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Summary: John and Evangeline find themselves far from home, not together, but maybe not apart. Can they resolve their differences? (This story takes place starting on May 20, 2007: Evangeline never went to Cristian's studio and is not in a coma. Also, John's not involved with Marty. Other than that, it's canon.)

Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 16641
Read Count: 3410
Published: 28/06/08
Updated: 12/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Storm

No matter how many times I read this story, I love it.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 145]
Summary:

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The Young and the Restless Fic: Drucilla Winters has always put her family first, striving to be a faithful wife to her husband Neil and an attentive mother to her daughter Lily.  

But while her charmed life is the envy of many in Genoa City, Dru is haunted by the devastating loss of her first love, ruthless coporate raider Jack Abbott. Though desperate to save her strained marriage, she finds herself increasingly unable to stay away from the man that continues to haunt her dreams and whose heart she destroyed so completely.  

With one reckless choice, another web of secrets will be born and Drucilla will be forced to face the truth about her marriage, the real story of her past, and how she never truly recovered from the pain of losing Jack. 

The Sequel to Loving Dru.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Drucilla Winters, Lily "Little Dru" Winters, Olivia Barber
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Drucilla/Neil (The Young and the Restless)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: The Love Stories
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 33168
Read Count: 9794
Published: 01/07/08
Updated: 24/09/08


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

YESSS! Hammer those nails into the coffin of Neil and Dru's

marriage.  

Am I being too obvious about disliking Neil ? LOL



Author's Response: LOL.  Noooooo, not obvious at aaaaalllll.    Thansk for the review and the stars~!

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/08

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

LOL at Dru tossing the drink on sleazy Brad.  If he is not the perfect combo of golddigger and gigolo, I don't know what is.

Jack is a very determined man.  Seems like he's going to have Dru burn all her bridges if it means he can have her.  Hope he can pick up all the pieces.

 



Author's Response: Amen about Brad. The Gardener has always been to big for his overalls.  And very nice observation about Jack. He's very determined and has a one track mind.  Thanks for the review shocol.  Much appreciated.

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 28/08/08

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Alright, I admit it, I didn't hate Neil at the end.  When Dru needed someone, he did what no one else was willing to do.

However, Ashley was a straight bitch.

Glad everyone got their happy ending.  Well, except for Neil, LOL.   



Author's Response:

Hey shocol. Awww, so you softened towards Neil huh?  That was a goal of mind to show that there were no clear cut bad guys or good guys in this.  Just a bunch of people with good intentions that screwed up royally when it came to their lives somehow.

Except for Ashley. She's a parasite.  

Thanks for reading and reviewing! So glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

A Doctor Who/Supernatural Crossover: When Dr. Martha Jones hits a rough patch in her life (her fiancée's been stepping out on her and her confidence in her job performance is waning) she calls on her best friend, The Doctor, to sprint her away, losing herself in promises of far off galaxies and fantastic new worlds. It’s a trip she’s taken before. Only this time, she’s suddenly ripped away from the TARDIS and tossed into a strange car with an even stranger (though admittedly very attractive) man at the wheel, ranting about his missing brother and evil demons. Which was all very ridiculous, because everyone knew that demons weren’t real.

Were they?

Dean Winchester was having a pretty good night for once. He and his brother Sam had killed a nasty demon in record time, and he’d been settling in for an evening of cold beer and hot women. So when his brother disappeared inside some kind of bright light, to say he was irritated would definitely an understatement. He had no idea where Sam was, or how to find him. And now he had some crazy (though very hot) British chick yaking about aliens and time machines, like that stuff was real.

It’s not, is it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Horror, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66449
Read Count: 76932
Published: 01/07/08
Updated: 06/11/08


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

Okay, I've never watched an episode of Supernatural, but Dean is a real pice of work.

The writing for Martha and The Doctor is very in-character.  Like I can hear them in my head.

I always had a soft spot for this Master, he's funny and such a cutie.

And this passage just had me laughing out loud... 

“Did you just turn off my damn radio?” Dean repeated. Martha blew out a frustrated breath. 

“Yes, Dean. I touched your penis—I mean stereo.” 



Author's Response:

Hey Shocol!

Glad you liked this even though you're not into Supernatural, Dean's an awesome character, and he got even better as the show progressed. Writing Martha and the Doctor is awesome, but also kinda stressful, I always want to make sure I get those characters right.

And I'm a big fan of the Master (you could probably tell that), so I had to pu him in this.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving the review!

