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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Leslie sans never wanted anything quite as bad as she wanted to be partner for the Darnell firm and for some slick playboy who can barely keep it in his pants to up and take it pissed her off. oh how he pissed her off. So now Leslie thought of a way to destroy that dream killer, get her postion and move on to bigger better things. First Step : make him fall in love with her, Second Step: make him let go of that posistion And then The Last step: Smash his heart into million of little gooey red pieces. Let the Game begin.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4845
Read Count: 3028
Published: 09/01/10
Updated: 28/08/10


Title: Chapter 2: Tonight is not the night

I like, we see the potential already.  Question, in the cast pics it calls him Arden and in the story Daniel.  In the next chapter could you explain the name thing?  Thank you.  My criticism, is the chapters are too damn short. lol.  I am confident you will do better now that this has been pointed out to you.

A



Author's Response:

Oh jeez. The actors name is daniel so ill try and fiz it in the next chapter .

Sorry!

And I couldnt agree more about the shortness of the chapter. :)

i will work harder to make it longer !

thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/01/10

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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Harmony Peterson, an ambitious young medical student, wants to perfect her bedside manner before she begins her clinical rotations. Keegan Grant is more than willing to help.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7603
Read Count: 7614
Published: 26/01/10
Updated: 04/02/10


Title: Chapter 4: Muscles & Nerves

Only one chapter left, what do you mean?  Surely, you must mean only one chapter of the physical exam, seems to me there's just gotta be more chapters for Keegan and Harmony.  This is only a thought but how about an exam of the genitalia does take place in a cold, sterile exam room.  Just a suggestion.

A



Author's Response:

Well, there is just one more section of the general physical left but I don't think it's the end of things for Harmony and Keegan. As for an examination of the genitalia...Harmony did get pretty close. Maybe next time, she won't hestitate to do a more thorough inspection...

I really appreciate your suggestion. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 27/01/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

The story of four long time friends and their journeys with challenges, change and love while keeping their friendship together. This is the first of a series; Spring

*This story was posted before, but was deleted for some reason. So if it seems familiar, it is lol.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 28581
Read Count: 1669
Published: 12/02/10
Updated: 12/02/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Double No Sexin'

I really am enjoying this storyl.  Loved that Jeanine's date was really a feelgood kind of date, because that was really needed after Carlotta's disaster.  How in the world will her and the firefighter have a meeting of the minds, wihat will be Roger and Jeanine's drama, because he seems to not be to happy with the attention she receives, that she enjoys by the way from other men.  The potential of this story is amazing and you are doing an awesome job.  One suggestion to imporove this story.  "POST MORE FREQUENTLY"

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13/02/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 158]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 47806
Read Count: 58025
Published: 19/02/10
Updated: 13/01/11


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - How do you know when you’re in love?

Wow, that update was long in coming, but worth the wait.  Please post again soon.  Hoping for more early Zhay and Dax.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 28/10/10

Title: Chapter 1: 1-The Intro

 You have made a wonderful start, and are definitely making me want to read more, so enough with the chit chat, get to writing, I'm ready for the next installment of this story.  Good job.

A



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am working to bring you the next few chapeters.

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Date: 20/02/10

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

Wow, wow, wow.  What can I say, I could have never imagined this would be Dax and Zhay's backstory.  How do you survive, loss such as this?  I liked this story from the first, but now I can hardly wait to go on what I hope is their journey of forgiveness and eventually survival over profound loss.  Thank you for taking us along.  I am so excited to see what you have in store for us.

A



Author's Response: I am excited that so many are enjoying this story. It was such a hard chapter to write. But my characters just kept pushing me to get it done. They are nagging me right now to keep working on the next few chapters. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 26/06/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

Wow, so Dax is finally awake and doesn't remember Zhay.  Well this girl's gonna have to work on making him fall in love with her all over again, why giving him all those "sponge baths"  lol.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 25/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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Who says there's nothing wrong with being nice?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4545
Read Count: 3074
Published: 19/03/10
Updated: 05/07/11


Title: Chapter 2: Accentuate the Positive

Hi Evil, so what type of boards are you sitting for?  I know, I know, I'm nosy as hell.  I actually came on to tell you, I am enjoying your story, and look forward to reading more.  I'm holding my opinion on Eric, let's hope that he's worthy of Kelly.

