Penname: intellectual titmouse [Contact]

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Member Since: 31/01/10

Membership status: Member

Bio:

a writer/reader that enjoys realistic plots, even more real people, and a little challenge on the way to the ending of that story.


my novella Mistletoe Hell is up for sale at Amazon.com. here's the link:


http://www.amazon.com/Mistletoe-Hell-Novella-I-Hardy/dp/1453805230/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1336012674&sr=8-2


thank you for all your support.




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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

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One Life to Live Drabble.  Todd Manning's letter to a comatose Evangeline Williamson 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 364
Read Count: 3099
Published: 12/06/08
Updated: 12/06/08


Title: Chapter 1: Todd's Letter

damn. *tear*

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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Good...bad...I'm the guy with the gun.

An Evil Dead Fic

Banner by TokenBlackGirl



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge
Series: The Chamber Grindhouse, Tales of the Boomstick
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4942
Read Count: 2607
Published: 21/10/08
Updated: 21/10/08


Title: Chapter 2: Dead By Dawn

Lmao. evil dead was one of my favourite series and this was awesome.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 23/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

              A simple story: girl meets boy and they want each other.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11211
Read Count: 3664
Published: 15/01/09
Updated: 15/01/09


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

adorable!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

I Do, I Know  .

This is a response to the author challenge for May: what happens after you say "I love you"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenges: Everyone Says I Love You
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2637
Read Count: 1274
Published: 20/05/09
Updated: 20/05/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was amazing.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/03/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 48]
Summary:

 

 

Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock...welcome to the sound of the biological clock. It takes center stage in the lives of three families: The Whitmans, The Thompsons, and the Murrays. This is the story about love versus loss, dreams versus duty, fame versus family, and babies, babies, babies!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 32141
Read Count: 4848
Published: 28/05/09
Updated: 01/01/10


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Fluttering In The Stomach (2000)

man, i am so sad to see this hasn't been updated in forever. this story is so well-written, absolutely hilarious, and so rea in so many ways! love, love, love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words. Honestly I think about my characters daily too :-) I have such big plans for them. I PROMISE to update the story and climb back on to my writing horse very soon!

Thank you again,

HP

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/11

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 109]
Summary:

stories/498/images/FFDHbanner.png 

After her disastrous blind date, Kat Miller and Scotty Valens find some common ground...and a whole lot more. 

Banner by TokenBlackGirl

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 79477
Read Count: 122703
Published: 12/07/09
Updated: 07/11/09


Title: Chapter 17: Pure Intentions

love it! where's more?

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/11/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

A response to the songfic challenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Song Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 5360
Published: 31/07/09
Updated: 31/07/09


Title: Chapter 2: Do You Remeber?

you. are. brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm blushing, but I love it.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

 

Banner

Tristan Danes is young, good-looking, and unemployed without a reasonably useable degree.His life gets turned upside down with the death of his grandmother and the inheritance of her small New York based coffee shop along with the mountains of debt that came with it.

Kira Moore just graduated from Boston University with a Biology degree. Her life looked good so far with the exceptions of a troubled law breaking sister and the inability to find a job. So what do these two have in common, besides 11 years of friendship they're technically married, well only technically. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 26320
Read Count: 10117
Published: 21/08/09
Updated: 22/07/11


Title: Chapter 5: The New Start

where's the rest?!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 03/12/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

 


Vampire Diaries


He’s not strong enough to fight this. He never has been.


A belated gift fic written for BlackMamba



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: The "All I Want For Christmas" Challenge
Series: Bloodlust
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1368
Read Count: 4274
Published: 27/12/09
Updated: 27/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: You Won’t Let Me Sleep

well, damn, that was good.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 208]
Summary:

After the hostile takeover of the world by fairytale (and nightmare?) creatures, Roxanne doesn't have much of a choice but to go with the flow. She does have one major problem, though. There's this guy, see...And he thinks that she is destined to be his mate. What's the problem, you ask? Well, for one thing, he can't touch her without doing her bodily harm...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 47491
Read Count: 24038
Published: 18/01/10
Updated: 09/07/11


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

i just read all of this in one sitting; girlie, this is good! i'll write a more detailed review later, but for now, i am absolutely torn! i heart Mod, but Leo is so sweet and kind and smart-assed that i totally heart him too! one question (which will not skew my view on this at all, but): is Roxanne mixed?

can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm flattered that you took the time to read it all in one go!