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 17/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 119]
Summary:

Todd Manning returns from a dangerous, yet unsuccessful mission to find his son only to discover that his BFF and attorney, Evangeline Williamson, has been cruelly attacked and then snatched away into seclusion by her protective family.  Go on a journey with him as he endeavors to track down the love of his life and faces head on LOVE, OBSESSION, LIES, BETRAYAL, DECEPTION, RACISM, REJECTION, HEARTBREAK, HEINOUS ACTS OF VIOLENCE AND YES, EVEN MURDER.  How can happily ever after be born from this?  Come see for yourself.

tangiebanner

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson, Other
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 44
Completed:No
Word count: 79449
Read Count: 14466
Published: 06/07/08
Updated: 02/05/09


Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 27

LOL at Layla sticking it to Todd and he doesn't even know it.

OK, who's going to blab the secret that Vange is awake?  I can't wait for the fallout.

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 22/09/08

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 28 pt. 1

Wow, didn't see that coming.  It's an awful thing to say, but giving the baby back to Michael breaks the stranglehold that Blair has on Todd.  At least he has a fighting chance now.

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 29/09/08

Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 30

Hmmm, Blair sticks it to Todd once again?  You'd think he would learn.

Good job with making baby Sam not Todd's.  One less obstacle that he and Van have to deal with. 

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 21/10/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

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Zoe Washburne is haunted by the death of her husband by a Revear harpoon. Her world is a waking nightmare filled with her pain and grief and the never ending images. Captain Malcolm Reynolds determines to fix the problem and gain his second back. Will Mal waken feelings long denied in the process? And what will that mean for the tentative progress Mal and Inara are making towards finding one another?

See story notes for disclaimers.

In case you aren't familiar, folks in the Firefly/Serenity 'verse speak a mix of English and Mandarin with many the common folk tendin' to use a colorful western dialect.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies, Music
Characters: Zoe Washburne
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Zoe/Wash (Firefly)
Warnings: None
Challenges: Song Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15644
Read Count: 25016
Published: 17/07/08
Updated: 31/08/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Whispers and Ghosts

Yay...a Firefly fic.  Great start, can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: I'm strugglin' to get some graphics to go with the story -- it looks naked next to everyone else's work. LOL!  I'll update soon, though.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Jake is a cynical Chicago bar owner just looking for some peace.  Josephine is a woman with a shady past just looking for a second chance.  When their two worlds collide during a city blackout each knows that the other presents a threat and yet they can't resist each other.  They along with several people from different walks of life converge on Jake's bar while chaos erupts around them.  Everyone is in for a night of secrets, revelations and lessons learned.  Who will survive the blackout with their heart intact?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14109
Read Count: 4110
Published: 21/07/08
Updated: 23/10/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oooh...good start.  You've got me hooked.  Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!  Update is soon coming I promise!

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 171]
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Enter into the world of political drama and intrigue as Payton Samuels takes on the job of Director of Media Relations for the campaign of the nation’s golden boy Senator Cameron Marshall. Millionaire playboy and heir to the international fashion conglomerate The House of Marceline, Jared Marcel seeks to win Payton’s affection. Experience the back door deals in Washington…knowing everyone has an angle and no one is what they seem.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 63247
Read Count: 10948
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 20/04/09


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 "Trouble is Calling"

Hee Hee, I had to giggle over these descriptions, so appropriate...

'Parasite Hilton, Lindsay Blowan or Kim Assdarsian'

Seems like there are lots of juicy secrets to come.

And Grace is intriguing, I've always wondered what politicians' wives are really thinking when these sex scandals blow up. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review Shocol. It is so ironic what is going on with John Edwards admitting to an affair I think about his wife and what she is going through. There is a long history between Ethan and Grace that you will get to understand why she stood there. I hope you enjoy my next update.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/08/08

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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:  

Anyone who thinks controlling people is a science is dead wrong.  It's an art.~ Jim Profit

 

 

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television, Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2729
Read Count: 2350
Published: 12/08/08
Updated: 12/08/08


Title: Chapter 1: Alice

Love it.  I never saw the TV series so all I can hear in my head is James Spader's voice as Mr. Profit.  

Author's Response:

James Spader works too, he was awesome in that movie. I'm glad you liked this though, even if you haven't seen the show.

Thanks so much for reading and the review!

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/08/08

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Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5022
Read Count: 49844
Published: 27/08/08
Updated: 28/07/16


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is hilarious!

Mr. Ki is a rude little bastard.  And OMG, his mother is a trip.  

Serena seems like such a sweet girl, much too good for Mr. Ki.  Hopefully they'll bring out the best in each other. 

