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Unthinkable by Cholyn
Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

It's been seven years since Billy walked out of Lily's life. He's returned to Genoa City with one goal, and he's willing use all of his resources to accomplish it.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

 



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Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Lily Winters
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: LnB stand alone stories
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 85777
Read Count: 147195
Published: 01/07/10
Updated: 07/04/11

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Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

I just…there's so much I could say, LOL. I guess I'll simply go with, Nick is disgusting. And no matter what he says, his actions prove that he does not love Lily.

 

Lily is simply the antithesis of Sharon, and since he loathes the fact that he desires a woman like Sharon, he's clinging to Lily. That's not love.

 

Even if Billy was nowhere in the picture, even if things never worked out between him and Lily, Lily needs to get herself far away from Nick.

 

Thanks for sharing this great story and chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! 

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Date: 07/02/11
Title: Chapter 2: Two

Yes, Billy thought, his eyes drifting close, as sleep finally came to claim him. Things were indeed going to get a hell of a lot worse. And god help Genoa City, because he was going to tear it apart, brick by brick, if he had to, because came hell or high water, husband or no, he was going after Lily with the ruthlessness of the titan he was, and taking down anyone who got in his way.

 

Woot! Best line of the entire chapter, lmao.  Thanks for sharing :D .

 Reviewer: emme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/10
Title: Chapter 1: One

It's great to see you've started another fic! :D Can't wait to see where this one leads, but I can tell that it will be intense.  Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 02/07/10
Title: Chapter 10: Ten

Thanks for the update! I was behind a chapter, but these were great. Love, love, love how the plot is thickening. Nick, smh, he had his chance, and he's completely wasted it. Now Lily is pissed, and is prone to making some rash decisions, LOL. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Also, the part with the diary was a nice touch :) . 

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Date: 10/09/10
Title: Chapter 3: Three

Loved Billy naming the fragrance after Lily.  He's making it pretty clear what his intentions in Genoa City are, lol.

Author's Response:

Yeah, no one can say that they were blind sided. = ))

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Date: 11/07/10
Title: Chapter 5: Five

Loved this chapter, and the flashback scene.  And I loved the touch with the charm bracelet.  This is a great story, and I can't wait for the next update.  Thanks for sharing :) .

Author's Response:

I feel like a fraud if I take claim for the bracelet, when it was all the muse. I didn't know about it, until I wrote it. lol

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Date: 25/07/10
Title: Chapter 6: Six

LOVED Billy blackmailing the teacher to make sure Lily was on the team.  Also loved the scene with Billy and Cane, and the backstory that you've given to Cane and Mac.  Those two seem to have the perfect little family, saving the world and the environment, LOL.  Also, can't wait to see what Adam is up to.

Author's Response:

Billy learned to play dirty at an early age. 

Thanks for sharing the Mane love! = )) Mac and Cane are a sweet little family.

Thanks for commenting. 

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Date: 02/08/10
Title: Chapter 4: Four

Loved the update!  I feel bad for both Billy and Lily, and think it's great that the story makes you feel for both characters.  Loved Lily standing up to him, but loved how Billy won't back down.  Lily's life is about to turned upside down, and I can't wait to see what happens next.  Thanks for sharing :) .

Author's Response: I didn't plan it that, lol. These characters seem to do whatever they want, especially Billy.

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Date: 17/07/10
Title: Chapter 8: Eight

Love how the plot is just rolling along. Things are getting intense, and I have a feeling they'll only get more intense before this story is over, LOL. Of course Kate would be the one to help out Billy, she knows that Lily/Nick isn't right, lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 25/08/10
Title: Chapter 7: Seven

Things are getting really interesting, lol. Loved Adam running interference. Loved the LnB. Hated that it took his father, and Billy coming to town for Nick to take Lily on that trip she's been wanting. Loved the corporate stuff, and I'm looking forward to Newman not getting that company. Overall, great update :) . Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 12/08/10
Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

I LOVED Sharon in this chapter, I've never particularly been a fan of the character on the show. Seems like Miss Collins and Mr. Newman share more than just history. Do I sense an appearance from Noah on the horizon? Having Sharon be the owner of Symphonic Smells was a great twist.

Also, the LnB moment was great. It was the beginnings of a good convo. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 13/10/10
Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

This update was sad :( but very much enjoyable. The way Billy went about leaving Lily when they were teens, was wrong, but I don't fault him for actually going out to see the world. I think that was necessary.

 

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. 

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Date: 17/01/11
Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen

Oh Nick…smh.

 

He and Lily did need to have a conversation, but can she breathe. Damn, the girl was thrown down a flight of stairs, found out she was pregnant, and found her husband has a five year old less than 24hours ago.

 

He couldn't giver her at least another 48 to figure herself out? Get her mind together?

 

It's obvious Lily shouldn't have married Nick when she did. The two of them both brought baggage into their marriage.

 

Anyhow, thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: emme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/02/11
Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen

This was a perfect, open-ended conclusion to a drama filled story, LOL.

I had sympathy for both Billy and Lily in this fic. They both made some poor decisions en route to this place they ended up. But I'm glad they arrived at a point where they could ackowledge those mistakes, and learn from them to hopefully become better people, with a stronger relationship.

Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed the journey.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you thought it was a perfect ending. 

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Date: 07/04/11
Retired
Room for One More by Foxy N Love
Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

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 They were three...they wanted a fourth.


 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 19686
Read Count: 9697
Published: 24/03/11
Updated: 21/07/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Who's That Girl

I can already see this one is going to be interesting. Four people? What a doozy, LOL. It's off to a great start, can't wait to see where it goes.

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 24/03/11
Title: Chapter 3: Beautiful Stranger

Woot! to celadon!

Seriously though, this chapter had a great setup for what's to come. MJ is not ready, but methinks she's about to get a crash course. I hope once her master class is over, she's ready to try new things…like two brothers and the girl they both seem to have sex with.

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 05/04/11
Title: Chapter 4: Like A Virgin

Woah buddy. MJ is so not ready for this. Maybe instead of the trio corrupting her, MJ will be a positive influence on them (I doubt it, too, lol). I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what is the nature of Kieren/Ronnie/Ian's relationship (although some aspects of it seem obvious, lol). And I'm also curious to read how MJ will react to it all.

Great update! Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Kieren, Ronnie, and Ian are very close. I to wonder how MJ will react. She's not saying much right now.

Love

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Date: 14/04/11