

YOU CRUSHED ME DYE! AND I LOVE IT! YEAH CANT WAIT FOR THAT UPDATE!!!

Author's Response:

Ohhh My Choc, did I really crush you? How bad did it hurt? Hmmmm....What should I do next, I think I need to add a dash of salt to this open wound.

I'm still waiting for your share of Tangie fic babe, thanks for reading.

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Date: 29/05/09
Title: Chapter 3: Tell me you love me.

SERVES YOU RIGHT TODDIKINS! Eventhough I do love you so much...;) What the hell did he expect to mess with Blair and not believe that she would have her own devious plans. I can't wait to see how this one turns out! excellente...Then again I do blame my girl because please if you get a man to give you his heart, soul and everything in between and break up with him then watch him walk away...nah ah. But I am curious as to what forces is she trying to fight.

Author's Response:

Hey Choc, you are so right about them, and they are about to blame for the big pile of mess, Isn't Vange just crazy? could someone please just tell that girl that loving men dont grow on trees.

 As for Todd, too bad things didn't go as planned. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 05/06/09
For Her by BlackMamba
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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One Life to Live

She’s gentle as she guides his hands to the headboard.

My response to the My Number One Challenge



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: My Number One
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1639
Read Count: 2236
Published: 02/06/09
Updated: 02/06/09

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Title: Chapter 1: For Her

Todd does know what to do to make Evangeline feel whole again. It still aches Black because I'm reminded of the possibilities that were available to TIIC regarding this couple. Very powerful awesome talent that was just wasted. Let me stop my ranting. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading choc! And yes, Todd does have that magic touch ;)

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Date: 06/06/09
In the Closetİ by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 20]
Summary:

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A contribution to the Open Series Canterbury...the revisited 

Taylor Viceroy can't seem to stay out of trouble.  Where ever he goes, it's sure to find him.  Recently released from a six month stint for operating a blind pig, he's now agreed to take an apprenticeship with his uncle Harvell Kimpson, a local carpenter in the small town of Mt. Clemens.  Harvell is married to a young vixen, wannabe screen siren Marlene, who fancies the younger Taylor and together they stoke a plan to drive Harvell to the nut house and make off with his new found wealth- a bounty from the Power Ball Tri-State Lottery. 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 



Table of Contents
Categories: Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Poem Fic Challenge
Series: Canterbury...the revisited
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9423
Read Count: 2781
Published: 09/06/09
Updated: 09/10/09

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Yeah Spark I enjoyed reading especially the descriptive sentences. Harvey must know that Marlene is playing him for an ass but probably he doesn't want to know. He aint getting anything but a kiss? LOL!!!

Can't wait for the next update cause I'm sure that Taylor and Marlene are going to get to know each other much better...LOL!!!

 



Author's Response:

LOL. chocolate470, Taylor and Marlene...can't you just imagine!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

So I read it earlier and didn't add my review but OHHHWEEE!!! So that's the way you do it when you want a man and yet won't give him the satisfaction...LOL!!! But in the end when you really want it...you really want it...LOL!!!

Keep it coming Spark cause I'm reading!



Author's Response: LMAO...yes she protests oh so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/06/09
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Final

So I read this already but I think I'm finally getting the poem. Harvell is working both Marlene and Tippy or did he leave Marlene for Tippy...ok so I'm still not getting it sorry...LOL!!! I enjoyed reading this story from you!

Author's Response: TY for reading! ;-) LOL. Harvell was developing an jones for her, but it wasn't until Taylor pulled the prank that the planets began to align for Tippy and Harvell. Shame that Marlene hadn't sampled him in so long that she'd forgot what he was working with.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/09
Refuge by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 81]
Summary: He was lonely, she was desperate, maybe they will find solace in each other.

Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 21312
Read Count: 5341
Published: 17/06/09
Updated: 19/07/10

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Title: Chapter 9: Intervention

OH NO YOU DIDN'T DYE! LMAO!! You're lucky we are cool because I know if I were to post this length of story you would have been all up in my grill...LOL!!!

It takes a man like Todd to reel in this type of Evangeline. My goodness by your description she really needs an intervention. When it comes to this denial word I believe Evangeline is not the only one...