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 28/08/08

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Hwa-Sung is an out of control pop star whose scandals have become too much for his manager to bear. In comes Darien, A tough image consultant that is hired by Hwa-Sung's manager as a bodyguard to show Hwa-Sung who's boss. But because Hwa-Sung doesn't respect woman Darien has to pretend to be a man. Will Hwa-Sung's innate ability to sniff out attractive woman blow her cover?

 

Beta-ed by greatodinsraven



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 14656
Read Count: 2334
Published: 19/09/08
Updated: 19/09/08


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ha, ha!  Darien's got just as many shenanigans going on as Hwa-Sung.  Why do I have the feeling that Ji-Hwan is his brother?

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 152]
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One Life to Live 

 

Evangeline Williamson is a brilliant attorney with a pragmatic approach to life and who always tried to do the right thing when it came to her clients and her job.  But it all come crashing down after her most notorious client, Todd Manning, is found guilty and later exonerated of a crime he didn’t commit. Her career and reputation gasping at death’s door, Evangeline accepts Todd’s offer to become chief counsel for Buchanan Enterprises, a company he’s recently acquired through a hostile takeover.  

The pay is substantial and the perks keep coming.  But there’s no client more demanding than Todd Manning and two years later Evangeline has had enough of living his chaotic life instead of her own. She tells him as much and gives him two weeks notice to find a replacement, forcing Todd to realize just how desperate he is to keep her in his life—not only as his attorney but as the woman who’s stolen his heart.



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Categories: Daytime Television, Movies, All My Children, One Life to Live, The Young and the Restless
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Kerri Reynolds, Lily Winters
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15412
Read Count: 15937
Published: 23/12/08
Updated: 14/05/09


Title: Chapter 2: One

Aww, you're going to make me pull out my VHS tape and watch this movie again.

Whew!  Thank goodness Van didn't have sex with Ryan Lavery.  Everytime I see him onscreen, I just want to stamp VACANCY across his forehead.  He's definitely not one to waste the goodies on.

Anyway, it's good to see a Tangie comedy.  anxiously awaiting your next update. 



Author's Response: Hey shocol. So glad you like it.  And Ryan is  um...useful. :-)  And I thought it was time for Tangie-lite. Update coming soon.

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 24/12/08

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Summary:

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Two people meet, not an unusual story but...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2404
Read Count: 1689
Published: 05/07/09
Updated: 05/07/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*clapping*  Funny, sexy, and honest.

Author's Response: Took four months to write and polish.  So your reading and enjoying is much appreciated.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

 

 

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A part of the Kerrington & Associates series. Donovan Williams is a rookie in the Miami Dolphins Football Organization. He's lonely and praying for love to find him. Kendra Davis is a rookie in some sorts as well to the Dolphins organization as an athletic trainer.  Will she and Donovan become fast friends and later lovers?

Another lovely banner created by the Magnificent Minx!!! Thanks!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36599
Read Count: 47431
Published: 04/10/09
Updated: 14/03/10


Title: Chapter 9: Challenges

I'm not liking David, not liking Garrett, and most importantly I'm not liking Donovan either.  I think he could ease up on pushing so hard and be a little more respectful of Kendra's career aspirations.  She's young, just starting out, and has a long career ahead of her.  Any mess that goes down, she will be the first one to go, not David, not Garrett, and not Donovan.  I think for Kendra's sake he could make more of an effort to keep thing's low key.  And that testosterone-filled challenge with Garrett, not cool.

Author's Response: thanks for your review. Sorry you don't like any of this! Its how its coming out of my head. I appreciate your review and will definitely take some of your suggestions to heart.

Reviewer: shocol Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/09

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Feels Like Christmas

A Belated Christmas gift for Megumi



Table of Contents
Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 14873
Read Count: 2205
Published: 15/01/10
Updated: 10/02/10


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start.

I always like reading about Evangeline and the men of Llanview.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much shocol for posting a review!

No matter how they tried to dog her on OLTL she always showed great class on that soap. There are only a few times when someone comes along that has chemistry with everyone on the show. OLTL were such idiots for letting her go :(

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 21/01/10

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary: Martha Jones' guilty heart keeps her from moving on with love...Can someone get through to her, or is she destined to be alone.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3419
Read Count: 1283
Published: 16/01/10
Updated: 22/01/10


Title: Chapter 1: In Which Mickey Smith lets go

Aww... I love Mickey, but he and Martha are just not compatible.  Bring on The Doctor, although he doesn't deserve her.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: shocol Signed
Date: 21/01/10