A

 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading the first chapter of this story! I'm in preparation for Step 1 of the US Medical Licensing Exam (USMLE), which I will be taking this summer. Sometimes doing all these practice questions makes my head want to explode so I go back to Kelly and Eric, who are leading much more interesting lives than I am right now. I hope to have an update up soon.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 24/03/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235800
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for the great update Junebug, I can hardly wait for Tiffani to realize what she had in KC, and come to find out Rielle the smarts to know a good man, when she finds one. 

A



Author's Response: It'll be a blast for sure.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 30/05/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hello Junebug,

I am enjoying your story, however since this is a review I must offer constructive critiscism...your chapters are just too short.  Just when I am getting into the flow it's over.  Therefore my charge to you is to write longer chapters or a lot  more of them, at very frequent intervals, lol.  I am confident you are up to this challenge.  Please know that I am very much enjoying the journey of these interesting couples and looking forward to reading more.

A



Author's Response: Thank you for your honesty, my sister was saying the same thing. My husband however says that's called leaving something to the imagination. I'm working on making my chapters longer. Please continue to read and enjoy.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 15/05/10

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[Reviews - 177]
Summary: DA Banner

 

Twenty-three year old Leigh Grayson has had only one thing on her mind for the last five years: Justice. But to get justice she will have to fight one man’s sick obsession.

Will Detective Damien Crook be able to convince her to accept his help and most of all his love?

I want to say a huge thank you to Renee Banks for all her support and editing skills. Renee, you have no idea how much it means to me!

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33650
Read Count: 31683
Published: 09/05/10
Updated: 18/12/10


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hello KK,

Congratulations on your first story, I hope it won't be your last.   You did not disappoint, you are off to a fine start. I find I can hardly wait for the intrigue to begin.  I love stories where there is a beautiful and spirited heroine, a dashing hero, and a vile and preverted villain, so thanks very much for including 3 of my favorite character types in a single story.  Please update soon, and frequently. 

A



Author's Response: Hey Arabelle! Thank you for your comment. I am a bit insecure about posting this story. I never done this before, your comment really brightened my day. I will post next chapter soon\!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 09/05/10

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

KK, thanks so much for the update.  You did good girl, real good.  Anxiously awaiting your next update.

A



Author's Response: Hey Arabelle, Thanks for your kind words. I will post as soon as my faithful editor, the brilliant Renee banks, sends it back to me.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 24/05/10

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Hello KK,

First of all, let me tell you how much I enjoyed chapter 2, secondly how happy I am that you have seen the error of your ways in writing such a short chapter and leaving us hanging the way you have. Also how soon is soon, I'm ready for the next chapter any moment now. lol.

A



Author's Response: Thank you Arabelle! I am hoping to post chapter 3 by the end of the week.!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 10/05/10

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Hello KK,

Happy to see an update.  Me likey very much.  Interesting twist I see coming here.  Please keep up the good work.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 17/10/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 80]
Summary:

It's been seven years since Billy walked out of Lily's life. He's returned to Genoa City with one goal, and he's willing use all of his resources to accomplish it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Lily Winters
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: LnB stand alone stories
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85777
Read Count: 147751
Published: 01/07/10
Updated: 07/04/11


Title: Chapter 5: Five

Thanks for the update Cholyn.

I must say I was never a Billy/Lily fan.  I am a diehard Cane/Lily fan, that said I am however enjoying your story.  What I enjoyed most about this chapter is that you show Nick and Lily actually love each other, that is the component that a successful triangle must have.  Both candidates for the heart of desired must truly love her/him. In the Y&R version, I was never sure of how much Billy actually cared for Lily, that's why I think a Billy/Lily/Cane triangle would have been difficult to achieve.  You are however addressing this oversight magnificently and so I anxiously await reading how your story will further unfold.