Wonderful update but of course too short so you better keep your promise!



Author's Response:

Yes my darling Choc, I know we're cool and you wont use this against me. mmm denial, denial.....who else is in denial choc? Gat any ideas. Maybe some pushing and pulling between these two?

Glad you liked it, I'll keep my promise, scout's honor. Just between me and you, lets hope he doesn't settle for the path of least resistance. By the way, I dont eat granola bars any more so honey bunches of oats with peaches will do babe.

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Date: 07/01/10
Title: Chapter 1: The moment I saw you.

GREAT! I'm impressed how you set up Evangeline as a broke hard-ass pregnant woman whose down on her luck. Well at least Todd is the same prick that I have grown to love...LOL!!! Definitely no spark. I half-expected a WWE throw down match between the two. She steals his money and throws hot peppery chocolate in his face - What a woman...after his own heart...LOL!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE DYE!!!! LOL!!!

Author's Response:

My Choc, I'm so glad you like it, thanks for leaving a review.

While waiting for an update, allow me to let you in on a little secret, all you have to do is bribe me with a couple of Nature Valley Chewy Granola Bars and I'll get my lazy pretty fingers back to work.

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Date: 17/06/09
Title: Chapter 4: For the love of Angela

You see what you caused dye. I didnt even know you updated until I went looking so you need to update quicker...LOL!!!

So you ask a question at the end I believe under that dope haze of Evangeline she is looking out for her daughter because if she was being truly selfish she would kept the kid and took away Todd's money as well.

Todd has a lot of work ahead if he wants Evangeline to get clean and be a mother to that baby. This pretty woman you are writing some deep stuff here so I'm awaiting the next update please..:)



Author's Response:

My Choc, you are making me turn red by saying i'm deep, makes me feel good though and by the way, it's all for you babe, you keep me grounded, lord knows I'm always playing catch up while you are setting my heart and soul on fire with your Tangie fic. 

I should make Todd work hard to get her clean Hummm.....any ideas????

 You want your coco puffs but you refused to give me my granola bars, how fair is that?

As I was saying please tell Blair that Todd doesnt do Trannies okay, he like 100% real women. Thanks for the review.

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Date: 04/08/09
Title: Chapter 5: His arms

Yeah Dye you totally killed it with this update...FINALLY!...lol!!!

I adored they conversation between Todd and Angela...maybe she is his given her questions and the way she wants an answer. Poor Todd trying to talk about the birds and the bees...lol!!

Evangeline in the background all this while. Don't make her rich...please. Successful at changing her life around but on the verge of a divorce bc its always been Toddikins. You know the woman will still some sort of mean streak in her..;)

Absolutely loved reading it!



Author's Response:

My Choc, I was really torn between making Angie older and keeping her as an infant so it took a while before I decided to age her a little.

You say poor Todd,

I say Poor Angie for believing Todd when he told her he got her from Saks Fifth Ave.. Yes Vange was shadowing every now and then in the background because that's where cowards hide.

 As for making her rich or poor, I'm kinda torn, It's not fun to be me right now. lol. but I figured out a way to make everyone get what they want. Just put it at the back of your mind that a divorced Evangeline could be a very bitter woman, Todd might not even stand a chance. 

Thanks for reading, as always, you are my partner in Tangie crimes.

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Date: 09/09/09
Title: Chapter 6: Ego positive + Ego Negative= Ego neutral {Ego love?}

I loved this story. OM! LMAO! I loved the concept and the way Vange is still a you know what...LOL!!! Goodness I felt the chemistry between these two. I still can't get over Vange and her bitchy ways...LMAO!!!! Yeah I believe they can coexist. Look at the how gentle she was with Todd and the way her mannerisms changed. Shit Dye I was ready to go down that road with you until the damn phone rang...LOL!!! Bring on the ex-wife it will definitely be very interesting especially with this Vange.....Great, great afternoon read!

Author's Response:

Hey choc, sorry it took so long to reply, mama has been kinda busy and I know you wont hold it against me right????

Well give me all the love you got now cos I'm not so sure how much you'll love me in the up coming chaps. You know how to make a girl crack a smile, thanks babe for reading, all your reviews have been amazing.