Leo and Mod are pretty cool, huh? I'm glad they don't seem too angsty. Well, Leo doesn't considering the circumstances.

I haven't written much about Roxi's pre-story life. I know I need to do that some time soon. I never imagined her as mixed, though. I'll be writing more about that in the future, though.

Thank you very much for reviewing!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/06/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

  I love I love I love
This dream of going upstream
I love I love I love
All the trouble that you give me

-Feist - "The Limit to Your Love"



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: They're Playing Our Song Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3213
Read Count: 3487
Published: 08/02/10
Updated: 08/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was amazing. i'm . . . utterly speechless.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/03/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

 

       She's always thought it strange, that she could never know the entirety of a person that was standing right in front of her. There's always a past: so many memories and decisions and forgotten happenings that she can't help but wonder if anyone can ever really know another person.

 

*The continuation of this story is highly doubtful, but the banner is so pretty, I don't want to take it down.* 

 

Awesome banner by TokenBlackGirl. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3771
Read Count: 1678
Published: 07/03/10
Updated: 07/03/10


Title: Chapter 2: "I'm not like them, but I can pretend..."

so i think you should continue this.

i completely understand as a writer how something can feel completely out of your grasp. i write in these forums to free up myself from my more serious projects (my major one dealing with a couple that are former addicts, one for heroin, the other for sex) and even those kinda of stump me at times.

but i think you should challenge yourself to continue this. don't give up on yourself so early! lol i've read your other work and you are brilliant. much, much more skilled than you are obviously giving yourself credit for.

please, please continue.

with a cherry on top. and not those marchino or whatever-the-hell-they're-called ones, cuz those taste like chemistry and death. and maybe some sprinkles. aight, sprinkles too if it'll get you to reconsider this story.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary: Kat Miller and ADA Curtis Bell are on a break and it's tearing them apart. 

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 987
Read Count: 2519
Published: 11/04/10
Updated: 11/04/10


Title: Chapter 1: Do Over

sad, but beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 09/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Writer Mason Hendrix is currently in a heated battle with writer's block, so he decides a change of scenery might do his writing some good.  Little did he know he would find his muse in the Fender women, nor that he would discover their loves from the past and the future.

Wolfe Fender is the daughter of legendary Frontwoman, Bedouin Fender.  Adoptd by James Logan after her mother's untimely death Wolfe grew up different.  Now Mason Hendrix has come along with the chaos of the Logan/Fender family.

 Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5993
Read Count: 3176
Published: 13/04/10
Updated: 05/10/11


Title: Chapter 4: Jack

why hasn't this been updated in eighty years?! this story is dope!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 13/03/11

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 42]
Summary:

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When they were young, Kendal and Keoni hated one another. But as they grew into young adults something changed. Now, on the verge of adulthood, they'll come to discover that the ones they've been looking for were right there all along.

A one shot for Nene and the Summer Prompt Fest.

 

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5755
Read Count: 15736
Published: 04/05/10
Updated: 04/05/10


Title: Chapter 3: When we were in love

damn. that was a punch to the gut. well done!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/12/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

An Oncoming Addiction

"As an adult she'd gradually lost everything, including her free will and the only man who loved her as she was. Now there was a vampire with a hard-on for violence calling on her. Whatever happened next would involve a lot of blood."

Includes small spoilers for upcoming episodes of True Blood.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1372
Read Count: 3089
Published: 27/06/10
Updated: 27/06/10


Title: Chapter 1: An Oncoming Addiction

awesome.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/10/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A brief look at Martha Jones as she is now: Free. Set Seasonn 5 or later. Martha/Ten onesided, Martha/Eleven. Mentions of Tom Milligan and Mikey Smith.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 674
Read Count: 633
Published: 27/06/10
Updated: 27/06/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

dope! are you going to write more?! i certainly hope so!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/11/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

The Doctor is sure to visit his doctor every year for an important appointment. Martha/Eleven. Compliments "Free,"



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1385
Read Count: 2597
Published: 29/06/10
Updated: 29/06/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

huge fan of dr. who, especially martha's series. well done.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary: Bonnie needs Damon's help. And he gives it to her, 'cause that's the kind of vampire he is.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Bonnie Bennett
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Damon/Bonnie (Vampire Diaries)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1869
Read Count: 1629
Published: 06/07/10
Updated: 06/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Bloodletting

please tell me you're not seriously considering leaving this here? c'mon!