A



Author's Response:

Arabelle, thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you like the story. I hope you still like it after the next chapter. lol 

I thought that Billy started to fall for Lily, because other wise, he wouldn't have confessed. The office and cabin scenes show that clearly. I really liked the J-Quad storyline, imo, it's the best quad Maria has written, each character was different, they had chemistry, and they brought good ratings.   

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 25/07/10

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Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 675]
Summary:

 

 

Miss. Innocent meets Mr. Dangerous.

Who says love has to be soft and gentle?

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Caution is an original work of fiction written by C.C. Please do not copy and paste this story to any other websites. 

 

Beautiful banner by: The Queen, Missus James!!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: La Famiglia
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 165
Read Count: 136399
Published: 27/11/10
Updated: 21/06/11


Title: Chapter 20: The Truth

Hey CandyCaine,

Thanks for the update.  I am so glad you had Gianni come clean before  they went any further. This way they can move forward in honesty.  But hopefully Kambree will make him suffer a bit for being such an asshole.  Keep up the good work.

A



Author's Response:

I felt it was needed because too many stories have the men sleep with a woman before coming clean, I wanted to do something different. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thanks so much! :)

 

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 15/12/10

Title: Chapter 30: Things Happening

Alllllllllllllllllllllll sh!t, Lamar done gone and done it now.  I anxiously await your next update, so what you gonna call it, All Hell Breaks Out, cause when Gianni finds out what happened we know it's gonna.  lol

A



Author's Response: We shall see lol!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 25/12/10

Title: Chapter 9: The Date

That was a freakin awesome chapter. That kiss was so hott, I think I felt it my damn self.  I am a little disappointed she caved so soon, but I understand totally.  I wiould probably all ready be nekkid, virgin or not, cause Gianni is fine as hell. Looking forward to Kam laying it on Gianni to the point he won't know how to spell his own name. lol.  Gurl, you doing good with this story, keep it up.

A



Author's Response: Lol, @ nekkid! LMFAO YOU ARE TOO MUCH!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 03/12/10

Title: Chapter 7: One word or Two?

That was very entertaining, but waaaaaaaaay too short. Okay so my constructive critisim is "LONGER UPDATES",  lol. Thank you for posting.

A



Author's Response:

Lol, yes ma'am! ;)

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 02/12/10

Title: Chapter 4: Two Different Views

Hi CandyCaine,

Thanks for the update, I'm enjoying the new direction of your story.  I thought it was just me having problems with the yahoo groups site.  I hate those, not user friendly at all so I for one am glad to see you have posted at the Chamber.

A



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I am so glad to see that you are enjoying this story!

That site is a mess, lol! JEEZ!

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 29/11/10

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

A one night stand that doesn't necessarily end in disaster but certainly starts out that way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Busted: Romantic Cliches Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 6497
Read Count: 8004
Published: 22/05/11
Updated: 11/10/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was freakin hilarious, I can hardly wait to read what other comical situations these 2 individuals find themselves in.  Please continue soon.  Thanks for the laugh.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 23/05/11

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm smittten too.  More please.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 30/05/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

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Trina has been on a lot of bad romantic dates from hell, but the craziest one of them all has been with none other than sexy bad boy Tony Bryce. Here’s the tale about their date.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1934
Read Count: 3385
Published: 29/06/11
Updated: 29/06/11


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a total hoot.  Please turn Trina and Tony into a full-blown story.

A



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy it and had a good laugh. It seems alot of people want me to do a Tony and Trina story. Something for me to think about doing. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 29/06/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Hawthorne

 

A 'Hawthorne' Fic. When Detective Nick Renata discovers that Dr. Tom Wakefield has betrayed Christina, he gives Tom 24 hours to tell Christina something that could end their marriage for good.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Christina Hawthorne
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 18855
Read Count: 4063
Published: 31/07/11
Updated: 25/11/11


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hi PriscillaPal,

Thanks for posting your story, as a TeamTom fan it's difficult to read, almost as difficult as watching Nick/Christina on screen.  But I appreciate finally seeing a story about this character.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed
Date: 01/08/11