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Date: 16/10/09
Title: Chapter 7: Gravity

YES DYE YOU DID LEAD ME ON! GOOD JOB!!! so you see I'm not that mad atcha when I should be...LOL! You got me good believing in Evangeline changing her life and moving on up in the world only to find...wah..wah... (that's me sniffling)

Yeah girlfriend needs an intervention but even if you don't let them get back togther I'm not impressed with this Kelly person. You made her downright icky which means maybe some 'reuniting and it feels so good' after all the months of therapy...lol!!



Author's Response:

Ohhh Choc, I got you sniffing? .....here's a tissue box, would you like me to hold it while you blow your nose? lol How can I make it up to ya?....... Oh I know...I'll update asap. Will that do?

 So you dont like Kelly that much? I guarantee you this...if her head gets too big for her scarf, we'll just have to organize a beatdown for her. Thanks for the review.

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Date: 26/10/09
One Night Onlyİ by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 10]
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What started out as a night on the town all by herself turned into an event she never could have planned!

"...My hair cut is short, sassy, and fierce just like me. I have a fresh pedi and mani, all cause I'm going out for a night on the town. Sure am. I bought myself a $115 ticket to see 'Dreamgirls Live' at the fabulous Fox Theatre...I'm worth it. In a dazzling red dress, some kick *ss stiletto sandals, and showing all the *ssholes just what they won't be getting. Dinner before, then cocktails at intermission, I'm going all out tonight because...I have a date with myself."

...and then, what did my wondering eyes see appear...

"I should have counted up the costs but instead I got lost in the seconds in the minutes in the hours...as we lay"

 

THIS IS A ONE SHOT for the SERIES Love Bears All

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5559
Read Count: 1606
Published: 29/08/09
Updated: 29/08/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I TOTALLY LOVED THIS STORY. Liar!...LOL! You are good at this one shot deal... I felt all she was going through in her marriage. Like you captured a piece of every woman's story - being there, supporting even though they do cheat and when he delivers those damn divorce papers you look at life differently even doing shit you wouldnt. Suddenly he comes back and you are his again even if its only for one time on that special occasion. They always come back don't they? Absolutely outstanding writing. I bow to you Spark!

Author's Response: Nuh uh! I'm struggling still with it. Yes chocolate, we may not want to admit it but they do come back...indeed! Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed!

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Date: 31/08/09
Chaleur by BlackMamba
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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Uncanny X-Men

When she shows up that first night, he’s not surprised.



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Categories: Books
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1550
Read Count: 2933
Published: 09/09/09
Updated: 09/09/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chaleur

Black you took the thoughts right out of my mind when it comes to a cartoon character...lol! But I was thinking about Storm and Wolverine bc I remember an episode when I was younger about those two being in an alternate universe and being together. At least you did it instead of thinking about it...LOL!!! I need to read this again bc I'm real busy right now and tired but I enjoyed the read. Thanks!



Author's Response: Hey choc! Thank you for reading and I'm so glad you liked it :)

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/09
A Princess Comes To Town by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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Port Charles has a disease and its miracle cure breeds something far worse than the disease itself.

It is better to have a lion at the head of an army of sheep, than a sheep at the head of an army of lions. -Daniel Dafoe  

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective entities. The plot is the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC  



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Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jason/ Keesha (General Hospital)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6316
Read Count: 3855
Published: 10/09/09
Updated: 26/10/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Alright Spark I have a confession to make...I have seen other authors write about Jason and Keesha and have never really been attracted to it bc I was absolutely hurt when they broke these two up...my first real daytime crushing my heart sort of deal. Since you have ventured over to my daytime waters I've decided to give it a shot and so far its been a great read so look forward to me commenting :)

Author's Response: LOL chocolate470. Touche! I know the pain you feel. It was a big bruise over my eye. I think part of the reason I continued watching was because I remained hopeful, that some day a reunion would happen.

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Date: 11/09/09
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Spark why can't I get this Jason out of my mind and what those idiots did to this couple....AH! You did read my Todd and Van flick...lol! Let me say it now I hate Sonny...lol...Now back to the story.