Author's Response: :D I know I have at least one other Bamon story in the works, but after that no plans... I'm glad you liked this one though. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 09/09/10

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

 


 


So much to do, so little time.


My (failed) attempt at the 1000 word fic challenge. 


Banner by curiouslyamused 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Challenges: The "Less is More" Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1060
Read Count: 2433
Published: 11/07/10
Updated: 11/07/10


Title: Chapter 1: Please, Please, Please

this. was. awesome. absolutely adorable and sweet. and i've loved that actor since i saw Amelie in theatres. excellent choice.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/10/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 51]
Summary:

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Wouldn't it be easier to just stay?

For Nene

Disclaimer/Credit: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Image(s) from gettyimages.com.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9465
Read Count: 17212
Published: 24/07/10
Updated: 10/09/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Stay

beautiful.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstar
Date: 14/11/10

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 132]
Summary:

 

 MY BROTHER’S KEEPER

Twin - One of two offspring born at the same birth; or one of two identical or similar people

Brother - a male who has the same parents as another

Family - Two or more people who share goals and values, have long-term commitments to one another, and reside usually in the same dwelling place

 

Love - A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness. A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair 

AM I MY BROTHER’S KEEPER?  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 43918
Read Count: 27939
Published: 19/08/10
Updated: 19/02/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i'm liking this story. awesome tension. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 04/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 9]
Summary: Scotty can't think. In fact, he can't do much of anything, without thinking of her... and him.


Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Det. Kat Miller
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1882
Read Count: 1450
Published: 09/09/10
Updated: 09/09/10


Title: Chapter 1: Daydreams

please tell me you're doing more with these? this was . . . whew! damn good! i need a cigarette!

Author's Response: I am. I totally am! Hahahaha *hands you cigarette* Enjoy! Thank you so much for reading. *hug*

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 09/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 50]
Summary:

 

stories/227/images/bodyguard2.png

 

Banner made by Quila.  Thank you so much!  It's FANTASTIC!!

 

 

Soteria: Greek goddess of safety, deliverance and preservation from harm.

After tragedy struck four years ago, award-winning singer Rachel Bélanger is finally ready for her return to the stage.  However, a stalker has other plans. . .

 

Frank Kostopoulos of Soteria Security is hired to protect Rachel and her family after the latest incident.

 

The only thing standing between the stalker and Rachel is Frank.  He made a vow to do whatever it takes to keep her and her family safe. 

HUGE SPECIAL THANKS FOR JUNEBUG66!  She took the time to help me with this by reading it over, asking questions about things I added/missed, gave me encouragement when I got down, giving me a swift kick when needed and for being a very special person.

Thanks Junebug!!

BETA'D BT JUNEBUG66

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Movie Night
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 24185
Read Count: 6696
Published: 19/09/10
Updated: 20/04/11


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

excited for this story. can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review; I REALLY appriciate it!

chel

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed
Date: 20/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 247]
Summary:

Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67187
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 15: Joyeux Noël (Part II)

i absolutely adored this story. all characters are completely tanglible, the language natural, funny, tense when it needed to be. i'm sorry i missed out on this for so long, but glad i was able to read it all in one sitting. well, two - last night and while at work pretending to work. well done, woman, and i'm excited for the continuation. i want to know how Trigger deals with James' relocation, how Pearl will be affected by it (at Trigger's hands), how Mel fares (love him!), and Xander and Quinn of course. i want them to visit. lol and for the neice? no words. waiting . . . 



Author's Response:

All of those situations will be dealt with in All of the Lights. The sequel is going to be much longer than LMD because it introduces so many new characters and ties up any loose ends that weren't answered in LMD. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/08/11