I understand why Keesha told him off bc its always the same thing with Jason. Always protecting but what comes next. Then again why bother her when he's got Carly.



Author's Response: LOL, Keesha has a invisible ice pick. She owns a place where Jason hides in his BOP. Keesha is the LOHL, and he knows he shouldn't go there, so he markets his love in the need to protect her. At some point he'll have to face up to it. TY for reading. Interesting things coming the way of these two.

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Date: 04/11/09
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I remember that...the way those idiots changed Jason so much after the accident that he didn't remember their love...always they do this to the black sistahs...I only watched that soap briefly after that and never returned...not even sniffed.

Carly is a real BIATCH! Why does it really matter to her. The relationship that Jason and Keesha had went really deep so why wouldnt he feel like protecting her. So continue to update and I will read..LOL!!!



Author's Response: Carly is so overly protective, that it borders obsession. In my bubble JnK are love, and the soapdemon can't touch them! LOL! They are their own angst, not impeded by others. Carly has no power in my world! LOL! Thanks for reading!

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Date: 04/11/09
Jane Lord by dyehanna1
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary: It’s the 1960’s, he was beautiful and she was gorgeous, their love was unacceptable but in the year of the Lord, anything is possible.

Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2619
Read Count: 1029
Published: 05/12/09
Updated: 05/12/09

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Even though her boobs are now saggy, he still tells her she looks like a twenty-five year old spinster and while he’s turned to a hairless wonder, she kisses his bald head and tells him that he’s number one on her sexiest man alive calendar.

OH LAWD DYE WHY!!! LMAO!!!

This story was so sweet and I can't believe it that you have been holding out on me. Damn I'm at my desk with my hand on my chin practically eating up every line of this one and seeing the whole scene in my mind. Thoroughly enjoyable and so does this mean you are challenging me or something...LOL!!!

 



Author's Response:

My oh MyChoc, Lil ole me challenge you!!!!! No way, I wouldn't dare. I just wanted to flunt my Tangie in your face and make you hurry with that story you promised me. It's lonely at this end of America, just feels like no one is writting about our favorite couple anymore, I hear they might cancel OLTL which means Vange might never wake up that pisses me th hell off but you my dear, you can fix that with tips of those beautigul talented fingers you got. Is flattery getting me anywhere? All jokes aside, i'm dying to be wowed by you again.

Do you even know how cold it is here? babe, only Tangie keeps me warm at night. Thanks for the review, always make my day.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/09
Whispered Like Prayers by BlackMamba
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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 Merlin

Gwen wakes to the sound of Arthur's deep and steady breathing and feels very much the same.

Not like a Queen at all.



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Guinevere
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Gwen/Arthur (Merlin)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2191
Read Count: 11012
Published: 28/02/10
Updated: 28/02/10

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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm guilty for haven't read on of your stories in a long while (busy, work, life) but I really needed to read this one shot of yours since I had been watching SyFy this weekend with its Merling marathon.

Your descriptive words are like poetry that are like music to my ears and makes me feel so calm. I'm sure I will visit your works from time to time...LOL!!

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Date: 29/03/10
Romantic Date From Hell by wwefanforlife
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
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Trina has been on a lot of bad romantic dates from hell, but the craziest one of them all has been with none other than sexy bad boy Tony Bryce. Here’s the tale about their date.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1934
Read Count: 3357
Published: 29/06/11
Updated: 29/06/11

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Hey wwe,

You made me have to refresh my memory about oompa loompas...did I spell that correctly LOLLL!!! Yeah you gave me a great laugh with this tale. It was totally hilarious and Tony is truly a walking disaster. He must have been really really nervous on his date with Trina but burning down the restaurant...hilarious. Yeah Trina those guys are always the ones you still think about afterwards bc they really try. Thanks for the great laugh today!



Author's Response:

glad that you enjoy it and had a good laugh with this tale. Yeah Randy Orton tans alot and he sometimes reminds me of a big oompa loompa lol. Yeah he was nervous for sure lol but hopeful she give him another chance. Thank you for the review it made my day.

 Reviewer: chocolate470 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/11